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1、【MeiWei_81-优质适用文档】建议信(1)-阐释原因；提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。注意：1.词数不少于120；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:食堂canteenDearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen._Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysugg
2、estions.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua作文范文：DearPrincipal,Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen.The problems are as follows.Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.M
3、eanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.As far as Im concerned, measures are supposed to be taken toimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen. First of all, its suggested that thepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.In addition, its better toopenmore
4、servicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!需注意的词汇、表达：1. deliciouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.可口的)cook(n.厨师)cooker(n.炊具)price价格2. lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格3. atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格4. varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品5. Foronething,.Foranother,6. makesb
5、(not)dosth7. wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime8. Thekindsoffoodarefew.表达食堂出现的问题：9. Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscantaffordthem.10. Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcantsatisfyourneeds.11. Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.
6、12. Thefoodinthecanteendoesnttastegood./ nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisntgood. 13. Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14. Itsawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.15. Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16. Inthelongrun,itsbadforourhea
7、lthandstudy.17. Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议：18. Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19. Ithinkitsnecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.20. Itshightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Soitshightimeforustotakemeasures21. Tosolvetheproblem
8、s,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure(形象)andimprovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudentsneeds.22. Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23. Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedntwaitsolong.24. AsfarasImconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality
9、.Whatsmore,differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.25. Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.建议模板：Dear.,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto.(引出话题).Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.建议句
10、型积累：1. Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemosteffectiveones.2. Idliketomakesomesuggestionson.3. Itsofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.Itsnecessaryforsbtodosth4. Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif.5. Itcontributes/helpsalotif6. Isuggestthat./Mysuggest
11、ionisthatItssuggested/advised/recommendedthat7. Youdbetterdosth./WedbetterdosthItsbettertodosth8. MeasuresaresupposedtobetakentodosthWearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth9. Itshightimethatsbdidsth./Itshightimeforsbtodosth建议信(2)-阐释原因；提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫SadMother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和
12、要求，用英语给这位家长回复。Imthemotherofafourteen-year-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.Theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandEnglish.WhatshouldIdo?写作要点：1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3.提出至少两条建议要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。Hi，SadMother，Ihavelearnedthat_作文范文：Hi,SadMother,I have learned thatyourdaughtertoldliestoyou.Asapeerofyourdaughter,Ithinkthe reasons are as follows.To begin with,maybethereasonwhyyourdaughtertoldalieisthatyouaretoostrictwithherandsheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides
