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1、书面表达专题-How to write a letter for advice如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯 ，条理清楚。要 点 全 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法 多样化（较复杂）语言地道连 接 词写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。3. 基本框架：开头（beginning）- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your
2、idea)主体(body)- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)结尾(ending)- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)4. 注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确 、具有合理性和说服力； 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议； 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。常用套语 A建议信开头常用句式 (照应
3、材料,表明写作意图) 1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to 3. I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter 4. I am writing to you for the purpose of 5. I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you. 6. You have asked me fo
4、r some advice with regard to and I will try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about/on B. 表达建议（body） 1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that 3. If I were you, I would 4. Why not ?/ How (What) about doing 5. i
5、s a good/great idea. 6. You may consider doing 7. It would seem/seems to me that you could 8. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you shouldFirst,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After that,/ In the end,/ Finall
6、y, /Meanwhile, /Whats more,/ In addition,/ Besides,/ Furthermore, C.建议信结尾常用句式 1. I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.2. I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this reg
7、ard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.假如你叫孙军，是红星高中的学生，要给市长 写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括 以下要点：参考词汇: 穿行 thread ones way 天桥 overpass 问题建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着
8、 大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 之孩子小, 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。政府应采取措施, 如修天桥等。第一步：审题审题 养成重视审题视审题 的习惯习惯 。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的， 但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为 例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题问题样题样题 分析 第几人称？（person）文章的体裁是什么？要写的文章主题题是什么 (topic)怎样样安排信息点的顺顺序？ (order) 动动作是什么时时候发发生的？(时态时态 ) (when)第一人称一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交 通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性一般现在时三个步骤Step 1 List the key pointsSt
9、ep 2 Make sentences Step3. Form a passage and polish适当运用模 板模板二：Dear _(对象)，I am writing to express my views concerning _(问题).First and for the most, _(建议一). In addition, _(建议二). Whats more _(建议三).I hope youll find these proposals useful.Yours sincerely,Li MingDear_,You have asked me for my advice wit
10、h regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion(以我拙见见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _.I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good luck with you / your _(祝愿).Yours s
11、incerelyLi Ming Dear Bob, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议议) As to , I suggest (有时时根据需要 具体到某一反面). In addition, (其
12、他建议议 ). Im sure (预测预测 可能的结结果，给对给对 方 以行动动的信心和决心). Im looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议学校和一所小学毗 邻，对着大街，高 峰期交通繁忙；加 之孩子小, 家长接 送。交通更拥挤； 学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。政府应采取措施, 如修天桥等。学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街 stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheres a primary school near our sc
13、hool, and both schools face the main street.Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.推荐句型：There be+并列句非谓语结构Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.润色小建议Next to a primary school将介词短语提前（全倒装）stands/lies/is our school , faced
14、 with / facing a main street.可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by)border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与毗邻在对面 be opposite toThe traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙traffic. during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that
15、During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.so. thatwith结构With so many cars and buses going on the road, 润色小建议“高峰期”可意译:at peak time，a large current of cars and people “交通繁忙”可译为: traffic jamcongestion 交通堵塞be choke up withbe crammed with 被堵塞/塞满加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤sendto, fetch. , which 非谓语结构.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier.加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤 Whats more, pick up.
