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1、书 面 表 达 之 赢取高分策略,NMET书面表达评分原则,1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。,第五档： 2025分 第四档： 1520分 第三档： 1015分 第二档： 5 10分 第一档： 0 5分,语言地道，规范,覆盖所有内容要点,2、主要内容： 内容要点； 词汇和语法的数量和准确性； 上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。,4、词数少于100和多于140的，从总分中减去2分。,5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,Which composi
2、tion feels more attractive, why?,书面表达如何写？,五个步骤,1、审题,题材、人称、时态、要点,2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。,3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。,4 联句成文：,注意：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾 语篇衔接,5、检查修改，规范抄写,给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性 2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. Ending 小结；呼应主题,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
3、,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a
4、failure.,The plan turned out to be a failure.,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,一、怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him .,A good idea occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free for the students there.,6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorr
5、ow. 7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. 9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. 10.You can find my house easily.,She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.,At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.,The more
6、 he spoke, the more excited he felt.,Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.,Youll have no trouble finding my house.,感叹句 How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! 2. 强调句 It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.,二、使用丰富的句式：,
7、利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。,3、 倒装句 Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. 4、 省略句 They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary. 5、 with短语 I saw a young lady walking slowly in the str
8、eet with a handbag in her hand.,6、 定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library. 7、 各种名词性从句 Thats what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help at pr
9、esent.,8、 各种状语从句 Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more
10、 and more heavily.,Practice,1. 改变时态,The bell is ringing now. (一般),2. 改变语态,People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般),There goes the bell. (高级),It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级),3. 使用不定式,4. 使用过去分词,He is so kind that he can help me. (一般),He is so kind to help me. (高级),She w
11、alked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般),Followed by many students, she . (高级),Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般),Once seen, it can . (高级),5. 使用v-ing形式,When he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一般),If the weather permits, Ill come tomorrow. (一般),On his arriving/ arr
12、ival, please give. (高级),Weather permitting, Ill come tomorrow. (高级),Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般),Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils. (高级),It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up. (一般),I happened to have met him. (一般),6. 使用名词性从句,The fact tha
13、t he didnt turn up disappointed everybody. (高级),It happened that I had met him. (高级),To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (一般),What surprised him is that the girl. (高级),7. 使用状语从句,I wont believe what he says. (一般),If you come back before six oclock, you can go out. (一般),The meal was
14、 very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (一般),No matter what he says, I wont believe. (高级),You can go out on condition that you come back before. (高级),The meal was so nice that we all. (高级),8. 使用定语从句,The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般),The girl whose composition was
15、well written was spoken highly of. (高级),I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. (一般),The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English. (高级),9. 使用虚拟语气,The ship didnt sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一般),I wasnt invited to the
16、party, so I didnt attend it. (一般),If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it. (高级),But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk. (高级),10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句,Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. (一般),It was not until 1920 that regular radio. (高级),Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. (高级),Though Im weak, I will make the effort. (一般),How glad we were to see the crops and.! (高级),We were glad to see the c
