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1、写作技巧点拨系列(七)精研提纲材料, 轻松驾驭提纲作文【典例导练导练 】 (2014唐山模拟拟)作为为一名高三学生的你, 明年即将毕业毕业。现现在校报报征稿, 请请根据以下要点写一篇英语语短文, 谈谈谈谈 你对对高三生活的体会和建议议。1. 对对老师师与家长长的关爱爱表示感谢谢; 2. 向与自己发发生过过矛盾的同学表达歉意; 3. 努力学习习, 实现实现 人生梦想; 4. 对对学弟、学妹的建议议。【写作指导导】. 常用句式(1)as. . . (2)It wont be long before. . . (3)without. . . (4)Firstly. . . Secondly. . .
2、 Finally. . . . 黄金模板第一段: 简简述写这这篇文章的用意High school is always considered as the most cherished period of ones life(人生值值得纪纪念). As a Senior 3 student, it wont be long before I graduate(即将毕业毕业 ). Now, I have much to share with my fellow students. 第二段: 梳理提纲纲要点, 表达谢谢意、歉意和感悟Firstly, I would like to show my a
3、ppreciation of help from those standing by me all the way_. . . Secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates_. . . Above all, . . . Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains. ”_第三段: 对对他人的希望Finally I hope_谢谢意歉意感悟希望【审题谋审题谋 篇】信息全而不漏【佳句锤炼锤炼 】词词句精而高级级1. 作为为一名高三学生，不久就毕业毕业 了，现现在我有很多事情与同学们们分享。(
4、一般表达)Im a student in Senior 3 and Ill graduate soon. Now, I have a lot of things and Ill share with my fellow students. (介词词短语语+固定句式+不定式作定语语)_ a Senior 3 student, _I graduate. Now, I have much _ my fellow students. Asit wont be long beforeto sharewith2. 首先，我想向那些一直支持我，给给我帮助和关爱爱的老师师、父母、朋友表示感谢谢。如果没有他们们
5、的帮助和建议议，我的生活就会与现现在不一样样。(一般表达)At the beginning, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those who are standing by me all the way, teachers, parents, including friends. If there were no their help and advice, my life would be different. (过过渡语语+分词词作定语语+虚拟语拟语 气)_, I would like to show my appre
6、ciation of help from _by me all the way, teachers, parents, and _. _ _, my life would be different. Firstlythose standingfriends included Withouttheir help and advice3. 其次，到了向我伤伤害或误误解过过的同学道歉的时间时间 了。交流和微笑充当友谊谊的桥桥梁。(一般表达)Then, its high time that I should say sorry to my classmates. I hurt or misunders
7、tood them. Communication and smiles are used as bridges to friendship. (过过渡语语+固定句式+定语语从句)_, _say sorry to my classmates _ I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles _bridges to friendship. Secondly its high time towhomact as4. 尤其重要的是，我已经经下定决心努力学习习，因为为我相信，努力学习习是成功的钥钥匙，正如古代谚语说谚语说 的“不劳劳无获获”。(一般表
8、达)Importantly, Ive decided to make every effort to study. I believe hard work is the key to success, like the old saying, “No pains, no gains. ”(过过渡语语+高级词汇级词汇 +原因状语语从句)_ to make every effort to study, _ I believe hard work is the key to success. _, “No pains, no gains. ”Above all, Ive made up mymind
9、forJust as the old saying goes【连连句成篇】过过渡巧而自然High school is always considered as the most cherished period of ones life. As a Senior 3 student, it wont be long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students. Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standi
10、ng by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to my classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make e
11、very effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains. ” Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men. 【命题专题专 家如是说说】提纲纲作文解题题关键键提纲纲作文是高考试题试题 中最常见见的书书面表达命题题方式之一，通常会以中文、英文、中文+
12、英文、文字+表格、文字+图图片等不同的形式给给出要点，并要求考生根据所列要点组织语组织语 言，将所列要点完整、清晰地表达出来。需注意以下几点：1. 仔细细研读题读题 目。确定所写文章的主题题、人称、大致写作内容及主要采用的时态时态 等。2. 分析整合要点。对对所给给要点进进行分析及重新整合，并适当进进行细节扩细节扩 展。重新整合信息是为为了将信息分为为若干部分，划分依据是要点间间的逻辑逻辑 关系和相似性等。3. 确定文章体裁。根据题题目要求以及要点的特征来进进一步确定文章的体裁，根据要点的逻辑逻辑 关系来确定文章的整体框架和具体段落，并根据重整的信息来确定每个段落的具体内容。4. 斟酌具体表达。结结合要点的关键词键词 来确定所选选用的具体词词汇汇及搭配。结结合要点的内容以及所确立的文体本身的特点来选择选择 使用何种句型。结结合文体信息选择选择 合适的句型、适时时地交叉使用不同的句型也是一种需要培养的能力。
