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1、7A版优质实用文档(一)Abouthalfoftheinfantandmaternaldeathsindevelopingcountriescouldbeavoidedifwomenhadusedfamilyplanningmethodstopreventhighrisk_1_pregnancies,accordingtoareportpublishedrecentlybytheJohnsHopking_2_University.Thereportindicatesthat5.6millioninfantdeathsand2,000,000maternalDeathscouldbepreven
2、tedthisyearifwomenchosetohavetheirchildren_3_withinthesafestyearswithadequateintervalsbetweenbirthsandlimitedtheir_4_familiestomoderatesize.Thisamountstoabouthalfofthe9.8millioninfantand370.000maternaldeathsindevelopingcountries,eGcludingChina,estimatedforthisyearby_5_theUnitedNationsChildrensFundan
3、dtheUSCentersforDiseaseControlrespectively.ChinawaseGcludedbecauseveryfewbirthsoccurinthehigh_6_riskcategories.Thereportsaysthatevidencefromaroundtheworldshowstheriskof_7_maternalorinfantillnessanddeathisthehighestinfourspecifictypesof_8_pregnancy;pregnanciesbeforethemotheris18yearsold;thoseafterthe
4、_9_motheris35yearsold;pregnanciesafterfourbirths;andthoselessthan_10_twoyearsapart.1将hadused改为used。因为此句是虚拟语气，表示与现在事实相反，故条件从句中应使用一般过去时。例如：Manywouldbewiseiftheydidnotthinkthemselveswise.许多人原本会成为聪明人如果他们不自以为聪明的话。2将publishing改为publishedreport和publish时逻辑动宾关系，故应使用publish的过去分词短语来修饰report。例如：Anydiscoverythat
5、wemaymake,howeversmall,willremainacquiredknowledge.任何可能的发现，不管多么微不足道，都将成为知识宝库中的一部分。3将theirs改为their4将among改为between在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间，故用between。5将过去分词eGcluded改为介词eGcluding。eGcluding意为“不包括”6将respectably改为respectivelyrespectively意为“分别地”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意为“可敬的，值得尊敬地”。7将evidences改为evidence。evidence是不可数名
6、词。2157A版优质实用文档8将ill改为illness。9将year改为years。10将lesser改为less英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(二)“Home,sweethome”isaphrasethateGpressanessentialattitudeintheUnitedStates.Whethertherealityoflifeinthefamilyhouseissweetornotsweet,thecherishedidealofhome_1_hasgreatimportanceformanypeople.ThisidealisavitalpartoftheAmericand
7、ream.Thisdream,dramatizedinthehistoryofnineteenthcenturyEuropeansettlersofAmericanWest,wastofindapieceofland,buildahouse_2_foronesfamily,andstartafarm.Thesesmallhouseholdswere_3_portraitsofindependence:theentirefamily-mother,father,children,evengrandparents-liveinasmallhouseandworktogetherto_4_suppo
8、rteachother.Everyoneunderstoodthelife-and-deathimportance_5_offamilycooperationandhardwork.AlthoughmostpeopleintheUnitedStatesnolongerliveonfarms,buttheidealofhomeownership_6_isjustasstronginthetwentiethcenturyasitwasinthenineteenth.WhenU.SsoldierscamehomeafterWorldWar,foreGample,_7_theydreamedofbuy
9、inghousesandstartingfamilies.Andtherewas_8_atremendousboominhomebuilding.Thenewhouses,typicallyinthesuburbs,wereoftensmallandmoreorlessidentical,buttheysatisfied_9_adeepneed.Manyregardedthesingle-familyhouseasthebasisoftheir_10_wayoflife.1将no改为not2将place改为landplace是可数名词，作“地方”讲，而land意为“土地，田地”是不可数名词。例
10、如：Solitudeisagoodplacetovisitbutapoorplacetostay.当你偶尔光顾时，独处是一个美妙的境地，但是如果久留，它却是一个糟糕的地方。Thereisavacantpieceoflandnearthehouse;wecanbuildthere.3将started改为startstart应使用不定式，以和前面的find，build一致。4将working改为work。work应该用第三人称复数，和live一致。另外，family在这里作“家人”讲，是复数。5将anyone改为everyone这里是要用everyone指每个人，而不是要用anyone泛指。6将b
11、ut删除7将before改为after根据上下文判断，这里要表达的是二战之后。8将But改为And根据语意，这里要表达的是递进关系，而不是转折关系。例如：WhenIdogood,Ifeelgood.WhenIdobad,Ifeelbad.Andthatsmyreligion.当我行善事，我感到坦然；当我行恶时，我感到内疚。这就是我的人生之道。9将it改为they10在housethe中间加入介词asregardas作“把当作”讲。英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(三)Weliveinasocietywherethereisalotoftalkaboutscience,butIwouldsay_
12、1_thattherearenot5percentofthepeoplewhoareequippedwithschool,includingcollege,tounderstandscientificreasoning.Wearemoreignorantofsciencethanpeople_2_withcomparableeducationinWesternEurope.Therearealotofkidswhoknoweverythingaboutcomputershowtobuildthem,howtotakethemapart,andhowtowriteprogramsforgames
13、.Butifyouask_3_themtoeGplainabouttheprinciplesofphysicsthathavegoneintocreatingthe_4_computer,theydonthavefaintestidea._5_Thefailuretounderstandscienceleadstosuchthingsastheneglectofhuman_6_creativepower.Italsogivesrisetoblurringofthedistinctionbetweenscienceand_7_technology.Lotsofpeopledontdistingu
14、ishbetweenthetwo.Scienceistheproductionof_8_newknowledgethatcanbeappliedornot,andtechnologyistheapplicationofknowledgetotheproductionofsomeproducts,machineryorthelike.Thetwoarereallydifferent,andpeoplewhohavethefacultyforoneveryseldomhaveafacultyfortheother._9_Scienceinitselfisharmless,moreorless.Bu
15、tassoonasitcanprovidetechnology,itsnotnecessarilyharmless.Nosocietyhasyetlearnedtoforecasttheconsequencesof_10_newtechnology,whichcanbeenormous.1.在which前加in，或将which改为where在这里which引导限制性从句，修饰先行词thesociety。inwhich在从句中作状语，当然也可以用关系副词where引导定语从句，并在从句中作状语，例如：Moneyisabottomlesssea,inwhichhonor,conscience,andtruthmaybedrowned.2.将as改为than3.将So改为But或者However或者Neverthe
