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1、Tips for CET-6 WritingTips for CET-6 Writing英语六级考试作文英语六级考试作文英语六级写作要求英语六级写作要求对写作的较高要求（6级）是：能就一定的话题、提纲、表格或图表在30分钟内写出200词的短文，能写日常应用文（如信函、简历等），内容完整，条理清楚，文理通顺。 评分标准：语言+内容切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注意：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思 想，则给0分。 1.如题目中给出英文主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数 2.规定的内容未写全者， 按比例扣分。只写一段者：04分；只
2、写两段 者：09分（指规定三段的作文）3.长度计分标准: 140-149词: 扣1分 130-139: 扣2分 120-129: 扣3分 110-119词: 扣5分 100-109扣7分 99字以下扣8分。 4.为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，各档作文分相当于百分制的得分 ，称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60%写作计分换算对照表：分数（106.543.5）=得分X10X0.15六级考试作文评分注意事项六级考试作文评分注意事项高分作文标志 1. 篇幅：围绕给定的题目四级120-180字；六级不得少于200字； 2. 句式：是否长短句交叉,即是否有句式变换； 3. 选词：用词是否恰当、准确、形象，要
3、有几个能够抓人眼球的闪光词； 4. 关键词：是否换用，切勿老用重复词；5. 连贯性：是否善于使用标志词和过渡词实现文章层次间的衔接。6. 书写卷面工整。（作文没有草稿纸，也没有打草稿时间，要训练一次写成功。）7. 无重大语言错误。考生最常犯的语言错误有三类：语法、拼写、标点。最常犯的语法错误包括：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。要避免拼写错误；避免语法错误；避免中文式英语。如：Some people are begin; There are some people want ; Why happen these things。Recent Changes in Chinese Life观观
4、点： 经济经济 条件变变化：收入增多，房子变大，家用电器增多 沟通方式变变化：面对面、写信-mobile phone, QQ, WeChat 交通方式变变化： 步行、 自行车、公交车地铁、私家车 娱乐娱乐 方式变变化：打牌、听广播电影，KTV, 旅游，手游 教育方面变变化：很少上学-中小学义务教育，大学普及 家庭关系变化： 住一起，关系近-关系疏远 家庭地位变变化：男高女低平等，甚至女高男低新： 支付方式变变化：现金-网银、支付宝、微信支付 父母子女关系：父母是权威平等，朋友式；诱惑多，离婚率 上升，单亲家庭整体问题问题 ：不分段，内容杂乱，例子和开头结尾搅在一起时态：过去情况不用过去时态内容
5、：只写一个变化微信/收入增加changes in Chinese life只写现在情况，不写过去，没有突出变化整篇文章复杂句过多细节问题细节问题 ：1， 用词不当with the development of economy=with the economic development误用：economics, economic, finance， financialin recent years误用： near， close， nearlyadv，差不多，几乎Chinese government= the government of China 中国政府误用：china, Chinas, Ch
6、ina governmentadvanced technology误用：high/good technology2，语言赘述In the past, people didnt have enough money to buy food to eat and to buy clothes to wear.They treat each other like with friends.3，搭配错误a lots familiesMost families can feel two kinds of change. On one hand is in basic necessitieson the o
7、ther hand is in entertainment副词，一般放在句子前单独使用4，中式英语They believe a good education is much more significant than taking their children to an expensive restaurant. 没有可比性改为： consider education very importantOur basic necessities of life conditions have been very good to meet.改为： It is easy to meet the dem
8、and of our basic necessities.They were so poor that they didnt have conditions to buy new clothes.改为： .they couldnt afford new clothes.Having this life depends on our forefathers5，相同成分叠置Through all the above examples can be seen that Chinese family life will be better in the future.Through all the a
9、bove examples和it can be seen that意思作用相同，保留一个即可6，口语化表达Lets see some examplesWe need to eat wellPeople dont need to worry about breadMuch income let Chinese people to buy more things 7，句子不完整 Do these changes mainly in clothing, food, living and transportation.A big change in the education.The people i
10、n city is becoming more and more.8，语法错误That is technology makes people closer.改为：It is technology that makes people closer.With the economy developing rapidly and the impact ofChanges are everywhere. -名词/副词，随处可见The food was simply in the past.9,其他错误In the past, people wore clothes only to keep warm,
11、 but now clothes whose colorful is more abundant and style is more varied show individual tastes.改为：the clothes are rich in color and style, which shows peoples individual tastes.In the past, because of lack of moneyvividly life -改为： colorful life范文 1Great changes have taken place in Chinese family
12、life in the past thirty years. In my parents words, the difference between their childhood and mine is as vast as that between heaven and earth.When may parents were young, there was no TV, computers nor other electrical appliances in their home. Their food was simple and their clothes plain. What i
13、s unbelievable to young people today is that they seldom dined out in a restaurant, or travelled to a scenic spot for a holiday.In contrast to family life one generation ago, each family in today China has at least one TV set and many have been equipped with computers, telephones and cars, etc. Whil
14、e the senior members of a family see films at home, children play computer games or talk with their friends on the internet.The changes in Chinese family life mirror the economic development of our country. Without the prosperity of the whole country, our family life would probably be just the same as before. Times have changed. There is no doubt that our life will be better and better.Thank YouThank You
