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1、博士生入学考试英语辅导 （写作部分）黄 年 根解放军理工大学工程兵工程学院Lecture on WritingFor Non-English Major Doctor Candidates By Prof. Huang Engineering Institute of Engineer Corps,PLA University of Science and EngineeringRequirement：write a passage of 120-140 words in 30 minutes Grading Criterion: 1. coherence (内容切题）： related id
2、eas, topic sentences in paragraphs; 2. construction: full development, unity, logic, cohesion, being clear and to the point; 3. transition and variation of sentences; 4. grammar and dictionSampleTopic:Do you think it a good idea to have the graduate students participate in more physical activities i
3、n the army, factories or the countryside instead of concentrating on their textbooks alone? Give your reasons to support your opinionsI think it a good idea to have the graduate students participate in more physical activities in the army, factories or the countryside instead of concentrating on the
4、ir textbooks alone. It bases on the following reasons.The most important of all, These activities is good to our health. By more physical activiteis in the army, factories or the countryside. Our body can be exerciesed stronger and more heathy. So It can deal with our poor health after long term stu
5、dying. Secondly, It can make us connect the knowledge with the proactieces. Our knowledges are often limited to the textbooks and we often find it is impractcable after we graduate from colleges. So, It is useful to make out knowledge more reasonable. Thirdly, It help us develop the patrocism idea.
6、And recognize our nations real situaltion.Based on the above reasons, I think we should participate in more such activities.AppraisementI think it a good idea to have the graduate students participate in more physical activities in the army, factories or the countryside instead of concentrating on t
7、heir textbooks alone. It bases on the following reasons.The most important of all, These activities is good to our health. By more physical activiteis in the army, factories or the countryside. Our body can be exerciesed stronger and more heathy. So It can deal with our poor health after long term s
8、tudying. Secondly, It can make us connect the knowledge with the proactieces. Our knowledges are often limited to the textbooks and we often find it is impractcable after we graduate from colleges. So, It is useful to make out knowledge more reasonable. Thirdly, It help us develop the patrocism idea
9、. And recognize our nations real situaltion.Based on the above reasons, I think we should participate in more such activities.Para. 1 just a copy of the topic direction Mistake in “It bases on” It should be corrected as “It is based on.”1. Capitalization: 2. Spelling mistakes 3. Grammar mistakes 4.
10、Illogic 5. Poor dictionSample 2:Not just on your textbooksAs a graduate student, you can not just pay attention to your textbooks. You should participate in more physical activities in the army, factories or countryside.First of all, we are in a society that is full of all kinds of knowledge. It is
11、necessary for us to learn them in the society. Then, if you want to be competitive in applying a job after graduation, you had better participate in more physical activities. For a company, your social experience may be more important than your knowledge from your textbooksNot just on your textbooks
12、Finally, taking such activities can help you grasp your textbook better. When you solve the practical problem with your knowledge, you improve it also. I would like to give the suggestion: Dont missing any opportunity to participate in physical activities.评析：观点明确，文字连贯。应得8分。Para.2 and Para. 3 can be
13、combined to have a close-knitted passage.Too simple conclusion.Styles Of WritingDescription: describing the appearance, inner structure, etc of certain objects or the steps or stages of a process, a method, etc. Sample:The most famous of the Egyptian pyramids are the pyramids of Giza. These pyramids
14、 were built more than 5,000 years ago. The biggest of them is the Great Pyramid”, the Pyramid of Khufu. It was 146 metres high, and each of the four sides measured 230 metres and faces exactly north, south, east or west. It was made of about 2,300, 000 blocks of stone, all exactly the same shape. Th
15、e weight of each block is about 2.5 tons. The inside blocks were cut out of rock near the pyramid. .Styles Of WritingNarration: recording a series of events that occur one after another. Events are often stated or narrated in their natural time order. Sample:The origins of Nanjing Engineering Instit
16、ute can be traced to a department of Harbin Military Engineering Institute in the 1950s. In 1964 it was moved to xian. There it went through various difficulties and obstacles. 15 years later it merged with Nanjing Engineering School. It started to admit students from the national examination in 1978. At the Threshold of the 21st century it will see another major change and challenge. Styles Of WritingExposition:
