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1、 1.neighbor与为邻 2.be made up of/consist of由组成 3.be located /situated in/near坐落在 4. serve as当用 5.with /has a history of有的历史相关短语6. with/has a population of有人口7.cover an area of 面积有.8. the third largest city第三大城市 9. be famous for以而著名10. be well-known for/as因为/作为而出名11. on its east lies 东边有12. a fantastic
2、 place 一个极好的地方13. be rich /abundant in盛产14. a three-storeyed building一栋三层楼的房子1. I would like to introduce my hometown to you. 我向你介绍一下我的家乡。2. My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province. 我的家 乡, 毗邻香港, 位于广东省。相关句式3. Guangzhou, a city with a population of about thirteen million,
3、has a history of more than 2,200 years.广州, 拥有一千三 百人口的一座城市, 有三百多年的历史了 。4. Covering a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers this city has a population of about ten million.这座城市占地面积达7, 434平方公里, 人口大约是10, 000, 000。5. It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, and has mild climate. 它 自然资源得天独厚,
4、有丰富的煤和金矿 , 而且气候温和。6. Our school is no longer what it used to be.我们学校再也不是过去的样子了 。1. 介绍或描述地点的基础写作, 通常以表格 形式来呈现写作点。该类表格通常有两列, 其中一列概括事物特征、属性, 另一列对此 特征、属性展开描述。学生必须重新组织 表格内容, 不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻 译, 如不能写成“The location of Guangzhou is in the south of China”这样不地道的句子, 相应的表达应该是: Guangzhou lies in the south of China
5、.2. 确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征的文章 通常使用一般现在时。3. 避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对 象或设定情景，避免用it作主语引导第一句, 而 应该具体写出描述的对象，如the Great Wall, Hong Kong等。但如果整篇文章 多处用“it” 等 作主语,文章会稍显逊色, 所以在写作过程中, 可 根据文意适当变换主语, 如改写为the place, the city等。你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点， 用5个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括 全部信息要点，介绍的开头已经给出，不计入5个句子中。 【信息要点】历历史 有两千多年
6、的历历史。 特点世界上最长长的城墙墙, 长长6000多千米; 建筑材料主要为为石头头, 砖头砖头 , 修建工作都是人工进进行; 主要用于防御外来入侵者, 沿墙墙每隔几百米就有烽火 台(watchtower)。 现现状 世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许许多外国游客到长长 城观观光旅游。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。例题导写 1. 按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容(即“ 历史、特点、现状”)的先后顺序进行写作， 这样既可避免重整顺序而浪费时间, 也避免 错改顺序而给老师带来阅卷困难。 2. 草拟提纲、简单翻译是写作重要步骤之一 。请
7、翻译要点： (1) 有(多久)的历史 _It has a history of . (2) 世界最长的城墙 _(3) 6000多千米长 _(4) 由石头, 砖头做成 _(5) 由人工修建 _be constructed by handthe longest wall in the world6000 kilometers longbe made of stones and bricks6) 防御外来入侵者 _ _(7) 每隔几百米 _every few hundred meters prevent the country from being invaded; defend the count
8、ry against foreign invaders(8) 著名旅游景点之一_(9) 吸引许多外国游客 _one of the famous scenic spots; one of the famous places of interest; one of the famoustourist attractionsattract many foreign visitors3. 规范表达名词。如果名词修饰语 过长, 应转用 “a / an / the +名词+of” 的表达, 例如, “两千多年的历史”应 该写成“a history of two thousand years”, 而不能写成
9、“two thousand years history”。4. 变换表达, 丰富句式。 请按要求完成句子： (1) It is more than 6000 kilometers in length, _(“是 世界上最长的城墙”, 使用非限制性定语从句)(2) It was the Great Wall _ _in ancient times. (“ 帮助人们防御外来入侵者”, 使用强调句)that helped people fightagainst the foreign invaderswhich makes it the longest wall in the world(3)_ _
10、, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.(“长城 主要用于防御外来入侵者”, 使用原因状语从句)(4) The Great Wall is one of the well-known places of interest on earth, _ _.(“每年吸引许 多外国游客到长城观光旅游”, 使用非谓语结构)As the Great Wall was built to defend people against the invaders appealing to a large number of fo
11、reigners every year(5) The Great Wall is _ a famous historical attraction _ it attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign visitors each year.(使用“如此以致”的句型表达)(6) So _that it attracts hundreds of thousands of visitors home and abroad every year.(“长城如此吸 引”, 使用倒装句)attractive is the Great Wallsuch that参考范文
12、 Ladies and Gentlemen，Welcome to the Great Wall. The Great Wall, which is more than 6, 000 kilometers long, is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2, 000 years. It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine. As the wall
13、was built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many foreign visitors every year.能力提高 1. 请根据中文提示, 完成有关地点介绍的 语汇积累。 (1) 位于 _ (2) 靠近 _ _next to / close to, in the neighborhood of, neighboring.be located /situated in；lie(s)in(3)有(多少)人口 _ _(4)有(多久)历史 _It has a population of . ; With a populationof ., sth. .; The population has reached.It has a history of .; With a history of .， sth.(5) 占(多大)面积_(6) 表达“容量” The hotel _(拥有)120 rooms; Th
