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1、初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导brainstormTeenagerscolorful lifeWe study .We like listening to music. We play computer games for long.We like reading books.We often play Sports.We go to KFC .Sometimes we travel.Sometimes we stay up studying.Teenagershealthy lifeWe study all day.We like listening to music. We play co
2、mputer games for long.We like reading books.We often play Sports.We go to KFC.Sometimes we travel.Sometimes we stay up studying. 认真审题,找出文章要表达的中心 。写作第一步审审健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天,会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢?国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查,右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息,请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。审travelstay at home
3、visit friends or parentswork 用简单的句子或短语列出文章 要点。列写作第二步根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句 子列出文章的要点 如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休 闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列A lot of people travel .
4、 Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice body加 加首尾,使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结 构,开头或
5、结尾的句子应注意简 洁,漂亮。写作第三步:3 2 1 4 6 5 Second , we should keep quiet in the library. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life. Whats more, we ought to re
6、turn books on time. Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them. Third , we must do lots of homework. How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Som
7、e other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.连 恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次 清晰,各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步:1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all
8、, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in t
9、he end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, 关联词关联词lets play the game.lets play the game. _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ s
10、wimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However
11、, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连 We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to
12、stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美美 选好词句,美化文章。在有把握的 情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步:Skill One Make your sentences correc
13、t Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.once a week SavingbeachieveSkill Two Express in different waysOur parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us
14、to put our heart into study. The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers.We shouldnt eat junk food.We should stay away from the junk food.When he spoke, he got more excited.The more he spoke, the more excited he got.We should learn English grammar.Its important to learn
15、 English grammar.书面表达写作技巧审审列加连美中考作文评分标准第一档(13-15分) 信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档(10-12分) 信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思 表 达。 第三档(7-9分) 能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本 可读。 第四档(4-6分) 只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子 可读。 第五档(1-3分) 只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。 书面表达书面表达 以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60个 词的短文, 标点符号不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型 供参考) My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes trueI have a dream Have you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider. I fell in love with b