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1、第一章 句式优化不同的思想内容当然应该用不同的句式来表达而同一 思想内容也可以用不同句式来表达句式不同，表达的效果 就不同一篇文章中如果反复使用同一句式，就会显得单调 乏味，毫无生气，写作时一定要注意句式的变换，避免单一 重复1.长句和短句变换长句使文章富有气势，却容易产生语法错误或造成理解障 碍；短句不容易出错，但是短句的堆砌容易让人感觉语言技巧不 成熟，不老练在实际写作中，一味地采用长句或短句都是不可 取的，要注意长短句的交错使用通常简单而又实用的长短句交错方法是：以简单句为基础， 配以适当的并列句和复合句简单句可长可短，一般要加些附属 成分，如分词短语，不定式短语，介词短语，副词短语等第
2、一章 句式优化1. 短句变长句原文 Lies do harm to those who are being told lies. Lies also do harm to those who tell them.优化 Lies not only do harm to those who are being told lies, but also do harm to those who tell them.受汉语思维习惯影响，很多考生往往会直接将脑子里的 意思议程英语，而忽略句与句之间的联系，导致写出来的句子 无法体现英语作为“形合语言”的特点因此，在平时写作时 ，考生要注意前后句之间的联系，
3、用恰当的连接词将简单句连 接起来，组成准确地道的复杂长句增加文章的气势一长句和短句变换1. 短句变长句原文 Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.优化 Pressured by school work. and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often
4、 resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes.原文 Usually, a fact is defined as a truth. The truth can be tested by observation or experimentation.优化 Usually, a fact is defined as a truth, something that can be tested by observation or experimentation.1. 短句变长句4原文 When I turned right
5、on the corner, a motorbike knocked into a small car. The motorbike was red. There were two persons on the motorbikes. The car was yellow. The motorbike fell down. The two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. The driver came out of the car at once, and asked about the two persons injuries.
6、 As soon as I saw that, I made a telephone call to 110. the traffic police arrived in a short time.4优化 When I turned right on the corner, a red motorbike with two persons knocked into a small yellow car. Immediately, the motorbike fell down, and the two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured
7、. At that time, the driver came out of the car, and asked about the two persons injuries. Seeing this, I dialed 110. in a short time, the traffic police arrived.第一章 句式优化 一长句和短句变换 2.长句变短句原文 His father, who is a salesman, became a millionaire overnight.优化 His father, a salesman, became a millionaire o
8、vernight.长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想，但如果片面最求 复杂句式，反而会显得华而不实，累赘写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需要而定，有话则长，无 话则短短句不仅指句子长度较短，也指句子内部结构精练， 简洁是写作的一个重要原则，用词累赘则是写作的忌 2.长句变短句原文 He didnt have enough experience, which is the reason why he didnt do the work well.优化 He didnt do the work well for lack of experience.原文 Perhaps they basically d
9、istrusted our capacity to judge correctly.优化 They distrusted our judgment.1. 短句变长句4原文 A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really ready for marriage, perhaps because they are still establishing themselves in their careers and havent had enough time to get to know themselves and man
10、y members of the opposite sex, but family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married, and so they marry in haste without knowing each other well.4优化 A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really ready for marriage. As they are still establis
11、hing themselves in their careers, they havent had enough time to get to know themselves and many members of the opposite sex. However, family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married. So they marry in haste without knowing each other well.第一章 句式优化与汉语相比，英语
12、更注重动作本身，而不是动作的执行 者，因此在英语中被动语态的使用相对多一些，但这并不表 明要以为地追求被动语态的使用事实上，什么时候用主动 ，什么时候用被动，主要是由陈述对象而定英语写作特别 强调陈述对象的一致性，因此在选择主动和被动时一定要慎 重1.主动变被动 原文 We should pay more attention to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country.优化 More attention should be paid to the elderly who had devoted the
13、ir youth and energy to our country.二主动句和被动句变换2.长句变短句原文 When the prime minister arrived at the airport, hundreds of reporters surrounded him immediately. 优化 When the prime minister arrived at the airport, he was immediately surrounded by hundreds of reporters. 原文 The employees elected Mr. li chairman
14、 of the committee last week.优化 Mr. li was elected chairman of the committee by the employees last week.第一章 句式优化原文 Not how much you read but what you read really matters.优化 It is not how much you read but what you read that really matters.三强调句和倒装句变换2原文 By making good use of internet we can make a dif
15、ference in our life.2优化 Only by making good use of internet can we make a difference in our life.适当运用强调句和倒装句可以起到突出，强调的 作用，达到较强的修饰效果，给读者留下深刻印象1. 短句变长句3原文 We have grown so old because the birthrate fell earlier in western and northern Europe than elsewhere, rather than because of any change in the death rate.3优化 It is because the birthrate fell earlier in western and northern Europe than elsewhere, rather than because of any change in the death rate, that we have grown so old.第一章 句式优化原文 When I look into the future, I wi
