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1、第十五讲彰显能力的(半)开放式作文 学生用书P327 (2016全国卷乙)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题(半)开放作文的审题最为关键，审好题相当于成功了一半。审题时应做到三定：定体裁；定人称；定时态。如本文为书信类应用文求助信；以第一人称为主；时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。谋篇(半)开放作文的关键是定主题，然后根据主题列出要点和提纲。对于命题式(半)开放作文，首先准确理解题目意思，抓住题中的
2、关键词，然后结合实际生活组织材料。对于图画式(半)开放作文，要首先准确描述图画的内容，其次对其寓意深层解读，最后结合实际生活进行联想，发表看法。如本文为命题式(半)开放作文，首先要点明写信的目的；然后说明做兼职的好处；最后请外教修改所附材料的文字和格式。 满分作文Dear Ms Jenkins，Im writing to ask you for help. Im applying for a parttime job in an overseasfunded corporation. I think itll be a new challenge to me. Moreover, by doi
3、ng the parttime job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to the development and changes of society.Ive already written the application and resume. But Im afraid that there are some mistakes about the words and format. So I have no choice but to bother you to correct my mista
4、kes in the material I attach to the letter. Id be very grateful if you could do me a favor.Sincerely yours，Li Hua满分缘由1.结构布局本文只给了信件的大致内容，具体的细节需要考生自己发挥，因此它是一篇半开放性的作文。本文可分为两段：第一段：写信的目的和做兼职的好处；第二段：请外教修改所附材料的文字和格式。2.亮点词汇ask sb. for help; apply for; a parttime job; an overseasfunded corporation; challenge
5、; adapt to; have no choice but to do sth.; attach to; do sb. a favor3.亮点句式第句包含so that引导的目的状语从句；第句包含省略了that的定语从句；第句包含if引导的条件状语从句。1用其他表示递进关系的过渡性词语改写句：(1)Whats_more,_doing_the_parttime_job_can_let_me_gain_some_precious_experience_and_help_me_better_adapt_to_the_development_and_changes_of_society.(2)Bes
6、ides,_I_can_obtain_some_precious_experience_from_the_parttime_job,_which_also_makes_me_better_adapt_to_the_development_and_changes_of_society.2用cant help but do sth.改写句：So_I_cant_help_but_bother_you_to_modify_my_material_attached_to_my_letter.3用高级词汇appreciate改写句：Id_appreciate_it_if_you_could_do_me_a
7、_favor.(2017山东济南3月模拟) 假设你是李华，你收到了英国朋友Katie发来的电子邮件，请根据以下邮件内容进行回复。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_One possible version：Dear Katie，Im glad to have received your letter. What you have mentioned in the letter is normal for a foreigner. Dont worry about it too much.Here is my suggestion. As we all know, i
8、t is a good idea to be exposed to the real language environment. Try to communicate with the natives in simple Chinese as much as possible, which will help you practice it and have a good command of it gradually. Meanwhile you will become more and more confident. As the saying goes, practice is perf
9、ect. Watching TV programs and listening to Chinese songs also do good to your pronunciation. Whats more, reading newspapers and simple novels will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. Above is what I want to share with you and I hope they will be of some help to you.With all my best regards
10、. Yours sincerely，Li Hua(2017江西九江市二模)你校组织了一个“我喜爱的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从以下两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1该谚语的含义；2体现该谚语含义的个人经历。No pains, no gains.Failure is the mother of success.注意：1.词数 100左右；2文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。参考词汇：谚语proverb_Possible version 1：No Pains, No Gains“No pains, no gains” is my favourite proverb, w
11、hich means success doesnt come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all.I failed in the last term. So discouraged was I that I didnt want to do anything. Later I found things got even worse because I got tired of exercises. Nevertheless, other students were making every effort to study. Only by then did I realize I was wrong and that success would not wait for me. So I began t
