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1、上大学要父母陪吗？,综合训练六（2010省质检）,近年来，在大学新生入学时，媒体对“父母护送子女上学”的现象作了一些报道，引发了许多讨论，赞同和不赞同的声音都有。假如某英语报记者对你进行采访，征求你对此现象的看法，请你根据下表提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达自己的观点，并说明理由。 注意： 1只能选择写一种观点，赞同或不赞同；除提示外还可适当增加你认为重要的理由； 2短文开头己分别给出，请把所选的开头句子抄写到答题卡上，然后接着写。开头句子不计入总词数； 3词数：120左右,审题,1.半开放试题，为考生提供了较为广阔的自由发挥的空间，有区分度。 2. 讨论的是要不要送学生上大学的问题，要求学生选择
2、一个观点来写，对审题能力有一定的要求。,书面表达一定要注意审题，行文做到逻辑清楚、衔接自然、表达准确、书写工整，在结尾部分一定要有结束语，不能忽视这个细节,对不同层次的学生作不同的要求，如中等及以下的学生尽量用基本的、简单的句式和词汇来表达所写内容，力争不出现语病和拼写错误；而中上学生则可要求他们适当运用一些高级词汇、复杂句式，以提高写作亮点和档次； 准确！,部分学生审题不准确，出现两种观点都写或者是前后观点不一致。 文章层次感不强，没用连接词，过渡不自然。 书写不规范，大小写滥用，标点符号使用不当，字迹潦草，画痕及涂改太多。 要点遗漏频繁，特别是后面的个人态度及理由；重复表述要点，缺少对观点
3、的拓展。 运用词性混乱，如：independence与independent混乱使用，lack 的词性使用混乱。 单词拼写错误率很高（experience） 人称代词混用,存在问题,Its common that we students are lack of the experiment which we need. Its common that we students lack the experience we need. lack v. lack sth. n. a / the lack of sth 2. Freshmans are difficult to be familiar
4、 with the new surrounding. Its difficult for freshmen to be familiar with the new surroundings.,错误：,3. Parents will also have a long time cant meet with us. (汉语式英语) It will be a long time before parents and we meet again. 4. Its no denying that parents are very cared for their children. Theres no de
5、nying that parenst care for their children very much. 5.Independent life ability to any adult is essential.,6. In a word, parents accompany with their children to college is normal and understandable.,Possible versions,I think its normal and understandable for parents to accompany their children to
6、college. Firstly, most students have never stayed far away from home until they are admitted to universities. Since this is the first time for them to travel to college, they need their parents company and help.Secondly, being the only child in the family, they lack social experience, so their paren
7、ts will not feel relieved unless they accompany them to college.,Thirdly, parents can take the opportunity to travel with their children, relaxing and enjoying sightseeing on the journey. Last but not least, parents can help their children to get used to the college environment sooner and make a goo
8、d start of their college life. As far as I am concerned, I would be happy if my parents accompany me to my university.,I dont think its necessary for parents to accompany their children to college. We have grown up and can look after ourselves without parents help. As far as I am concerned, I can ma
9、nage to travel alone to college. I may also invite some other students as companions if possible. Im sure by relying on myself I can train myself to be more independent and gain more social experience. I believe the service for freshmen must be good enough and well organized. I can fit in with the n
10、ew environment,and make friends soon. Whats more, its convenient for me to keep in touch with my family by phone or through the Internet whenever and wherever I need. If my parents want to accompany me to college, Ill certainly try to persuade them to not to go.,I dont think its necessary for parent
11、s to accompany their children to college. Its self-evident that all the college students are adults. It is unnecessary for students to go to college with parents. Its a good chance for students to obtain/ gain / acquire some social experience. All of the students must face the challenges of society
12、in the future. So students must learn to be independent, the importance of which cannot be over emphasized.,No one can deny that all of the parents who accompany their children to college love their children deeply. Its the first time that the children have left home for so long.Its normal that some
13、 parents can not feel relieved. But on the other hand, its a good chance to contribute to the development of children. All in all, every children is like a flower. Bringing up the flowers in a safe environment is not enough. Only if the flowers go through difficulties and storms can the flowers shin
14、e the golden light.,I dont think its necessary for parents to accompany their children to college. First of all, it cant be over-emphasized that the freshmen are not little kids anymore! As grown-ups, going to the college shouldnt be a problem which needs solving by the whole family. Whats more, its
15、 a precious chance to acquire social experience, which will enrich our knowledge, broaden our mind, strengthen our character.,If accompanied by parents, it may result in a great pity that we lose the chance. Additionally, going to the college independently has the freshmen deal with their stuff by t
16、hemselves, which strengthen their ability. Going out alone will teach the freshmen many lessons which cant be learnt in class.,Above all, accompanying children to college is definitely unnecessary. In a way, it does more Harm than good. Parents should feel relieved and be confident of their children, believing that this is a fabulous chance to let their children put whats on books into practice.,
