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1、提要：,How to ImproveWriting,？,Do you want to get high scores in writing ?,18？,20？,?,Nothing is impossible!,？,How to ImproveWriting,高考作文 谈谈减负前后自己的学习和生活的变化。I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes everyday. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in
2、the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired.Now I can visit libraries. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspa-pers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.,信息全面，但句式单一，缺乏组织性,17分,Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has re
3、duced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit libraries and computer rooms and d
4、raw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm.In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.,范文,Topic sentence（主题句）,Advanced phrases&sentences（高级词和句子）,Coherence （连贯性）,. How to write a good composition?,A
5、 good composition,Topic sentence,We have had a heated discussion about whether Senior Three students should go spring outing. There are some different ideas about it. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior Three students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to
6、 be close to nature and breathe some fresh air.On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with the college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere.,链接高考,（2007全国卷 I）：,假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括： 1 年
7、龄； 2 性别； 3 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。,实战演习,（2007全国卷 I）：,笔友条件：爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）,. I hope my pen friend likes travelling, sports and keeping pets,要点齐全、语言正确，但句式简单,Improve it!,I like sports very much,爱好运动,such as basketball and football.,Improve it!,I like to find a pen friend who is interested in travelling just like
8、me,爱好旅游,so that we can travel together and share experiences.,Improve it!,I have another hobby, that is, keeping pets, and,喜欢养宠物,I have kept a lovely dog for one year.,I want to have a pen friend who is interested in traveling, sports and keeping pets.,I like sports very much, such as basketball and
9、 football. I also hope to find a pen pal who is interested in travelling just like me, so that we can travel together and share traveling experiences. Whats more, I have another hobby, that is, keeping pets. I have kept a lovely dog for one year.,对,比,. Advanced words, phrases and sentences,A good co
10、mposition,Choose advanced phrases (选取高级词汇),Word,Phrase,1. I like history.2. I want to have a picnic.,be fond of / be interested in / have a great interest in,would like to,Choose advanced phrases (选取高级词汇),Simple phrase,Advanced phrase,1. I want to do something for the library.2. Ill try my best to o
11、ffer the best service.,make a contribution to,spare no pains/effort,Use different sentences (使用多样句型）,1. There is no _ that I can get there in a short time because I live near the school.,doubt,2. I like history very much. (使用强调）I _ like history very much.,do/really,3. If you give me the chance, Ill
12、offer the best service to others. ( 使用非谓语动词）If _ the chance, Ill offer the bestservice to others.,given,我过去常常晚饭后散步。,After supper, I used to take a walk.,使用习语（短语、成语）使语言更有文采,只有通过努力学习，我们才能取得进步。,Only by working hard, 使用倒装句,can we make progress.,听到这条消息，他很兴奋。,非谓语动词简捷、生动，富有内涵,Hearing the news，he got excite
13、d.,我们积极参加活动，这对我们健康非常有益。,We take an active part in activities,定语从句的灵活运用,which is good for our health.,. Coherence (语篇的连贯性),A good composition,When he saw the boy in the street, he stopped to speak to him.,He saw the boy in the street. He stopped to speak to him.,We tried our best. We lost our game.,W
14、e tried our best, but we lost our game./ Although we tried our best, we lost our game.,She finished the task ahead of time.She came to help us.,After she finished the task ahead of time， she came to help us.,1.表罗列顺序2.表递进3.表转折 4.表因果5.表目的6.表归纳,first of all/ to start/begin with/ in the first place,and/
15、then/also/besides/whats more/in addition.,but/however/although/though/ on the contrary.,because/since/therefore/so/thus/as a result.,in order that/so that/for the purpose of.,in brief/in short/in conclusion/in a word.,2008全国高考（II）,假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点: 1. 参加中文学习班;2. 看中文
16、书刊、电视；3. 学唱中文歌曲；4. 交中国朋友。,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Best wishesLi Hua,it is important to take a Chinese course, as you can learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow classmates. it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. you should make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.,
