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1、高考英语作文“六步法”教学创意与制作: 新世纪中学 郭中伦Step1 仔细审题Step2. 理清要点Step3. 译写单句Step4. 连句成篇Step5. 检查润色Step6. 定稿誊写高考英语作文“六步法”教学范例1 题目：Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for years. One morning Mr. Smith called at Mr. Greens. The following is their conversation. S: Good morning.G: Good morning.S: I havent seen
2、your son Tom for a long time. Has he made great achievements?G: Oh, I dont know if he is successful, but I know that he has drawn the governments attention and the police are searching for him. 分析：题目不难，但要完成两件事情 ：一是要把要点表达清楚，要传神、 达意；二是要把直接引语转换成间接 引语。要求：1、用间接引语描述如上 幽 默故事。2、词数为80100。第一步：仔细审题情景提供的方式是对话，题
3、材是 故事。内容是两个邻居之间的一段 幽默对话，涉及到的词汇有：used to ，call on，hesitate，make achievements，etc, 涉及的句子有简 单句、并列句、和复合句。词数为 80100。第二步：理清要点本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点 是Mr.Green家,人物有Mr.Smith和Mr.Green，事件是谈论 Mr.Green的儿子，故事以Mr. Green一段幽默的话结尾。 所以，本文要点如下：1、Mr. Smith和Mr.Green是曾是多年的邻居。2、一天上午，Mr.Smith去Mr.Green家拜访。3、他们互致问候早上好。4、Mr. S
4、mith说他已多年不见Mr.Green的儿子Tom了 ，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。5、Mr.Smith踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得 成就，但政府很重视他，警察也在全国各地找他。.第三步：译写单句1.Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years.2.One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.3.They said good morning to each other.4.Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr
5、.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements.5.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he knew that the government said that his son was very important. The police were after him everywhere in the country.第四步：连句成篇Mr
6、. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.They said “good morning” to each other.Then Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a m
7、oment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he only knew that the government said that his son was very important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第五步：检查润色Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Gree
8、n at his house. First, they greeted each other ( said “good morning” to each other),then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered (. He asked) if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he
9、 said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thought (said) that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第六步：定稿誊写Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on
10、Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achieve
11、ments, but he said he only knew that the government thought that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第六步：定稿誊写Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each
12、 other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the governm
13、ent thought that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.范例2题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一 篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045 平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方 明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国 政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她 已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium 。第一步：仔细审题本文属说明性文章。第二步：理清要点1、香港的地理位置、面积和人口
14、。2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。4、其前景会更美好。第三步：译写单句1. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million.2. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.3. In 1997, she returned to motherland.4. Her future is very beautiful.第四步：连句成篇Hong Kong lies
15、 in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k and (. Her) population is more than 6 million.She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.In 1997, she returned to motherland and (. Her) future is very beautiful.第五步：检查润色1Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of( Her area i
16、s)1,045k and (. Her) has a population of more than 6 million ( population is more than 6 million). She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”.In 1842,She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the 1842 Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong lived a hard life . In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and
