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1、高考英语书面表达高分策略： 从遣词，造句，谋篇三个方面分析。,1. 遣词的原则：使用高级词汇及短语, 有意识的强化“复杂，高级”这两个概念， 使自己的作文能力区别于普通学生的作文，使 自己一下子就站在一个比别人高的位置上，充 分显示自己的实力。,平时学习过程中注意总结各种各样的词汇。 以描述人物的词汇为例： 表达人物爱憎感情： like, love, be interested in, be fond of hate, dislike, be tired of, lose interest in happy, excited, pleased, satisfied, angry, sad, w
2、orried, disappointed, terrified, mad, frightened,介绍人物的影响及人们对人的评价： 1. He became famous for his new theory. 2. The people have come to love him as an inspiring leader. 3. We regard Li Fei as our model. 4. Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. 5. People spoke highly of him and all respect
3、ed him.,常见描述人物性格，外貌和身体状况等的词语: good-looking /funny-looking /strong-looking /ugly-looking /dirty-looking /ordinary-looking /blue-eyed /white-eyed /warm-hearted /light-hearted /kind-hearted /absent-minded /tall /short /beautiful /pretty /lovely,常见描述人物性格，外貌和身体状况等的词语 /naughty /healthy/be in good or poor
4、condition /fine/ well /strong-tempered /bad-tempered /near-sighted /far-sighted /foolish /stupid /silly /clever /smart /wise /bright / diligent /intelligent /lazy /hard working, etc.,2. 造句的原则：句式多变，语法活用，句子是表达一个完整意思的最小单位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。,A. 英语基本句型的正确使用:
5、 1. 主语+系动词+形容词 Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth. He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed. Your explanation sounds reasonable.,2.主语+谓语+直接宾语 (名词） I want your promise. Have your fixed my watch? This factory produces 1000 cars a week.,主语+谓语+直接宾语(动名词) I suggested putting off
6、 the meeting. They all avoided mentioning the matter. We cant help laughing at the news.,主语+谓语+直接宾语(不定式) I cant afford to buy such a large house. Dont pretend to know what you dont. He feared to speak in her presence.,3. 主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 (to do) I will get someone to repair the recorder for you. I didnt
7、mean to hurt you. He invited me to teach at a well-known university.,主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 (do) I often hear her sing the song. The boss made workers work 15 hours a day. Dont forget to have him come.,主语+谓语+宾语+宾补(doing) I heard her singing in the next room. We could feel our heats beating fast. Did you observ
8、e the birds flying around the trees?,主语+谓语+宾语+宾补(done) 1. I must have my watch repaired. 2. We must get he task finished on time. 3. Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody.,主语+谓语+宾语(名词/代词)+介词+宾语 Nothing can prevent us from going forward. Thank you for your help. He demanded an answer
9、from me.,4. 主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语 He paid me a visit yesterday. He owed me 50 yuan. He wrote his family a letter yesterday.,5. 主语+谓语+状语(介词,名词短语或从句) 1. The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west. 2. We get up early every morning. 3. The meeting lasted 2 hours.,6. 主语+不及物动词+副词 This kind of wine drinks
10、 well and sells well. The suit wears well. Glass breaks easily.,7. 主语+谓语+介词+宾语 We all agreed on the terms. He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters. All these things are to be answered for.,2. 造句的原则：B. 练习写好句(简洁) 写好句子的方法一：合并句子 It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden.
11、He was watering flowers. Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.,2. 造句的原则： 写好句子的方法一：合并句子 A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide. A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.,2. 造句的原则： 写好句子的方法二：改写句子 1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thi
12、ck glasses. (改成介词短语做伴随状语) Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.,2. 造句的原则： 写好句子的方法二：改写句子 2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用sothat结构改写句子) The ice on the lake is so thin that we cant skate on it.,2. 造句的原则： 写好句子方法三：一句多译1). 这本书花了我300元。 I spent 300 yuan on the book.
13、 I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost/took me 300 yuan to buy the book.,2). 我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。 I dont know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, so it is
14、with Li Ming. I know no more English than Li Ming does. I know as little English as Li Ming does.,3). 昨天下午他才来。 He came here yesterday afternoon. He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here. It was not u
15、ntil yesterday afternoon that he came here.,2. 造句的原则：C. 写复杂句近几年英语作文评分依据要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档。,增加句子复杂性的常见方法。,1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。 原文We met at the school
16、gate and went there together early in the morning.修正Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.,原文The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.修正Hearing the bad news，the young man couldnt help crying.,增加句子复杂性的常见方法。,2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。 强调句 原文My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. 修正My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.,
