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1、Shape of my composition,neat and tidy,Which is your preference?,well-shaped,rich in content,Decorations,Outer appearance,Inner qualities,Decorations (装饰),handwriting,paragraphs,Words&Phrases,Enrich the text (拓展),Conjunction words (连词),little words such as Adv.,Sentence patterns(句式),Simplify the sent
2、ences,(1)The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen. (with),(3)I have a surprise to give you. (for),(2)I am writing to tell you something that has taken place in our school. (about),(1)我等待着你的到来。 Im waiting for you to come . (2)工人们热烈欢迎我们来参观农场。 The worke
3、rs welcomed us to visit the farm. (3)我听说你在学中文,我很高兴听说这件事。 I hear you are learning Chinese. I am very glad to hear that.,Making-up,(1) Im looking forward to your arrival.,(2) The workers gave us a warm welcome to the farm.,(3) Im very glad to hear that youre learning Chinese.,Avoid simple repetition,A
4、void word for word translation and focus on connection,Plus necessary details to make clear expressions,The 7-day National Day Holiday is going to be cancelled due to some reasons.,Combat Exercise 实战演习,1,Travelling causes heavy traffic and more traffic accidents.,2,Travellers bad behaviors damage th
5、e environment.,Travelling makes people too tired to work or study after holiday.,3,2,1,Its good to be close to nature and relax.,Its good to be with family members and communicate.,Composition,新闻报道政府决定取消十一国庆长假，此消息一出引起了大家的强烈讨论：,赞同决定者认为： 出游者众多造成交通拥挤甚至交通事故 游客破坏旅游景点，造成污染 旅途劳累影响假期归来后的工作和学习,反对决定者认为： 有利于接近
6、自然，修养身心 有利于家人团聚、交流,+Self-opinion,CCTV news says that the 7-day Natinal Holiday is going to be cancelled. Some people agree with the decision. They think travelling causes heavy traffic and more traffic accidents. Travellers bad behaviors damage the environment. Travelling makes people too tired to w
7、ork or study after holiday. Others dont agree with the decision. They think its good to be close to nature and relax. Its good to be with family members and communicate. For me, I think,CCTV news says that the 7-day National Holiday is going to be cancelled. Some people agree with the decision. They
8、 think travelling on holidays causes heavy traffic and more traffic accidents. Travellers bad behaviors damage tourist attractions. Travelling makes people too tired to work or study after holiday. Others dont agree with the decision. They think its good to be close to nature and relax. Its good to
9、be with family members and communicate. For me, I think,Final Presentation,CCTV news says that the 7-day Natinal Holiday is going to be cancelled. Some people agree with the decision. They think travelling on holidays causes heavy traffic and more traffic accidents. Travellers bad behaviors damage t
10、ourist attractions. Travelling makes people too tired to work or study after holiday. Others dont agree with the decision. They think its good to be close to nature and relax. Its good to be with family members and communicate. For me, I think,are in favor of/approve of are in agreement with,From th
11、eir viewpoint/ Hold the opinion that/ Point out that,disapprove of / be in disagreement with/ oppose/are opposed to/,It is that enables/ It provides us with the chance of,As far as I am concerned/ On a personal note,CCTV news says that the 7-day Natinal Holiday is going to be cancelled. Some people
12、are in favor of the decision. They hold the opinion that travelling on holidays causes heavy traffic and more traffic accidents. Travellers bad behaviors damage tourist attractions. Travelling makes people too tired to work or study after holiday. Others are opposed to it. From their viewpoint, it i
13、s the holiday that enables us to get close to nature and relax. It provides us with the chance of communicating with family members. As far as I am concerned,Further more/Moreover In addition/Meanwhile,Last but not least,on one hand/ on the other hand,strongly,CCTV news says that the 7-day National
14、Holiday is going to be cancelled. Some people are in favor of the decision. They hold the opinion that travelling on holidays causes heavy traffic and more traffic accidents. In addition, Travellers bad behaviors damage tourist attractions. Last but not least, travelling makes people too tired to wo
15、rk or study after holiday. Others are strongly opposed to it. From their viewpoint, it is the holiday that enables us to get close to nature and relax. Further more, it provides us with the chance of communicating with family members. As far as I am concerned,Outer appearance,Inner qualities,Decorations (装饰),handwriting,paragraphs,Words&Phrases,Enrich the text (拓展),Conjunction words (连词),little words such as Adv.,Sentence patterns(句式),Homework,Add some self-opinions on the composition,THANK YOU ！,
