《2010惠州第一次调研考试写作讲评》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《2010惠州第一次调研考试写作讲评（10页珍藏版）》请在金锄头文库上搜索。
1、Attentions:,注意审题 加强单词和词组的准确度 试着把短句扩展成长句 要有炫耀语言能力的冲动 写作要有主题意识,Im fond of sports Im crazy about sports. Im enthusiastic about sports.,As/Being a native, I have a good command of three main local languages in Guangdong, that is, Im well acquainted with the local culture.,I hope to serve for the 2010 Gu
2、angzhou Asian Games. I would be grateful if you could accept my application On the whole, Ill go all out to be a helpful volunteer. As/Being a native, I have a good command of three main local languages in Guangdong, that is, Im well acquainted with the local culture.,I was born in Huizhou and Im 19
3、 years old. Im healthy enough and love sports very much, so I do want to be a volunteer. Though lacking of experience, I will do my best if you give a chance to me. Im studying in Huizhou University and I have a good command of three kinds of Gongdong dialects, such as . So I think I can do it well.
4、,Im LiLing, a freshman in Huizhou University and I was born in Huizhou in March 1990. Im in good condition/very well in health and crazy about sports, so I do want to be a volunteer. As/Being a local citizen, I have a command of three main local languages here, that is, Moreover, Im so well acquaint
5、ed/familiar with the local tradition and culture that its convenient for me to show visitors around the city and give them some other help. On the whole, I will try my best to be a helpful volunteer if I can be admitted/accepted.,Writing II,Summary: 议论文：论点+论据 记叙文：Who did what?what happened to someon
6、ehowever/ as a result 说明文：说明的对象+该事物的特点 tips: 用近义词替代原文的表达,As we know, such infective illness as swine flu knows no borders. So it is important that every government and organization all over the world has spared no effort to prevent its spread.,In common with that in Singapore, people in Hong kong ar
7、e also encouraged to wash their hands properly and frequently Besides, scientists and doctors are struggling for effective vaccines. To our delight, our country has developed a vaccine recently, making China the first country to produce a mass inoculation,In my mind, we should not only pay more attention to our personal hygiene but also build up our body. Besides, we should be given more advice on how to prevent the virus by the government.,
