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1、模板一：对立观点作文（今年的四级写作，极可能出的题型）按照金凌虹老师讲课思路，作文还是写作3段共9句话；详细内容，请参见如下：第一段：陈述现状段（小虹有话：文章的第1、2句；主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、趋势；共有5种开篇写法，没有固定的标准选哪种，选择一种容易下手的去写，我已经将相关话题都举出来了）文章第一句话：1）第一句的第一种写法：就某事，人们又热烈讨论There is a heated discussion whether（通常用在选择性话题：是否年级小出国，是否有必要参加）they should live off campus or live together withother r
2、oommates.(住在校外，还是和同学共住)students should be asked to grade their teacher （是否学生应该要求给老师打分）students should take a part-time job in school（是否学生在校期间应该找兼职）2）第一句的第二种写法：某事引发人们关注 （不用写事情的经过，用一个词儿代替事情过程）Recently，the problem of “”has aroused wide concern among the publicCurrently，he phenomenon of drunken driving
3、has arouse wide concern among the public（酒后驾驶）Currently，the frequent job-hopping of graduates has aroused wide concern among the public.（跳槽）Currently，the problemof “food safety” has aroused wide concern among the public. （食品安全）3）第一句的第三种写法：社会现象变成某个“词”（这种写法最大的魅力也是，将事件过程压缩成一个词！）The newly-coined word/ph
4、rase“”may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age.（“”中填进的词有：nude picture scandal艳照门丑闻； water shortage缺水；online education网络教育；fake diplomas假证书；craze for talent shows 选秀狂热 ）4）第一句的第四种写法：社会趋势（一般都写在“有越来越多的人干什么去了”这样的社会现状）There is a growing tendency nowadays thatgraduates in mounting n
5、umbers can hardly find an ideal job （就业难）people in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for volunteer works/ various talent shows（选秀热）students in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for students leaders selection （竞选班干部热）people in mounting numbers participate in the test for national civil serv
6、ants. （公务员热）undergraduates in growing numbers take the postgraduate entrance examination （考研热）people in mounting numbers try their luck to buylottery tickets（买彩票热）people in mounting numbers use credit card.（信用卡热）注：people in mounting numbers 都表示“越来越多的人”，切忌写：more and more people，找死！5）第一句的第五种写法：某个现象人尽皆
7、知 （一般写比较大的，比较严重的社会问题）No one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon thatthat goods in mountingnumbers are wrapped in flaring boxes or bags （过度包装问题）that there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who swarm into big cities.（农工进城）The economy has been developing at a considerably
8、high speed at the expense of living environment.（经济发展以牺牲环境为代价）文章第二句话：（小虹有话：陈述正反观点；你只要说，针对某个事情，人们看法存在不一样就行，不要再第一段就开始具体论述双方的观点各是什么！）Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue ？Definitely not，actually，opinions vary from person to person.第二段：对立观点论述段（小虹有话：文章的第3,4,5,6四句话，都写在第二段；这是字数最多，内容最丰满的一段，
9、称为“猪肚”）文章第三句话：（提出正方观点，比如说他支持什么；总体来说，有两种表示支持的说法）Some maintain that ( 表示“认为”的单词，打死都不写“think”；maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以写 )1） 某物是有好处的：something is beneficial to sth. （练习：跳槽对学生有利）2) 某物优点缺点：The merits of sth. far outweigh its demerits.（练习：用手机的优点缺点）文章第四句话：( 上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个；个数的标准是字数达标
10、)Firstly,secondly,last but not least,. （万能理由：这个只能在新东方小虹的六级写作课堂听啦！）文章第五句话：( 既是正反对立观点作文，第三句提出正方观点，那么这句当然要提出对立观点啦！ )However，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that （反方观点），1) 某物是有坏处：something is detrimental to sth.2) 某物缺点优点： The demerits of sth. far outweigh itsmerits. （merits代替advantages）文章第六
11、句话：( 上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个；个数的标准是字数达标 )For one thing， for another,（万能理由：这个只能在新东方小虹的六级写作课堂听啦！）第三段：个人观点段（文章的第7,8,9句；四六级作文，包括考研作文，都要求写essay-议论文，短评，所以，写了上述对立观点的目的，其实就是为了最后提出自己的观点！）文章第七句话：To my way of thinking， From my perspective, + 个人观点句（参见第三、五）.文章第八句话：( 上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个；
12、个数的标准是字数达标 ) In the first place， in the second place,（万能理由）文章第九句话：( 再次重申自己的观点，和第七句话正好构成“总分总结构”)Given all the factors I have outlined，I strongly commit to the notion that（观点句）或者是：Weighing thepros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the idea that微博的出现 1、近年来微博越来越流行，许多人利用博客来表达心声、交流想
13、法2、微博流行的原因3、目前的微博中可能存在的问题流行的原因 只是为了好玩，随大流Many people use microblog just for fun or follow the general trend.省时便利Microblog enables people to convey their emotions and individual thoughts more conveniently.微博的危害 万能理由：浪费时间，影响学习Being addicted to microblog is nothing but a waste of time容易受到别人的思想的影响，失去独立思
14、考的能力Being susceptible to others idea easily，most people tend to lose the ability of thinking independenttly.出国留学的好处 1. 出国留学有很多好处2. 出国留学也会遇到很多难题3. 你的选择出国留学的好处：接触到全新的想法和趋势，增加知识，拓宽视野Being exposed to entirely new ideas and trends，they can enrich their knowledge and expand their horizons.在国外生活，更快地掌握外遇by
15、living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home.减少对父母的依靠A great gift a parent can give is to let a child spread his /her wings and be independentReduce their dependence on their parents出国留学遇到的困难：语言难，沟通难learning a foreign language and communicating smoothly with the local people is far from an easy thing at the outset for most people.适应当地饮食，习俗，思想和气候
