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1、Cet-4 Reading & Writingdictation,Book 2 Unit 7-8 vocabulary,Dictation,1. to some extent 在某种程度上 2. in addition 此外 3. urgent situations 紧急情况 4. emergency room 急诊室 5. reduce greenhouse gas 减少温室气体 6. 引起兴趣 arouse interests,课外练习翻译部分,高频：词组搭配+虚拟语气,翻译词组搭配,20. Please dont stand in the kitchen, youre_(挡路了).33.
2、 Everybody knows he_(受到了冤枉指控).47. Cancer is _(仅次于) heart disease as a cause of death.,in the way,was/has been wrongly accused / charged,second/next only to,翻译词组搭配,25. The sports meet originally due to be held last Friday_(最终因天气不好而取消了).31.If this cant be settled reasonably, it may be necessary to_(诉诸
3、武力). 49. I would _(不会诉诸) a court of law if I hadnt been so desperate.37. I should say Henry is _ (与其说是个作家不如说是) as a reporter.,was cancelled/called off because of bad weather,resort to force,not have resorted to,not so much a writer,翻译-虚拟语气想象的，不是真的,动词过去式(be的用were）,would/could/might V,haddone/been,wou
4、ld/could/might/need havedone/been,If, ,1)2006年12月89题：The victim _(本来有机会活下来)if he had been taken to hospital in time。 2)2009年6月88题：If he had returned an hour earlier, Mary _(就不会被大雨淋了)。 3)2009年12月87题：You would not have failed if you _ (按照我的指令去做)。,would have had a chance to survive,wouldnt have been ca
5、ught by the heavy rain,真题翻译虚拟语气,had followed my instructions,翻译虚拟语气,5. Some women _(本来能够挣一份很好的工资) in a job instead of staying home, but they decided not to work for the sake of the family.15. Why didnt you tell me you could me the money? I_ (本来不必从银行借钱的)16.By the time you get to New York, I_ (已经动身去)
6、London.,could have earned a very good salary,neednt have borrowed money from the bank,will have left for,写作专题 I,30 min 15 %,四级写作评分原则,字数要求：不少于120字 阅卷标准共分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加一分（即9分）。但不得加或减半分。 Tips: 背模板，10-15个典型句式(p12-14)和25个高频词汇
7、短语(p18-23)，常用名言谚语。,写作评分标准80p2-4,2分-条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分-基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有些是严重错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。,写作分类,说明议论文： (1)分析现象型/精练p3,5,6(2)对立观点型 无提纲式议题论证文 应用文：演讲词，写信，通知等,分析现象型历年考题,11年6月
8、：网购 10年12月：父母为孩子包办一切 10年6月：学生不重视拼写09年12月：建设绿色校园 08年12月：一次性塑料袋的使用 08年6月：娱乐活动 07年12月：大学开选修课 06年6月：大学允许学生自主选择任课老师,分析现象型2种,（1）分析弊端(p3问题解决型)：例：2008年12月： 1. 一次性塑料袋曾广为使用； 2.由此带来的问题； 3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义。（2）分析原因(p5现象描述型)： 例：2010年6月： 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写； 2.出现这种现象的原因是 3.为了改变这种状况，我认为,第一段：提出问题,第一句：描述现象普遍 1. In recen
9、t years, with the improvement of (our living standards / information technology), more and more/a growing number of people are. 第二、三句：引出弊端/原因 （1）弊端：Undoubtedly, _has brought some benefits to our life,(for example.). However, every sword has two blades. This phenomenon has also triggered many problem
10、s. （2）原因： Why is this phenomenon so common around us? There are _ factors that may be responsible.,第二段：分析弊端/原因,背连词： 1. First,Moreover,Besides 2. For one thing,For another,Finally, 3. On the one hand,On the other handIn addition,第三段：总结并提意见或建议,三句话： 1. 总结观点：Through the analyses above, we can conclude t
11、hat 2. 号召采取行动：Therefore, it is necessary that actions should be taken to handle this problem. For example, 3. 理想的效果：Only by doing so can we solve the problem of,写作训练分析弊端(27min),1. 部分大学生有不健康的生活习惯，如晚睡、过度消费、沉溺游戏等。 2. 这种不健康生活习惯的危害。 3. 如何纠正。 Unhealthy Habits of College Students _ _ _,晚睡：staying up late,过
12、度消费：over-consuming/ over-consumption,沉溺游戏：addiction to video games,危害vt：do harm to,影响：have a negative effect on,养成习惯：form a habit of,分心：distract them from study,学业成绩：academic performance,戒掉习惯：get rid of the habit,身心健康：physical and mental health,第一段：提出问题,1. In recent years, with the improvement of (o
13、ur living standards / information technology), more and more/a growing number of people are. Undoubtedly, _has brought some benefits to our life,(for example.). However, every sword has two blades. This phenomenon has also triggered many problems.,1. 部分大学生有不健康的生活习惯，如晚睡、过度消费、沉溺游戏等。 2. 这种不健康生活习惯的危害。 3
14、. 如何纠正。,Unhealthy Habits of College Students _,晚睡：staying up late,过度消费：over-consuming/ over-consumption,沉溺游戏：addiction to video games,危害vt：do harm to,影响：have a negative effect on,养成习惯：form a habit of,学习分心：distract them from study,学业成绩：academic performance,戒掉习惯：get rid of the habit,身心健康：physical and
15、mental health,Sample,In recent years, with the improvement of our living standards, more and more college students have formed unhealthy habits, such as staying up late, over-consumption and addiction to video games. Those habits may have brought them fun and amusements, however, every sword has two
16、 blades. They have also triggered many problems. On the one hand, those unhealthy habits, especially staying up late, will do harm to their physical and mental health. On the other hand, those habits may distract them from their studies and have a negative effect on their academic performance. Throu
17、gh the analyses above, we can conclude that students try to get rid of those unhealthy habits. Therefore, it is necessary that actions should be taken by colleges and teachers to cultivate students self-discipline. Moreover, students should learn to schedule their spare time more properly. Only by doing so can we solve the problem of students unhealthy habits.,
