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1、English Writing and Model Essays Li Yong Fang,Stationary for This Course,A Notebook for Making Notes in Class; An Exercise Book for Doing Some Writing Exercises after Class. Notes: We have no textbook for this course, so we should bring our notebooks and exercise books here every time.,Reference Boo
2、ks,Vocabulary: You can choose one of the following three books. 1. 王迈迈主编的四级英语词汇； 2. 马德高“星火英语”主编的英语词汇； 3. 王长喜主编的四级英语词汇。 Writing Books: You can choose one or all of the following. 1. 上海交通大学潘晓燕主编的四级英语写作 2. 马德高主编的四级英语写作 3. 王长喜主编的四六级英语写作,Questions,Do you have general knowledge of English Writing? Do you
3、have any idea of writing an essay? Have you tried writing an English essay? How many traditional styles of English writing? What does Practical Writing mean?,1 Introducing the Standard of English Writing and Enjoying Good Model Essays,Purpose and Requirement,英语写作是大学英语四、六级考试中的必备项目，占比重很大。旨在根据教学大纲测试考生的
4、综合写作能力，包括审题、谋篇、遣词、造句、修辞等等。这些要求促使考生考试前要花大量精力和时间进行演练。另外，考试中要求考生在短短的分钟内写出一篇主题明确、结构合理、句式多变、语言流畅、语法规范以及字数合适的作文，这对考生来说实属不易。然而，通过本课程的学习考生能够达到上述要求，避免考试中出现偏离主题、篇章混乱、句式单一、语法不规范、修辞不当等问题，并且能够写出高分作文 。,Contents,Introducing the standard of English Writing and enjoying good model essays Learning Mottos and Proverbs
5、 Choosing suitable words Making correct sentences Forming paragraphs and essays Learning styles of writing: Narration Learning styles of writing: Description Learning styles of writing: Exposition Learning styles of writing: Argumentation,10. Practical Writing: Letters (I) Personal Letters 11. Pract
6、ical Writing: Letters (II) Business Letters 12. Practical Writing: Memo、Invitation、 Resume 13. Practical Writing: Speeches、Posters 14. Practical Writing: Table、Chart 15. Practical Writing: Diagram、Graph 16. Learning mixed styles 17. Writing For Your Future Business and Analyzing students essays,Stan
7、dard of Grading（评分标准）,14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺， 连贯性较好；基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 11分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 8分-基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。,5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差；有较多的严重语言错误。 2分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。（注：作文满分106.5分）,Samples of Grading （评分样卷）,Directions: For this part, you are allowed thi
8、rty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Li Ming. Write a letter to Xiao Zhang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese. 1. 表示欢迎 2. 提出对度假安排的建议 3. 提醒应注意的事项,Sample 1,Dear
9、 Xiao Zhang, I am delighted to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday. My parents will also be happy to see you again. I am sure you will enjoy every minute here. I know you are fond of swimming. A river lies not far away from my home. We can go swimming there. I think it
10、would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days. In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner. We can watch TV, play computer games or read books at home.,A mountain about two miles away from here is beautiful and it is worth touring. We can go there on foot. When w
11、e climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful bird-eye view of the whole village. Just phone me before you set off. There is no need for you to take anything. I will prepare everything for you. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Li Ming,Comments （讲评）,本文属于应用文:内容切题，语言流畅，用词恰当
12、，句式也有一定变化，虽有极个别小错（例如：bird-eye应为birds-eye),但不影响意思的表达，属于14分档作文。,Sample 2,Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic “A Boom in Adult Education”. You should write no less than 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese bel
13、ow: 1. 现在许多成年人都利用业余时间去大学或 夜校读书 2. 出现这种成人教育热的原因是 3. 结论,A Boom in Adult Education Along with the development of society, people attach increasing importance to education. Recent years witness a growing trend of adults attending class during their spare time. In fact, the reason for this trend is not d
14、ifficult to get. One of the most common factors is that further education can bring these adults concrete material benefits. To them more knowledge, or rather (更准确地说）, more certificates mean more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion. Another reason is that attending classes in the uni
15、versity can offer them,a good opportunity to make some friends with similar background. Whatever the reason is, this has already become an obvious trend, which, in turn, benefits the learner and the nation as a whole. 讲评：这是一篇说理型说明文。本文切题。词汇丰富，语言通顺，语法正确；文章连贯性好；分段清楚（三段），结构合理；过渡词（in fact, in turn, or ra
16、ther，或者更准确地说等）运用得当。,Sample 3,Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic “My View on Job Hopping”. You should write no less than 120 words and your composition should include the following three points given in Chinese below: 1) 有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因 为 2) 有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为 3) 我的看法,My View on Job-Hopping,It is a common practice for one to change his job at present. Different people hold different ideas concerning it. Some
