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1、 作文评分标准： 第一档：13-15分（内容齐，语句通，基本无错误） 第二档：10-12分（内容齐，语句较通顺，有少数语 言错误） 第三档：7-9分（内容齐，语句较通顺，有一些语言 错误） 第四档：4-6分（内容齐，能写出少量句子，表达不 连贯，语言错误较多） 第五档：0-3分（只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺 乏逻辑性，错误多）平时训练中的几个注意点平时注重解题技巧的养成 1、准备工作.仔细审题，明确要求。罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意，列出要 点。 .紧扣要点，寻求思路。草拟提纲，确定开头，选词、选句，拟好 结尾（可适当发表自己的观点）。 2、写作之中.开门见山，紧扣主题 。.语言正确, 规范
2、地道。 句型、结构，避免中国式英语。 I spent 10 yuan buy the book. He by bike to school. I spent 10 yuan buying the book.He goes to school by bike./He takes a bus to school.重短轻长, 就易避难。 .过渡自然, 表达流畅。以写正确、通顺为最基本要 求。 正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。不重复使用可置换的词。3.成文之后 . 一般语法项目的检查 人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their of
3、fice.时态: She buy this beautiful dress yesterday.主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 习惯用法: He helps me in my English. . 符合英语使用习惯 My work is very busy.I very much like it.Im very busy with my work.I like it very much. 书写规范, 卷面整洁。Unit2 Topic1 Lets do something to keep hazy weather awayNowadays, hazy
4、 weather has appeared(出现，发生) in many cities in China. The air pollution in these areas is very serious. Thats because many factories and cars give off (发出，放出)waste gas.（第一段：雾霾的原因 ）Because of the serious air pollution，people darent open windows to let in fresh air. When they go outdoors，they have to
5、wear masksAlso， students have to stop outdoor activities to avoid breathing in bad airOn hazy（有薄雾的） days, many traffic accidents happen and many flights are delayed because people cant see clearlyLast but not least（最后但也同样 重要的），the serious air pollution has also caused many diseases and many people l
6、ose their lives(lose ones life 失去某人的生命).（第二段：导致的问题）As a student，we can go to school by bike instead of（代替，而不是，+v.ing）by carWe should call on（打电话）our friends to take the underground or the bus to workWe can call on people to plant more trees and ask the government to improve the public transport serv
7、ice （公共交通服 务）.（第三段：采取的措施）We believe if we take actions, the air will be as fresh as（as+adj./adv.原级+as .和一样） before. （第四段：总结，号召 ） （红色字体为词组，请留心记一记喔！）Unit2 Topic2Creating Beautiful Environment, Building Pleasant HomesWith the help of(=with ones help 在的帮助下) high technology，life is getting more and more(
8、后跟形容词原级，“越来越. .”) comfortable and convenient. Most families have refrigerators, computers, mobile phones, cars and so on. We can eat kinds of fresh fruit and vegetables all year round(全年，一年到底).However, at the same time, green land has become less and more pollution has been caused.（过渡段）As students,
9、we really need to(后跟动原，“需要做.”) do something, such as(后跟v.ing，比如) going to school on foot, by bicycle or by bus instead of by car. We should save water and energy at anytime and anywhere. We should urge more people to recycle waste paper, bottles，batteries and many other things.If everyone does a bit
10、, our homes will become more pleasant and beautiful.（发出憧憬）Unit2 Topic3 How to Protect Our Environment The environment pollution is becoming more and more(后跟形容词原级 ，“越来越”) serious. We can see white pollution everywhere(=here and thee 处处，到处). There has been hazy （有薄雾的）weather in many parts of China in
11、recent years（用于现在完成时）. I suggest that we should try to take a bus or an underground instead of（后跟v.ing，“代替，而不是”）driving by ourselves（by oneself 自行，独自）. We should prevent factories from（doing sth. 阻止做） dumping the waste into rivers to reduce water pollution. We shouldnt use disposable plates, bowls a
12、nd so on. We should plant more trees and grow grass to prevent it. We should also prevent people from cutting down（砍到） too many（后跟可数名词复数，“太多”） trees. If we try our best（try ones best to do sth.,”尽某人最大的努力做”）, the environment will be better and better（比较级 and 比较级 “越来 越”）.Unit2 How to save environment?
13、 I think we should do the followings: First, its best to ride a bike to school, dont take a bus or a taxi. Second, I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Third, in my free time, I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling. The fourth idea is turning off
14、 the shower when Im not using it. Fifth, it is important to save water and money. Also, I wont spend too much money on expensive things. Last, we had better not cut down the trees, we have to take care of the trees . Ill try my best to save the energy, I hope I can do something for our country.期中测试O
15、ur school is our second home. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. Everyone can do something useful to improve the environment. First of all, I think it is necessary for us to clean the school yard every day. We must clean the windows and the doors. We also need to sweep the floor. Make sure ev
16、eryone knows to throw rubbish into the dustbins. Those who do well in protecting the environment should be spoken highly of. Of course, a lot of trees and grass should be planted in our school so that our school looks greener. In a word, if every student makes a contribution to protecting the environment, our school will be much more beautiful.
