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1、 第六部分：书面表达 Section C Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese 假设你参加所在年级的英语作文比赛，请 按照如下要求写一篇短文： 1，简要描述下图内容，并点明主题； 2，联系实际，表达该图给你带来的启示注意：1，词数不少于120个； 2，不能使用真实姓名和学校名称这一命题一改近几年给足要点、写人写事的保守出题方式，采 用了北京卷常用的看图作文。但具体的写作内容还是回归到常 考话题的范畴中。题目中的漫画图并不难理解。我们可以理解 为积
2、极向上的主题：团结就是力量、部分与整体、人与社会的 融合、团队协作、锲而不舍、成功需要积累、积少成多、环保 节约、和谐、小错可以酿成大错等等。 写作要求与方法。全文应该包括图片描述与主题归纳、联系实 际与启示三大部分内容。 第一段：简单的描述图片的内容，描述的侧重点是积少成多。 并点明主题。 第二段：转化为普通的英语议论文的主体段，采取举例法，分 析法，等议论方法证明观点。 第三段：总结观点，说明自己从图中学到了什么，得到了什么 启示。The part and the whole world Some water makes up the sea. The forest is made up
3、of many trees. In our society, the group of people consists of various people. The little things contribute to the whole world. Dont forget the little things and ignore them, which will cost you a lot.Its obvious that we look upside down some little things frequently, while look up to several honour
4、able things .However, the common thing is more meaningful than the honourable thing. Normal man as you are, you can create more contributions to the society. Its what you have done to the society that are really important .With a kind heart to the society, every part of the society is of significanc
5、e.The more you devote to the society, the more you will gain. Being a part of the whole world, your life will be colorful and meaningful.23分25分What advantages?Unity is power 24 Many drops of water can make up a sea. Many trees can turn into a forest. Many people can be combined together to make a so
6、ciety. Everything proves the idea that unity is power.Life is full of ups and downs and there are always many difficulties lying on the road that leads to success. When we come across some difficulties , what should we do to solve the problems? Of course unity can help us a lot.For example, on 5th D
7、ecember,2008,a terrible earthquake happened in Sichuan province. Many people were injured and lots of people died but those who were still alive didnt lose confidence , because not only the whole nation were united and went there to help them out but also some Individuals and organizations abroad ga
8、ve their hands to the area. With all the help, Sichuan has been rebuilt well now.Unity is power. It makes us walk together and live better. Im sure that with the help of unity we can overcome any difficulty.Section C (25 marks)Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions gi
9、ven below in Chinese. 在生活中, 你自已或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找 回的经历, 其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨请就 此写一篇英语短文.主要内容包括:1) 丢失的物品;2) 物品失而复得的经 过;3) 你的感想。 注意: 词数不少于120个; 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。On the shelf of my room lies a small black digital camera. Every time I see it, I will think about a noble and loving old man. It was a summer afternoon,
10、pretty hot, no breeze in the air. I got out of the hotel where we junior high classmates had had a party and wandered in the street. Tired and thirsty, I walked to the shadow of a big tree and sat down beside an old man. We chatted happily for a while, and then I got up and walked away, not realizin
11、g the camera in the pocket of my jeans had jumped out and was lying under the tree. Not until I got home did I discover that my camera was gone. I was anxious and afraid that my parents would scold me, so I got out looking for it immediately. On the way to the big tree, I noticed the old man waving
12、at me holding my camera. It is already two hours since I left him! I was worried ranup to him. After that experience, I would also stay at the place where I found something to wait for the owner because I want to spread the spirits of helping others that I learnt from the old man.这篇文章完成了作文题目规定的任务，文章
13、开头自然，简介了曾丢 失的物品一台数码相机，由此叙述相机失而复得的过程，并告诉自 己要向文中老人一样不辞辛苦帮助他人。 该文语言流畅，结构清晰有条理，逻辑严密；使用了多变的句式 结构，如：On the shelf of “, ”Every time “；以及形容词 或非谓语动词作状语：Tired and thirsty. I walked to the shadow of a big tree”，“not realizing the camera in the pocket of my jeans bad jumped out“和倒装句“Not until I got home did I d
14、iscover that my camera was gone语言错误较 少；有效采用不同连接手段，层次清楚；全文格式和语域恰当； 很好奠哒羁了与目标读者交流的目的。2012优秀作文的结尾句：From the experience, I have learned that we should help those who are in great need if necessary. Only in this way will our society be more harmonious and hopeful.Though it may be regarded as a minor thin
15、g by others, I will cherish it as a valuable memory in my whole life. From this thing, I feel the unselfish kindness from a stranger. I will also give my hand when others are in trouble.Now every time I see the cell phone, I cant help thinking of her. lts her honesty that I will always treasure and
16、thank forever.After that, I became a bit more careful I have learned how important it is to always deal with my stuff properly. Thats true. One can never be too careful.She could have gone to the concert with the ticket. Instead, she returned the ticket to me. What she brought to me is not only the ticket, but also warmth in my heart. It is a ticket I lost and it is warmth that I gained.What
