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1、决胜高考,专案突破,名师诊断,对点集训,短文改错,Hi, Mike. Thank you for your telephone call. Im glad to tell you what we have two rooms for you now. They are on the fourth floor, faced the West Lake, so you can see them well. You can choose one from them. The price to each room is $150 one night. Every morning from 7:00 t
2、o 9:30, we offer free breakfast, so you have to pay for if you have lunch and supper in our hotel. Dont forget bring your ID card on you. If you have any more question, please call Miss Black at 3846572, she you have any more question, please call Miss Black at 3846572, she will be pleasing to help
3、you. We are expecting you come to our hotel on August 16. We hope you would enjoy your stay with us. Thanks a- gain for choosing our hotel.,you have any more question, please call Miss Black at 3846572, she will be pleasing to help you. We are expecting you come to our hotel on August 16. We hope yo
4、u would enjoy your stay with us. Thanks a- gain for choosing our hotel.,【答案】,Hi, Mike. Thank you for your telephone call. Im glad to tell you we have two rooms for you now. They are on the fourth floor, the West Lake, so you can see well. You can choose one fromthem. The price each room is $150 one
5、night. Every morning from 7:00 to 9:30, we offer free breakfast, you have to pay for if you have,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,lunch and supper in our hotel. Dont forget bring your ID card with you. If you have any more , please call Miss Black at 3846572, she will be to help you. We are expecting you to come
6、 to our hotel on August 16. We hope you enjoy your stay with us. Thanks,again for choosing our hotel.,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,【误区诊断】,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,(续表),【误区警示】,通过分析近几年高考短文改错,我们可以看出,该题型难度不大,但不 容易得高分。究其根源,首先在于考生对语法知识掌握不牢固,句子 结构不明确。其次,句法成分分析不熟练,无法确定文章中所出现的 词性错误。再次,对于上下文的逻辑关系缺乏判断,导致对but, so等 连词的错误视而不见。
7、,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,【名师解析】,第一处:观察句子结构可知,tell后应为双宾语,由此可知后面的句子 要作tell的宾语。根据语法规则可知,what在宾语从句中可作主语、,宾语等成分,that不作句子成分,本身没有含义,可以省略。而此处的 句子成分完整,所以把what改为that,或者也可以去掉what。,第二处:faced与are之间没有连接词,face应用非谓语动词形式,由于 face和they有逻辑上的主谓关系,所以用动词-ing形式作状语。,第三处:前面提到the West Lake,是单数形式,所以要用代词it来代替, 而them只能代替复数名词。,名师诊断,专
8、案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,第四处:根据语义可知,此处指的是每个房间的价格,所以要把to改为 for。,第五处:上文提到提供免费的早餐,下文又说午餐和晚餐要付钱,所以,上下文是转折关系,因此要把so改为but。,第六处:表示“为付款”是要用pay for.,但是此处后面没有宾 语,所以要去掉介词for。,第七处:forget后面接动词可以有两种形式:forget doing sth(忘记做了 某事)和forget to do sth(忘了去做某事),此处的意思是“别忘了要带 上身份证”,所以要在bring前加to。,第八处:question是可数名词,根据前面的more可知,此处应为复数,所
9、以要把question改为questions。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,第九处:pleasing意为“令人愉快的”,而此处所表达的是Miss Black,的心理感受,所以要改为pleased“感到愉快的”。,第十处:观察句子结构可知,该句是含有宾语从句的复合句。hope是 一般现在时,而enjoy是将要发生的动作,所以不能用过去将来时,需 把would改为will。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,【考情报告】,考点分布统计表,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,(续表),名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,(续表),名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,(续
10、表),新型短文的改错短文长度在110词左右,体裁为记叙文,题材为 考生熟知的内容。设题的形式通常是多词和缺词各1题,错词8题。 设题以句为单位,每句最多两处错误。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,【考向预测】,2014年的全国卷该题型仍将以记叙文或信件为主,设题类型基本不 变,考查项目覆盖全面。,【解题技巧】,短文改错的错词在词法方面主要是:动词的时态错误、形容词或副 词的误用、名词的单数复数错误、代词误用、介词误用、连词误,用、非谓语动词形式错误等;句法方面是考查名词性从句连接词、 定语从句关系词和主谓一致等。多词或缺词主要考查冠词、不定 式符号to或介词。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点
11、集训,决胜高考,1.名词,名词主要考查单、复数的正确使用以及名词的所有格。,We, as well as animal, cannot live with- out water and neither agriculture nor industry can go without it.,【点石成金】animal是可数名词,前面没有冠词,意义上与we并列,所 以此处应改为animals。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,(辽宁卷).as a result, there was a long line of traf- fic for the least six mile.,【点石成金】
12、mile是可数名词,由前面的six可知,此处应用复数,所以 改为miles。,(新课标全国卷)When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.,【点石成金】由句意可知,此处在my friend后省略了home,因此应改 为friends,表示“到达朋友的家”。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,2.冠词,冠词考查分两个方面,一是冠词残缺或多余,考生要注意关于含有冠 词和不含冠词的用法以及加冠词与不加冠词的区别。二是冠词the, a,an之间的相互误用。,Gina nearly got knocked ov
13、er as car drove out far too quickly behind a lorry.,【点石成金】由句意可知,此处的car是泛指,所以要加不定冠词a。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,3.动词,(1)时态,通常是一般现在时改为一般过去时;,My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.,【点石成金】根据句子的时间状语last month可知,此处应为过去时, 所以改为visited。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,(2)语态
14、,主要是缺少助动词。,(2014吉林高三质检)Most of the work had finished when I got back to the factory.,【点石成金】由于finish和most of the work有动宾关系,应用被动语 态,句子是过去完成时,所以要加been。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,(3)非谓语动词,主要是现在分词与过去分词之间的误用,动词不定式符号to的添加, 动词原形变成动名词或现在分词的形式等。,Thank you so much for not only giving melife, but also teach me how to
15、 be a good person.,【点石成金】由前面的not only giving.可知,此处的but also teach. 与其应为并列关系,所以要把teach改为teaching。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,陕西卷)I also share with my friends many photos taking in Beijing.,【点石成金】动词take和photos有逻辑上的动宾关系,要用过去分词 作定语,所以taking要改为taken。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,4.代词,主要是代词的格与数的误用,以及代词指代统一性方面的错误。如 男性用了女性
16、代词;单数用了复数代词或相反;应该使用形容词性物 主代词却用了名词性物主代词等。,四川卷Im sorry that I am abroad and cant send your flowers, so Im writing to you.,【点石成金】动词send后需要接双宾语,此处的词应作宾语,而不是 作定语,所以用you。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,(辽宁卷)They finally dropped Gina off at her par- ents and made our way home.,【点石成金】由上文的we drove to the service station.可知,此处为 代词指代错误,应用We。,名师诊断,专案突破,对点集训,决胜高考,5.数词,主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用,以及hundred,thousand,dozen, score等词和具体数量词连用时的用法以及表示约数的用法。,(2014陕西西安一中质检)Hundred of students took part in the sports meeting last week.,
