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1、2011 普通高考评卷英语作文评分细则：极优档： 30 书写规范；覆盖所有要点；内容充实；词汇丰富； 有修辞意识。 优秀档： 2629 紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点；内容充实；语法结构多样；词汇丰富，显示出较强的语言运用能力。语言小错不超过6个。 良好档： 2225 紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容充实，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。 一般档： 1821 紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。 。,较差档： 1317 内容不完整，要点不全，行文不连贯；语言错误（尤其是大错）较多，多数句子基本正确。 差档： 612 内容混乱或主要内容偏离
2、主题，能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句 极差档： 05 只能写出与内容相关的词语， 没有有效信息； 抄写其他文章或只写出与作文无关的内容。 注意事项： 1. 评分时，先根据语言内容初步确定是否到及格线。 2. 词数少于120，应从得分中减去2分。 关于大小错问题的说明： 小错：单词拼写，冠词，大小写、标点符号错误。 大错：搭配错误、词语用错（介词、名词、动词、形容词、副词）、时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词、句式等错误。,2011山东高考英语试题书面表达：假设你是李华， 你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来北京学习。 七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 （speech contest），你在资
3、料搜集、语言运用等方面 遇到了困难。请根据一下要点给Tom 写一封电子邮件： 1. 询问Tom 的生活和学习情况； 2. 谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3. 告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。 注意：1. 词数120150；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,How is everything going? I feel greatly honored to be your friend. Do you live happy recently? Do you smile at the life? And how is your study goes? Ill attend an English sp
4、eech contest in July .But I have some troubles searching the articles and using the language. Whats more, I dont know how to use the words. On the other hand, I want to communicate with you. We have not communicate with each other for a long time. As far as I am concerned, you can give me a great he
5、lp. whats more, I want to play with you. Im planning to go to the US after the speech contest so that you can introduce your hometown to me. Last but not the least, remember to smile at your life. I cant wait to recive your reply.,20分,How is everything going? Have you already adapt to the life in Be
6、ijing and do you still have problems in your study?I cant wait to tell you the good news that my middle school have just allowed me to join in the speech contest group. Ill be going to Beijing in July .But I still have some problem in search the information and English words. Could you give me some
7、suggestions? You can call me in the next week. Give me some advice on how to use English words and some must-see problems. Im intend to meet you after the speech contest. You can show me around Beijing and we can visit your school. Best wishes. I will wait for your early reply.,21分， 错误较多，句型简单.原文涂改六处
8、。 一般档标准：18-21 紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内 容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。,How is everything going now? I know that you came to Beijing for study last month. So , does everything in Beijing agree with you. If you have anytrouble living and studying in Beijing, Ill glad to help you. Recently, I took part in an
9、 English contest held in Beijing during the holiday. But, I found it difficult for me to look for useful information and use the language properly. And these are of great importance to win the contest. Thus, can you help me? Whats more, Im going to visit you after the contest. Is it convinient for y
10、ou . I do hope that I can see you again. Looking forward to your reply.,22分， 尝试使用高级句式， 有少量错误。 115words,How is everything going? Im so concerned about your life and study. We can communicate a lot in daily life.In order to participate in Middle School Students English Speech Contest in July, Im plann
11、ing to search for some useful information. But I find I have difficulty in searching for information and spoken English, so I want ask for your advice. Im sure Ill benefit a lot from your timely and valuable advice. Ill appreciate if your could help me. After my speech contest, Ill come to see you.
12、I can show you around the tourist attractions. I think well have a wonderful time. Looking forward to your reply.,25分，亮点增加，顺畅。句子长度增加， 句式多变，但复合句不多故非优秀档。117words,How is everything going? Im very glad to know that you have come to Beijing to study .Are you satisfied with the life here. Have you adapted
13、 to the studying here? As you know, an English speech contest will be held in BJ in July. I like taking challenges so I have planned to join the English speech contest. In order to win the competition I went all out for it. But I meet a lot of troubles. I dont know how to organize the files and how
14、to use words to impress my thoughts. Id appreciate it if you could tell me the solutions to these problems. I treasure this chance very much so it would be very kind of you to help me. In order to convey my heartfelt thanks to you, Ill visit you after competition. Ill take you to the Great Wall and
15、Im sure youll be struck by this amazing world wonder.,27 内容充实， 词汇丰富，句式多变，过渡衔接顺畅。,2011年书面表达中的亮点句式： 1. Ive received your e-mail, in which you told me that 2. Im concerned about your recent life and study in Beijing. 3. I have some difficulty in searching for . 4. Ill take part in an English Speech Con
16、test to be held in Beijing during the summer vacation. 5. An English Speech Contest will be held in Beijing during the summer vacation, which, I think, is a great opportunity to improve my English. 6. Ill really appreciate it if you could offer me some timelyand valuable help.,2011高考学生表达中出现的问题: 单词拼写
17、错误; 词性混乱;动词罗列;搭配使用失误; I want ask for you Have already adapt/ comminute Ill appreciate if/School have allowed Ill be going to/Help me solving Im miss you/Im tell you a great thing Want to you can help me Communicate some interesting with you You must to help me/search information 审题略有偏差 机械的翻译要点 基础词汇基础句型难得高分 汉语思维语言不地道,
