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1、云浮二模作文分析,Survey on electronic dictionary Recently students of our school have made a survey of “Views on electronic dictionary”. The students who we interviewed have some different views. About 60% of the students like it. They say an electronic dictionary has a large vocabulary and its easy to carr
2、y and use it. Besides, some types of electronic dictionary have True-voice, so they can imitate the pronunciation. However, in the eyes of about 30% students, an electronic dictionary only gives them some main meanings of words and it doesnt tell how to use them. Whats more, some students spend much
3、 time playing games on it, which has a bad effect on their study.,A survey about whether classification dustbins should be brought into school has carried out in our school by students union.,60% of the students agreed it for the reasons that it helps recycle things and do good to students to form t
4、he good habit of classifying rubbish.,广州一模 任务型写作 Version 1,Version 1 In his speech Li Hua spoke of an overseas Chinese student who couldnt find a job because of his dishonesty. The story shows us that honesty really is the best policy. (31) After reading this speech, I felt really sorry for the stud
5、ent who had thrown away his years of hard work, great academic achievements and a promising future just for some short-term benefits. Now, he knows better than anyone that dishonesty costs dearly.昂贵的 (41),My classmate Wang Tao once made a similar mistake. During a math quiz, he was having trouble wo
6、rking out a problem. When the teacher looked away, he peeked and copied the answer from his classmate. He was glad that he had a high mark in the quiz. But when he came across a similar question in the final exam, he didnt know how to solve it and eventually failed the test. peek 窥视 (71) While disho
7、nesty helped him in the short term during the quiz, it hurt him in the long term because he didnt revise that type of problem for the final exam. I shall always remember this lesson and be an honest person. (41),字数要求,第一段概要 30-40 第二段：读后感 40-60字 第三段：例子50-80字 第四段：自己的观点20-40字 第五段： 全文150-170字左右,概要段落 说明狗跑
8、来跑去，犹豫不决，结果没东西吃 作者的观点,The dog changed its mind frequently on its way to a castle when hearing another castles trumpet trmpt , so he finally got nothing to eat. It tells us that we should cherish what we have now. A hungry dog ran between two castles for food to eat, but he got nothing in the end bec
9、ause of his hesitation. It tells us that we should be satisfied/content with what we own in our life.,读后感部分,From my point of view, people always search for a better one again and again even they have a good one already. Just as the saying goes, “ the grass is always greener on the other side of the
10、fence.” we always ignore what we have got and only when we lose them, did we realize that they are valuable and important.,Many people ignore what they have, longing for what they dont own. If a person only focuses on things others have but pay little attention to what he has, it is easy for them to
11、 lose. In my opinion, we should be satisfied with what we have. Otherwise, we will get nothing in the end like the dog. we should not give up what we have got to pursuit something seems to be better we have without carful consideration.,举例子,三心两意， 犹豫不决，结果一无所得 目前已经拥有，还想得到更多，结果一无所得 上面结果的产生都来自人的内因：贪心 比如：buy clothes between shops Hesitation between the review of maths or English Find a better job as a graduate,
