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1、2011年6月英语六级作文范文及解析汇总英语六级作文题目Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Certificate Craze. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:1. 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试2. 其目的各不相同3. 在我看来2011年6月英语六级作文范文及评析1Part I WritingMy opinion on certifica
2、te crazeThe growing tendency among college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. Just randomly ask a student what he or she is busily engaged in doing, quite possibly, you would get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. So, whys the
3、craze?The reason behind this phenomenon is common the enormous pressure of finding a job. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signify
4、ing ones ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one exam to another.Though I have an open mind toward the craze on certificates, I suggest that students should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since they do not ne
5、cessarily tell their ability. Instead, they should be more involved in learning and capability boosting, thus, opportunities would come quite naturally.文章点评：这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。 本文先对学生的考证热进行简介，引出全篇;接着分析这一现象背后的原因;整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，句式多变，用语较为地道。本篇亮点表达：The growing tendency has now evolved intobe busily enga
6、ged in doingThe reason behindharsh job markethave no choice but toparlay their qualificationssth. weighs heavily in terms ofincreasing ones odds ofbe involved in doing be compelled to dohave an open mind towardcapability boosting本文有待提高之处：1. 文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。 逻辑严谨，论证严密;句式表达灵
7、活，用语较为地道。2. 微观语言点方面，有个主谓一致的方面的错误(diploma and certificates still weighs heavily);有些语句稍显啰嗦，比 quite possibly, you would get the answer that 大可简化成 youd most likely be told that 更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多;另外某些用语多重复，比如 job多次出现;为了避免此类现象，文中的the enormous pressure of finding a job 不妨改为 the enormous pressure of get
8、ting employed。从整体看，本篇文章不错，值得参考借鉴，不过用语方面还有待提高。2011年6月英语六级作文范文及评析2Part I WritingThe job market today is increasingly sophisticated, requiring workers to have specialized knowledge in their fields. As a result, becoming certified is a trend among todays job seeking youth. More and more people, students
9、 especially, look at obtaining certification as a means to getting a better job and, therefore, enjoying brighter future.There are as many certificates as there are fields of study. Lawyers will take the LSAT, business majors will take the GMAT to further their study in the US, and those who study a
10、 foreign language, like English, might take the TOEFL, TOEIC, or any number of English certification exams.Is this necessary? Or, is the “certification craze” just a trend that will eventually pass? I myself have obtained two different certifications: one in Japanese (N2) and another in teaching Eng
11、lish as a foreign language (TEFL). Both of these certifications have been beneficial in getting good jobs. Therefore, it is my opinion that, trend or not, the results of becoming certified are real and can be invaluable in opening up future opportunities.作文点评：1. 逻辑结构上，本文大体也是按照“提出问题(考证热的现象)” “分析问题(背后
12、的动力)”和“解决问题(个人的观点)”的结构展开。2. 本文的亮点非常多，用语非常地道，用英语思维催动出来的英语文章，才是真正的极品。相比用中式思维催动出来的英语文章，这篇文章是很美味的，强烈建议大家背诵下来。大家记得天龙八部吗?鸠摩智用小无相功催动出的招式是敌不过藏经阁里的扫地和尚的。总之，我们大可不必刻意使用难词难句，其实表意明确，用语地道的文章，就肯定可以拿到高分。2011年6月英语六级作文范文高分版1Certificate crazeRecently the phenomenon of certificate craze has become a big concern of the
13、public. It is also a new craze in the university, which seems like a routine activity on campus, for certificates do play a vital role when students look for a decent job.Admittedly, there are different purposes behind this phenomenon. Some people aim at certificates because of the employment pressu
14、re. With the admission expansion of colleges, a great many graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. So it is the certificates that can make them more competitive. However, some others consider all the diploma and certificates important standards by which a persons ability can
15、 be measured. They spare no effort to get the certificates for the sole purpose of proving that they are qualified in a certain field. Moreover, there are those who just want to enrich their life by preparing for the certificates because they really enjoy their progress.From my point of view, we sho
16、uld be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not merely getting a certificate.点评：本次六级作文探讨的是考生比较熟悉的话题高校考证书热;本次试题延续了以往的考试风格，关注点仍然放在与学生息息相关的话题上;从选题角度来说，考生还是比较好把握的。需要注意的是由于第二部分可能需要列出多点原因，考生在该部分需要注意论述的条理性;此外，在保证句法通顺的前提下，尽可能做到表达的多样化。首先，在考生拿到题目的时候，应该先认真审题，心里大致对接下
