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1、第十三节节 说说明文1抓住中心，分清主次首先要仔细阅读细阅读 文字提示或观观察图图表，确定文章的中心内容，再根据内容把文章分成几个段落，每段都要拟拟定一个主题题句，然后确定中心人称和主体时态时态 。2列全要点，扩编扩编 句子以拟拟定的主题题句为为中心，选择选择 恰当的词语词语 和句型组织组织 材料，编编写句子，形成段落。3谋谋篇布局，连连句成文按照一定的逻辑顺逻辑顺 序，用适当的过过渡词词把已经经写好的段落串联联成一篇完整的文章。佳句递递送好开头1他出生在1990年，现现在是一个20岁岁的学生，正在一所大学就读读。Born in 1990，he，a 20yearold student，is s
2、tudying in a university.Born in 1990，he is now a 20yearold student，studying in a university.2加拿大，世界第二大国，占地997万平方公里。Canada，which is the second largest country in the world，covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres.Canada，the second largest country in the world，covers an area of 9.97 million sq
3、uare kilometres.Canada，covering an area of 9.97 million square kilometres，is the second largest country in the world.好结尾1She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to.她为科学研究献出了一切，对作出了巨大的贡献。 2She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievements.因为在
4、化学方面的科研成就她被授予诺贝尔奖。 3His achievements are worthy of praise.他的成就值得称赞。好句子1作为一个鼓舞人心的领导，人们已经开始喜欢他了。He is considered as an inspiring leader and people come to love him.He，considered as an inspiring leader，is more and more popular.People come to love him as an inspiring leader.2他对对所有人及自己所做的任何事情都严严格要求，这让这让他
5、深受人们们的爱爱戴。He was strict with everybody and in everything he did；as a result，he is deeply loved and respected.He was strict with everybody and in everything he did，so he is deeply loved and respected.He was strict with everybody and in everything he did，which makes him deeply loved and respected.3他在当
6、地很有名气，引起了一名中国著名歌唱家的注意，并把他推荐给给了中国中央电视电视 台。He gained popularity in local areas，which caught attention of a famous Chinese singer，who recommended him to CCTV.He was popular in local areas，catching attention of a famous Chinese singer，who recommended him to CCTV.His popularity in local areas caught atte
7、ntion of a famous Chinese singer；as a result，she recommended him to CCTV.4坐落在山顶顶的庙经历庙经历 了这这个地区的许许多变变化。The temple stands on the top of the mountain，and has experienced many changes in this area.Standing on the top of the mountain，the temple has witnessed many changes in this area.佳作赏赏析题目要求(广东高考)你接受了一
8、项项写作任务务，要为为英语语校报报写一篇人物介绍绍。写作内容请请根据以下信息，介绍绍一位传传奇人物。姓名：Allan Stewart国籍：澳大利亚亚出生日期：1915年3月7日世界纪录纪录 ：2006年获硕获硕 士学位*时时年龄龄最大学习态习态 度：挑战战自我，永远为时远为时 不晚。第一个学位：1936年获获得第二个学位：医学博士*第三个学位：80多岁时岁时 决定学习习法律，2006年获获得硕硕士学位。第四个学位：2012年通过过网络络学习获习获 得，善于合理安排学习时间习时间 ，受到老师师表扬扬。*硕硕士学位：masters degree；*博士：doctor写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内
9、容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。现场阅卷精彩变式 用句型“it is never too late to do.”进行改写用现在分词的完成式作状语进行改写用定语从句进行改写 用过去分词短语作状语进行改写 升级五档作文Allan Stewart，an Australian old man，born on March 7,1915，is already the holder of the world record for being the oldest graduate.He thinksit is never too late to challenge himself to
10、achieve something worthwhile.He got his first degree in 1936，followed by a doctors degree of medicine.Having decided to study law in his eighties，he got the masters degree in 2006，which was his third degree.In 2012，he received his fourth degree by network learning，praised for his proper arrangement
11、on his study schedule. 演练练提升假设设你是一所对对外汉语汉语 大学的工作人员员，新学期开学时时，请请你用英语语写一段有关学校服务设务设 施的文字介绍绍，并将其张贴张贴 在新生宿舍门门口，方便不懂汉语汉语 的学生熟悉环环境。其中应应包括以下要点：1商店、邮邮局、银银行在校园西部游泳池附近；2营业时间营业时间 ：商店每天9002200 邮邮局9001700周末休息 银银行中国银银行9001700可兑换兑换 外币币；3理发发店在银银行对对面，洗衣房在宿舍楼后面一栋栋楼的第一层层；4服务电话务电话 ：8645336。注意：1.词词数120左右；2开头头已为为你写好，不计计入总词
12、总词 数。参考词汇词汇 ：兑换兑换 外币币currency exchange 洗衣房laundry To all the new students，Welcome to our school.To make your stay here more enjoyable，heres some information about the service available at our school. 【参考范文】 To all the new students，Welcome to our school.To make your stay here more enjoyable，heres som
13、e information about the serviee available at our school.Located in the west of our school，just near the swimming pool，are the shops，the post office and the bank.The shops stay open from nine in the morning till ten at night，where you can get daily necessities.The post office is open for eight hours，
14、from nine am to five pm.And it doesnt open duringthe weekends.There is a Bank of China，which can provide you with currency exchanges.It is open for eight hours，beginning at nine in the morning.By the way，theres a barbers just opposite the bank.If you want to go to the laundry，there is one on the ground floor of the building just behind the dormitory.If you have any difficulty，you may just call our hotline,8645336.We are always ready to provide you with our good service.
