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1、Module 3 Heroes Module task -Writing course,Writing about a hero,吉隆实验学校 宋带花,Play a guessing game ( guess the names of the heroes ),He is brave and helpful.,spiderman,He always helps people who are in trouble.,He is handsome,He can fly in the film.,He is an American comic hero in rare and superman.,S
2、he is famous as a table tennis player.,She won 4 gold medals in the Olympics between 1992 and 1996.,She is called the “Table Tennis Queen“.,Deng Yaping,She is one of the most famous heroes in China.,He is one of the most famous heroes in China.,At that time,there were few doctors, so he had to work
3、very hard on his own.,He helped a lot of the Chinese people.,Although he has been dead for a long time, he is still remembered in both China and Canada.,Dr Norman Bethune,Do you want to know who is my hero ? Let me tell you.,personal date name: father age: 62 job: worker hobby: watch TV, sing best l
4、ove person: mother,brother and me the main event: raise a family,Father supports our family what is like a superman to save the world.,To the world，you maybe somebody；To somebody，you maybe the world。,My father is an ordinary worker, but in my eyes, he is the hero.,give me safety, teach me how to be
5、strong.,tell me how to face the real society.,care me, love me.,So that I can go to a good college. So that I can be a good teacher now.,My hero,I want to tell my father : thank you for giving my life thank you for raising me to the adult thank you for what you give me I am very grateful to you !,It
6、 is you to teach me out of the first step, let me find my way,Many people in the world are our heroes.Look and say.Who are they?,soldier,sports star,movie star,history maker,Now its your time to talk about your heroes !,1.Who is your hero?,2.Why do you think he/ she is the greatest hero?,Because he/
7、she is brave/ successful/ kind. Because he/she is a great film star and his/her films are fantastic,3.Do you know what he/she did in his/her life?,He/She always helped a lot of people in his/her life. He/She has a strong will, and never gives up. .,My hero is.,4.What can you learn from him/her? .,Le
8、arn to use conjunction ,such as because, so,so that.,hard-working,kind,When we discuss and make lists to describe your heroes.We can talk about.,helpful,.,Heroes,Who,players,soldiers,successful,parents,What he did,help people who are in trouble,teach me how to grow up,.,why,teachers,brave,Lets do so
9、me exercises.,请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格。 Did you watch the 2012 London Olympic Games? If you did, you must know a person who changed mens swimming history of China and set a new world record for us.Yes, thats Sun Yang who gave us lots of surprise by winning two Olympic gold medals in swimming. Sun Y
10、ang became the first Chinese male swimmer to earn a gold medal as he won the 400m freestyle with an Olympic record in London on July 28th, 2012. It is the first gold medal a Chinese swimmer has ever won in the Olympic history.All of the Chinese are proud of him.He is the hero of the whole China. Sun
11、 Yang was born on December 1st, 1991 in Zhejiang.He is 198cm tall and 89kg in weight.Sun Yangs hobbies are singing and reading.Sun Yang loved sports when he was very young.He kept training hard every day and that is why he has made such great achievements. Now nearly every Chinese knows him.When he
12、goes anywhere, he must be followed by his fans, which makes his life less convenient and difficult, but he is very rich.So do you want to be a person like him? Information Card,当人们说“英雄”一词的时候，你会想到谁？你心中是否有一个英雄？也许你的英雄是个著名歌手，电影明星或者一个伟人。用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你心目中的英雄。内容包括： 1.谁是你心中的英雄。 2.为什么能够成为你心中的英雄。 3.他/她 曾经
13、有什么令你敬佩的事迹。 4.你从他们身上学到了什么。,Writing practice,Do you know .? He is my hero.,_,I learn a lot from And I want to be a .,beginning,body,ending,查（check by yourself）,Read your passage aloud, then check it by yourself.,1.要点齐了吗？ 2.句子结构对了吗？ 3.句子连贯吗？ 4.单词都写对了吗？ 5.有没错误的语法？ 6.书写整洁吗？,大声朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求,展示（show you
14、r passage）,show time,第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。 第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。 第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚 ,但有一些语言错误。 （以上为及格线） 第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。 第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。,评分档次和要求：,我欣赏，我快乐,小组活动：小组选出一篇作文进行欣赏并打分。（15分标准）,欣赏角度：,1.写作基本要求：人称，时态 2.要点齐全 3.结构：开头，正文，结尾 4.好词
15、好句,注意（作文通用修改符号：优美句子，漏词 ，错词O，去掉/）,Do you know Jet li? He is my hero. Jet Li has been interested in Kung Fu since he was young and has won lots of prizes.Later Jet Li played many important parts in action movies and became a famous film star. Although it was always hard for him to train, he never gave
16、 up. And he started One Foundation to help more people in need around the world. He is successful and helpful, so that he is always in our heart. I learn a lot from him. And I want to be a helpful and successful person like him in the future.,One possible version:,请把课堂上所写的介绍自己心目中的英雄的短文补充完整。不少于80词。,Homework （二选一）,Thank you,
