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1、大作文,方涛,大作文基本情况介绍,字数：250字 时间：推荐时间40分钟 分值：占据总共写作分数的2/3 形式：议论文,我国考生雅思平均成绩统计,我国雅思平均成绩排名,中国大陆A类考生2008年的平均成绩为5.46分，在40个考生人数最多的国家中排名倒数第六，仅比五个中东国家考生分数高(卡塔尔，阿联酋、阿曼、沙特阿拉伯、科威特)。,大作文评分标准,one:task response 任务完成情况two: coherence and cohesion 连贯与衔接three: lexical resources 词汇资源four: grammatical range and accuracy 语法
2、多样性和准确性,大作文评分标准1,task response: 1 字数是否够 2 内容是不是切题 3 立场是否鲜明 4 结构是否清晰,大作文评分标准1,With the increasing use of mobile phones, less people tend to write letters. Some people believe that writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 应该主要写写信，而不是手机，所以内容一定要准确，不能离题。,大作文评分标准
3、1,由于大作文会要求你发表自己的看法，所以一定要表达清楚自己的立场，尽可能不发表一些极端的宗教和政治方面的立场和观点。 要做到立场鲜明，所以需要总论点，每个段落还需要分论点，即top sentence。还要有main ideas (论点) 和supporting ideas（论据）。,大作文评分标准1,大作文结构非常重要，要做到结构清晰，我们一般采取4-5个自然段。,大作文评分标准2,coherence and cohesion 一篇文章不是句子的堆砌，要做到逻辑上的通顺还要句子衔接的自然通顺，因此在文章中使用大量连接词。 文章的连贯性主要体现在段落与段落之间句子与句子之间。段落之间的“启”、
4、“承”、“转”、“合”可通过表顺序的过渡词完成,大作文评分标准2,表示开始：first of all, in the first place, at the very beginning, to begin with, currently, at present, for one thing等。 表示承接：besides, further more, in addition, moreover, whats more, meanwhile, apart from, as well as, similarly, in the same way等。 表示转折：however, whereas, w
5、hile, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand等。 表示结论：in conclusion, in brief, in short, to sum up, ultimately, overall等,大作文评分标准2,表示原因：because (of ), accordingly, due to, owing to, for this reason, since, as a result, as a consequence表达观点：in my opinion, personally, from my viewpoint, it seems
6、 to me, it is clear to me that, as far as I am concerned举例说明：for example, for instance, as follows, such as, that is to say, namely, just as, in particular表示让步：although, in spite of, despite of, despite the fact that, regardless of,大作文评分标准3,lexical resource important significant essential vital cruc
7、ial critical,大作文评分标准3,good, kind, wise, nice, clever, great, bright ambitious, tactful, eloquent, charismatic, committed,大作文评分标准4,gramatical range and accuracy 语法使用要准确，在准确的前提下要注意语法或者句式的多样性。有一个误区，那就是并不是句子越复杂分数越高，而是要做到长短句相间，简单句复杂句并存。,大作文评分标准4,One of their reasons is the old buildings have a long histo
8、ry. First of all, foreign countries, which create a wonderful language atmosphere for students. As one of the most popularity thing is study abroad.,band 6,Nowadays, purpose of education being changed. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe t
9、hat children who are taught to cooperate as well as become useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments. To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from
10、 the competition. To prove this, it is common to have a tutor who come to students house to teach extra piece of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn English for a month instead of revise school work. If they have experiments such as study abroad, it is one of the
11、 greatest plus point to go to the famous well-known high school. Moreover, there are big school exam and two national examinations to test children level of studies. So children learn as much as possible to win the competition.,band 6,On the other hand, as they are busy to enter the schools and stud
12、y individually with their own tutors, there are problems. They become selfish. They become careless and do not help others a lot if it is about studies. There will be no cooperation for them. Then, why are there companies for many people to work in. Each of them are clever, however, there are weak p
13、arts and strong parts for each person. To cooperate is to improve this part. People talk and listen to what others thinking of and learn. That could also be a great opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher. In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to
14、 cooperate rather than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, work together to develop each other. Therefore I want parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on cooperation, not compete and ranking them.,band 7,In big business cities there are two options available for the t
15、ype of accommodation: houses and apartments. Some people prefer to live in apartments and some like to live in houses. In big business cities, where almost everyone is going out daily for work or study, apartments provide a much more comfortable and safe way of living. The advantages include the fac
16、t that there is one key and lock they have to take care of, and also the sense of being a part of big family. Usually a guard sits at the main gate, so children can play around in the compound with their next door friends. In addition, not much daily cleaning is required in apartments as no staircas
17、e has to be clean, which is a difficult task-all housewives know it very well. But a key advantage is that it is safe to go on vocation for a long trip.,band 7,In the other hand, houses have their own attraction for its inhabitants. Garden lovers usually prefer houses as they can have their own gard
18、en. It is also easy to keep a pet, especially a dog in a house because dog can play around the garden. If someone is interested in maintaining cars himself, it can only be possible in houses where one can have his own garden. Where people are sometimes much more concerned about their privacy, living in apartments can be a very difficult for them. It may also be the case that someone is not able to deal with other people, for instance next door neighbors, and than house can be a best choice for such people.,
