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1、阅卷老师的评分标准 切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖 用词不重复 句式变化多 杜绝中国式的英文 文章当中的闪光点 卷面的整洁，正确的修改形式阅卷老师的评分标准一、切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖。What would happen if there were no power? It pays to be honest A letter in reply to a friendSchedule for the day二、句式变化多 ( Expressions )v 句子的多样性（简单句，复合句，及省略 句、倒装句 )例: 在简单句当中运用几种结构 : 主语+谓语+ 宾语 主语+谓语+ 双宾
2、语（直接宾语，间接宾语） 主语+谓语+ 宾补 注意运用There be 的句型One car come, one car go, two car bang bang, one car die . 尽量多用一些被动语态，多用名词做主语，用被动代替主动, 丰富文章当中的句式变化。例： He is very interested in pop music.He shows great interests in pop music.Pop music is what he is interested in.Great interests has been shown by him in pop mus
3、ic.六 大 从 句 的 运 用: 宾语从句 定语从句 状语从句 主语从句 表语从句 同位语从句v As far as I am concerned I agree with the point that- v It goes without saying that - v As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that-三、用词不重复必须要注意写作的具体元素及，用 词切记多余重复(redundancy) 一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该 用不同的词来表达。 尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的 用 法: for example/ for ins
4、tance/as an illustration./A case in point is that good /wonderful/ great /fantastic /surprising nice /incredible/ fabulous / incredible interviewee/job applicant / job hunter /job seeker /the people who are going to find a job. 用句子和词组来代替一个词v in the first place, in the second place v There are many p
5、eople who hold/argue/maintain that-v It goes without saying that - v As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that-四、文章当中的闪光点在四级考试作文题目当中适当地运用谚语可以起到画龙点睛的作用，增加文章当中的闪光点。但是谚语引用在文章中最多不能超过三次，引用的谚语也不能太偏。 Each coin has two sides. A good beginning is half done . Where there is a will there is a way . “
6、God helps those that help themselves” A little learning is a very dangerous thing. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.五、 杜绝中国式的英文As a proverb says: “Americaand China not enough .” I saw a breadcar kiss a walkman in the man-line. Left see see, right see see. The driver is horse horse tiger tige
7、r. One stop, two see, three across. I will do an honest man. No money , no talk. Dr.Kongs husband Miao You no see me, you no go. I no see you, I no go. No see no go.Writing ModelsNowadays/at present, with the development of human civilization, as well as the significant improvement of the science of
8、 technology, and due to the rapid changes in our social lives, more and more people are concerning about whether 文章主题，As a result, the topic of 把主题改 写 为被动，is increasingly becoming the most popular controversy recently ,which raises many issues in the society.That reminds me of an old Chinese saying
9、which goes: “ Each coin has two sides .”Different people hold different kinds of opinions toward it. As a result, the attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person.切题与审题 四级考试当中对时间和篇幅都有严格的限制，因为考 场上的气氛比较紧张，作文又是考试的最后一项，所 以考生一定要注意是在是否你的作文里题目的每一个 选项都进行了覆盖，不要漏掉了任何一个段落标题。 建议考生在读完题目之后，快速确立自己的观点，把 他
10、写在草稿上，或在胸中打一个腹稿，由于试题当中 一般都给出了中文线索，你所列举的理由和例子一定 要与他们相一致，千万不要跑题 在图表作文当中，不要怕耽误时间，一定要看清并且 吃透图表的意思，不要匆忙动笔，避免跑题。注意看 清楚图表当中的提示和说明。考生在修改时的注意事项 语法，全篇时态是否一致，主谓是否一 致 是否把所有的标题都已经覆盖。 拼写，词组搭配，大小写。 检查一下句中的句式是否有变化，用词 是否重复在四级考试当中用词的注意现象必须要注意写作的具体元素既，用词切记不要重复 (redundancy)既一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不同的词来表达。 尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的用法:例
11、： for example/ for instance/as an illustration./A case in point is that good /wonderful/ great /fantastic /surprising /nice incredible/ fabulous / incredible interviewee/ job hunter / job seeker /the people who are going to find a job. Job applicant用句子和词组来代替一个词用法v in the first place, in the second p
12、lace, v There are many people who hold/argue/maintain/ that-v As far as I am concerned I agree with the opinion that-v I am in favor of the opinion that -v It goes without saying that -v As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that-v from my point of view, In the opinion of mine , 在四级考试当中句式的运用
13、（Expressions)v 注意句子的多样性：（简单句，并列句，复合句，省略，六大从句，非谓语结构 ） 例: 在简单句当中运用五种结构 : 主语+谓语 Mr Song is reading 主语+谓语+ 宾语 Mr Song is reading an English book. 主语+谓语+ 双宾语（直接宾语，间接宾语）Mr song is teaching us English. 主语+谓语+ 宾补Mr Song is teaching us to pass Cet-4.v 注意运用There be 的句型作文用词当中即不能太浅，太口语化，也不能用怪 词 偏词，即太多的专有名词。 例：H
14、e is very interested in pop music.He shows great interests in pop musicHe expresses the great enthusiasm in pop music. 尽量在多用一些被动语态，多用名词做主语， 用 被动代替主动。丰富文章当中的句式变化。 Pop music is what he is interested in. Great interests has been shown by him in pop music.高分作文的表达例1：John is good at writing in English.Wri
15、ting in English is what John is good at.例2：It is very important to learn English .To learn English is very importantEnglish is of great importance.Great importance should be attached to English.Learning English is very essential.Learning English should be paid much attention. More and more high school students have the chanceto go to university. More and more high
