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1、 2016 高考英语书面表达评析假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photograph club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1.主题：环境保护; 2. 展览时间； 3. 投稿邮箱：注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。一、 试题分析 本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）举办的国际中学摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点如下：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2. 展览时间6月15日
2、，持续三周；3. 知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4. 投稿邮箱：在写作时，注意书信的格式以及串联过渡用语；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，并在力所能及的范围之内使用复合句或者谚语，增加获得高分的可能性。二、 写作指导 (如何烹饪一道大菜)秘笈一：精选准确的词汇（根据评审老师的口味精心挑选上等的优质食材）国际 _ 展览 _ _作品 _ 环境保护 _ _主题 _ 秘笈二：打造精美的句式 (好的菜肴讲究色香味型，好的大厨须掌握好火候，油温以及营养搭配)开头第一段：1. Im delighted to tell you that t
3、he International Photo Show held y my schools photography club is around the corner. 2. Our school photography club will hold an International High School Photography Show, which makes me very happy.3. Ill tell you something interesting that our school photography club will hold an International Hig
4、h School Photography Show. 4. Not until the next Friday will we hold this exhibition.第二段：1. Having been exposed to photography for many years, I believe youll be interested in this photography show. 2. On the one hand, the show can make people reflect on their own actions. On the other hand, we can
5、learn more about the skills of photography. 3. With the development of society, more and more people become aware of the importance of environment. So there is no doubt that the exhibition is very important. Im fully convinced that it will raise public awareness of environmental protection. 4. Knowi
6、ng that you are aimed at being a professional photographer, I bring a good news to you. 5. As we know, with the development of industry, the environment is becoming worse and worse. We want to hold this activity to make people aware of environmental problems.6. As we all know, the problem of environ
7、ment is the inevitable(不可避免的) result of social development.7. It is such a serious social problem that we should pay more attention to it.8. It goes without saying that you are interested in taking photos.9. First，the key idea is protecting the environment, which means that there is a wide range of
8、choices open to you about it.10. What I really hope is that you can offer your photos to this show.9. My gratitude will be beyond description if you offer some photos about this show.10. What you should do can be listed as follows. 秘笈三：架设错落有致的结构 (菜品视觉美可使食者舌底生津，增加味觉感受；味觉感受好，反过来更深化食者的审美感受，所以摆盘是大厨的必杀技)
9、 第一层次（首先）First，Firstly，In the first place, Fist of all, To begin with, For one thing第二层次 (其次) Second, Secondly, In the second place, Next, Then, For another第三层次 (第三点) Third, Thirdly, Besides, In addition, Furthermore, Whats more important, Moreover最后一点 At last, Finally, In the last place, Last but n
10、ot the least三、 范文1Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any student who is interested in is welcome to participate. I know you take g
11、ood pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme last time you visited our school. Opportunitiesaregiven tothose whoareprepared. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can
12、 send your photos to Hope to hear from you soon.范文2Dear Peter,There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. So our photography club prepare to hold an international photography exhibition next month which is aimed to raise peoples awareness of protecting environment.As t
13、here is lack of pictures, I hope you can provide some high quality photos. You can send them to intlphotoshow .Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely Li Hua 范文3Dear Peter,The International Photography Exhibition about protecting environmen
14、t will be held in our school.Recently, some people ignore the fact that our earth is getting worse and worse. Not only did they cut down plenty of trees, but also they threw litters here and there. We attached great importance to environmental problems. And this is why we held the exhibition.I would appreciate it if you can provide some photos for me. We will hold the exhibition next Monday, so please send the photos to intlphotoshow as soon as possible.Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, LiHua
