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1、,作文篇,专转本英语辅导,概述,占试卷的10%，共15分 考试时间：30分钟 字数要求：120词 评分标准：文章切题，表达清楚，意义连贯，无重大语法错误,评分标准,文章切题：作文应表达题目所规定的内容，紧扣这一中心展开；论述的细节必须与主题相关；所举的例子必须能支持论点。 衔接连贯：注意段与段、句子和句子之间的衔接，运用适当的过渡词。 行文：用英语清楚而正确地表达思想，避免造成理解障碍的语法错误。,具体阅卷标准,0分白卷，文不对题或只有几个孤立的词。 2分条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有严重语法错误。 5分基本切题，表达不清楚，连贯性差，大部分句子有语法错误。 8分基本切题，有的地方表达不够
2、清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误很多。 11分切题，表达清楚，文字连贯，有少量错误。 14分切题，表达清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误。,写作步骤（四步法）,第一步：审题 第二步：写提纲（主题句） 第三步：写正文 第四步：检查、修改,一、审题（写什么）,明确体裁：1. 提纲式作文（90%）2. 图表式作文3. 应用文 确定写作方法（提纲式作文）：1. 对比观点类2. 阐述主题类3. 说明利弊类4. 解决方法类,二、写提纲（主题句）,提纲式作文1.如果给出的提纲是中文，且是每段的主题句，将其翻译成英文即可。2.如果给出的提纲是完整的英文句子，照抄。3.如果给出的是不完整的中文或英文句子，补全形
3、成主题句。,图表作文1.第一句写表格或图表中的变化和趋势。2.第二句分析、描述造成这种情况变化的原因。3.第三句总结和预测。,三、写正文（三段论）,第一段：提出论点(introduction) 第二段：进行论证(body) 第三段：给出结论(conclusion),四、检查和修改,语言检查句子的检查1. 大小写及单词的拼写。2. 时态，语态，人称，主谓一致。3. 句子是否完整。4. 字数是否足够。5. 标点符号。语篇检查段落和语篇的检查1.主题是否明确，观点是否可靠，论证是否有力，结论是否恰当。2. 主题句是否放在句首，段落中的衔接词是否恰当。,提纲式作文,对比观点类阐述主题类说明利弊类解决方
4、法类,1.对比观点类,题型特点：要求对两种不同的观点进行对比，然后在此基础上表明自己的观点和立场。1有一些人认为2另一些人认为3我的看法,模式：两种观点第一种观点的陈述第二种观点的陈述自己的观点,真题举例：(2004年）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic. You should write no less than 120 words and base your com
5、position on the outline (given in Chinese ) below:1.为解决交通难的问题， 有人建议多建造马路。2.有人则建议限制私家车的数量。3.我的看法。,对比观点类作文模板：The topic of （主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of （支持A的理由一）What is
6、more,（理由二). Moreover, (理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),（理由二）. Thirdly (finally), (理由三).From my point of view, I think （我的观点）. The reason is that (原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain
7、my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.,2.阐述主题类,题型特点：要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述，在分析过程中，一般只对利或弊单方面分析。1.阐述主题所蕴涵的意义2.举例或分析原因使其更充实3.你的观点.,模式1：现象描述有利面分析提出观点 模式2：现象描述不利面分析提出观点,真题举例：（2007年）Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay about making the most of our school days. Y
8、ou should write at least 120 words and write your composition on the outline below.1. 生命是短暂的，时间是宝贵的。2. 在校学习的时间更短暂。3. 应该充分利用在校时光。,阐述主题类作文模板：The good old proverb （名言或谚语）reminds us that (释义). Indeed, we can learn many things from it.（主题句）. First of all, (理由一). For example, (举例说明). Secondly, (理由二). Anot
9、her case is that (举例说明). Furthermore , (理由三)Therefore/In my opinion, (我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say A. If you understand it and apply it to your study.,3.说明利弊类,题型特点：要求比较一件事物的优点和缺点，然后表明自己的观点或体会。1.说明事物现状2.事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）3.你对现状（或前景）的看法,模式：现象描述列举利弊提出观点,1996年1月（CET-4 真题） Direct
10、ions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Two-day Weekend. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 双休日给大学生带来的好处。2. 双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。3. 我应当怎样过好双休日。,说明利弊类作文模板：Nowadays many peopl
11、e prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.(主题句） Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First (的优点之一). Besides, （的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that (的第一个缺点)To make matters worse, (的第二个
12、缺点)Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to (我的看法)From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, (对
13、前景的预测),4.解决方法类,题型特点：提纲中未给出明显的结论，要求考生根据提纲列举解决问题的多种途径或得出结论。1.问题现状2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) 模式：现象描述分析说明提出观点,1994年1月（CET-4）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller. You should write at least 100 words and you should base yo
14、ur composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.现代的交通工具越来越发达；2.人与人之间的交往越来越频繁；3.结论。,解决方法类作文模板：In recent days, we have to face the problem A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, (说明的现状)Second, (进一步举例说明现状).Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope wit
15、h the situation. For one thing, (解决方法一). For another (解决方法二). Finally, (解决方法三).Personally, I believe that (我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because (带来的好处).,第一段It is universally a fact that more and more people are communicating via emails. （主题句）People send ema
16、ils to their relatives abroad on New Years time； job hunters apply for new job positions via email, and university students even hand in their homework via email to their teachers.（扩展句）,段落的写法 主题句+扩展句+(结尾句),段落的写法 主题句+扩展句+(结尾句),第二段Communicating via email is very convenient.（主题句） Firstly, it is very fa
17、st. It reaches the reader in a minute. Secondly, it is cheaper. You have to pay nearly 5 to send a letter abroad while sending an email costs nothing except the fee for the use of the internet. Lastly, its easier. You dont have to go to the post office or search your drawers for an envelop or stay at one place waiting for the reply. （扩展句）So long as you can find a computer connected to the Internet, you can get the email.（结尾句）,
