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1、假设设你是李华华，在一所中学读书读书 。最近收到美国朋友Smith先 生的来信。他三年前参观过观过 你校，听说现说现 在变变化很大，希望了解 有关情况。参照下图图，给给他写一封回信介绍绍你校的变变化。注意： 1. 回信须须包括图图画的主要内容2. 可以适当增减细节细节 ，使内容连贯连贯3. 词词数100左右。A. 审题：（1）一封信（体裁）（2）谈学校的变化（三年前图1，三年后图2）（3）重点在三年后的描述B. 题纲及常用结构 1）开头语：收到来信hear from sb. / get （receive）your letter 2）学校的变化：experience/witness/happen
2、/take place新教学楼：a new school building 图书馆：our new library 新操场：the new playground树木环绕：lots of trees, surround, 3）表述方位的词：on one side （on the other side）on the right （left）There be ,in front of, in and around C. 将以上要点扩展成句并连文，注意句与句之间的过渡。练习表示方位的词组non one side of the roadnon the other sidenin front of the
3、noutsidenaround the schoolnat the back of nto the left of nto the right of nhave changednhave taken on a new looknhave taken placencan see great changesnused to be nthere werenbe located in nlie in nstand ncan see 练习表述内容的动词练习表述内容的动词Dear Mr. Smith I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to
4、 tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place in our school during the past three years. On one side of the road there is a new teaching building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building, our library. In it there a
5、re all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you will come and see for yourself some day. Best wishes，Yours, Li HuaDear Mr. Smith,Dear Mr. Smith,Im very glad to have received your l
6、etter. As you Im very glad to have received your letter. As you know, our school has changed a lot these years. Let me tell know, our school has changed a lot these years. Let me tell you something about it.you something about it.If you come to our school, you will see the new play If you come to ou
7、r school, you will see the new play ground and there are more trees inside and outside the ground and there are more trees inside and outside the school than before. Walking through the school gate, you school than before. Walking through the school gate, you can find the new library, which takes th
8、e place of the old can find the new library, which takes the place of the old playground on your left. playground on your left. On the right stands a new On the right stands a new teaching building with 40 classrooms. In the front of the teaching building with 40 classrooms. In the front of the scho
9、ol is the old building, but it has been equipped with a school is the old building, but it has been equipped with a lot of modern equipment.lot of modern equipment.If you have time, please come and see it. I think youll If you have time, please come and see it. I think youll get surprised at what yo
10、u see.get surprised at what you see. Best wishes, Best wishes, Your friend, Li Hua Your friend, Li Hua Dear Mr. Smith,Dear Mr. Smith,In your letter, you said you were eager to know the In your letter, you said you were eager to know the new appearance of my school. Now I am glad to tell you new appe
11、arance of my school. Now I am glad to tell you the great changes happening in our school.the great changes happening in our school.First and foremost, there are two newly-built buildings First and foremost, there are two newly-built buildings standing on both sides of the school, standing on both si
12、des of the school, of which one replaces of which one replaces the old playground.the old playground. Besides, what excites us is the library, Besides, what excites us is the library, which lies on the other side and can meet our demands for which lies on the other side and can meet our demands for
13、knolwdge.knolwdge. As for the playground, we can enjoy more As for the playground, we can enjoy more relaxation and exercise due to its expansion. Last but not relaxation and exercise due to its expansion. Last but not least, our school has been surrounded by plenty of trees, least, our school has b
14、een surrounded by plenty of trees, which not only add to the beauty of the school but also which not only add to the beauty of the school but also reward us with a more peaceful environment.reward us with a more peaceful environment. Only when you see it with your own eyes will you Only when you see it with your own eyes will you realise how beautiful it is!realise how beautiful it is! I am looking forward to seeing I am looking forward to seeing you and being your guide!you and being your guide! Best wishes, Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua Yours, Li Hua Dear M
