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1、Guidance on writing,基本要求： 1.书写整洁、卷面清晰 2.分段！ 3.标点！大小写！ 4.格式正确 5.不遗漏要点,如何算是一篇好的文章？,1、覆盖了所有的要点。 2、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（词汇、句型【高级】和语法多样化【较复杂】） 3、有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,书面表达六步法,书面表达,审,抓,遣,连,查,抄,1.审：审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态 文体：记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文 要求：（见试题） 人称：第一、二、三人称 时态：过去式或者一般现在式.,2.3： 抓、遣：列要点（关键词动词或动词词组）遣词造句4. 连
2、：(1) 扩词成句。在书写时，若无把握的情况下尽量用简单的句子、单词或短语表达。(2) 组句成文（开头结尾、增添细节、行文连贯、高级结构），并呈现常用承接、过渡词语。思路清晰，逻辑严密。,假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括： 1. 乐观的人生态度； 2. 努力学习； 3. 参加体育锻炼,Example: To grow up happily and healthilyWe all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several
3、things. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In o
4、rder to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a days study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.,Practice,假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。根据下文提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：,分 析,一、审题：
5、1、文体：2、时态： 3、人称：,二、提炼要点： 1,部分同学的饮食习惯:,1,Some of the students eating habits dont have breakfast, like eating snacks only some kinds of food, eat too much,应用文-讨论稿,一般现在时,第一人称,（不吃早餐爱吃零食,偏食 饮食过量）,2、Good eating habits all kinds of food, the same amount and at the same time,In my opinion,3、发表自己的观点,2、良好的饮食习
6、惯 饮食多样化饮食 定时定量）,三、扩词成句（尽量使用高级词汇）,高级:Some of the students go to school without breakfast,一般: Some of the students dont have breakfast and go to school.,分析:修改后没有用过于直接的 only some kinds of, 而使用了 are particular about,该词组就属高级词汇。,一般: They only have some kinds of food.,高级:They are particular about food.,分析:
7、在表达要点时， without比dont have语气强，也显得生动.,一般: They have all kinds of food .,高级: They have various healthy diet ,一般:They have the same amount of food and at the same time.,高级:They have meals regularly.,选好词，写好句做好文章,成文,As we know , we are what we eat. Therefore, its very important for us to form healthy eati
8、ng habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about,food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad eating habits will surely do harm to our health.To keep
9、 fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fruit,fish,meat,vegetables as well as main food. Besides, wed better have meals regularly.,In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enoug
10、h energy to study better.Thats all. Thank you.,一句多译练习例一 . 写请假条。情景：我生病了，明天不能上学。,1. Im ill. I cant go to school tomorrow. 2. Im ill and I cant go to school tomorrow. 3. Ill be absent from school tomorrow just because Im ill. 4. Im so seriously ill that I cant go to school tomorrow. 5. I cant go to sch
11、ool tomorrow because of my illness.,6. Being ill, I cant go to school tomorrow.(用分词作原因状语) 7. I cant go to school tomorrow. Thats because Im ill. （用表语从句） 8. Im seriously ill, which makes me unable to go to school. （用定语从句） 9. Im seriously ill, which makes it impossible for me to go to school.,10. It i
12、s because Im ill that I cant go to school tomorrow.(强调句型) 11. The reason for my absence from school tomorrow is that Im ill. （用表语从句） 12. My illness prevents me from going to school tomorrow. 13. I have a disease, which prevents me from going to school tomorrow.,昨天下雨，我没来。,It rained yesterday, so I di
13、dnt come. It rained yesterday, and as a result, I didnt come. I didnt come yesterday because it rained. I didnt come yesterday because of the rain. The rain prevented us （from）coming yesterday. The rain stopped us （from）coming yesterday . The rain kept us from coming yesterday.,Practice 一句多译 这本书花了我3
14、00元。,I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. The book cost me 300 yuan.,我喜欢古典音乐。,I enjoy classical music. I like classical music. I love classical music. I am interested in classical music. I am into classica
15、l music. I am fond of classical music.,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books.5. As a result the plan was a failure.,The plan turned out to be a failure.,Thanks
16、 to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,一、怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him .,A good idea occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free for the students there.,6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.10.You can find my house easily.,
