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1、College Students Job Hunting 大 学生就业问题 In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job. It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play. Then what underlies the stra
2、nge phenomenon? There are several reasons for this. To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high. All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others. Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant
3、jobs they consider not “good” enough. Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs. So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.表示列举的连词：ufirst, second, third; ufirstly, secondly, thirdly; ufirst, next, then; u
4、in the first place, in the second place; ufor one thing, for another thing; uto begin with, whats more,to conclude/To sum up 表示原因的连词： because, since, as, now that 表示结果的连词： so, therefore, thus, hence, accordingly, consequently, as a result 表示对照的连词： on the contrary, in contrast, by contrast, in compar
5、ison, by comparison, conversely 表示让步和转折的连词： however, nevertheless, nonetheless, still, though, yet, in spite of, at any rate, in any case, whoever, whatever 表示时间顺序的连词： when, while, as, after, before, since, until, as soon as, once表示目的的连词： so that, in order that表示总结的连词： In a word, In sum, In conclusi
6、onEducation Pays （2012.12真题）l The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that unemployment rate of those with higher education background is much lower than those with lower education degree. For instance, the unemployment rate of college students with no degree is as high a
7、s 14.9% while that of those with doctoral degree is only 1.9%. （图表作文第一段第一句先介绍图表 主题，第二句说明数据所呈现的特点/趋势，第3 ，4句引用两个数据来说明这一特点，切勿将所 用数据例出，且数据表达方法正确）l The following reason, in my opinion, is the most important one to account for this phenomenon. Compared with those with comparatively lower education degree,
8、 people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which make them more qualified and competent for their task. Thus, they are less likely to lose their
9、 jobs.l This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to avoid unemployment.l交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。 1990年6月考查过How to solve the problem of Heavy Traffic,1994年1月考题 The World Is Getti
10、ng Smaller and Smaller也与交通有关，近年来，随着私家 车的日益增多，城市交通拥堵凸显，出行 难越来越成为人们关注的焦点。 l As we know, traffic accidents are becoming more and more serious in Changsha. Every year an increasing number of people involved in them are injured, and even killed, which, of course, has aroused widespread concern of the pub
11、lic. l Take the above chart as an example. In 2010, from July to January, 183 people were injured in traffic accidents and 41 people lost their lives in them. Taking a careful look at them, youll find that traffic accidents in Changsha have been increasing all the time. In July, there were only 20 p
12、eople injured, while in December, the injured went up to 49. As for the dead, in July, there were only 3, but in December, there were 14. This is a 367% increase.Traffic Accidents In Changsha l The increase of traffic accidents is not only a threat to peoples life, but also shows the traffic system
13、problems in Changsha. It is urgent for the authorities related to bring it under control.traffic Problems 交通问题There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the residents of most urban areas. Every day, especially in rush hours, the roads are crowded with vehicles. People have
14、 to spend much time on their way home or to work and even might get involved in an accident. This problem has caused much trouble in many big cities.l The main causes for the traffic problems can be attributed to the following factors. First, with the explosion/growth of the population in the cities
15、, more and more people have to commute by bus or car, while the transport facilities cant meet the needs of the increasing population. For example, many roads and streets are old and narrow. Besides, some drivers and pedestrians do not obey the traffic regulations, which adds to the seriousness of t
16、he traffic problems.l One solution to the traffic problem is to construct more roads and traffic bridges and open up more bus lines. But considering the intensive land use in downtown areas, the government should further develop the suburb and the countryside especially for the new industrial enterprises and living quarters s
