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1、扬州市中考研讨会专题复习课Writing扬中树人扬中树人 常松常松HouseHouseShopping Shopping mallmall检查口语HometownHometownChangesChanges7B2 Welcome to Sunshine Town There are lots of things to do in Sunshine Town. We want to tell you about life in this great new town. Would you like to live in a modern town? live in flats? go shopp
2、ing? eat Chinese food? enjoy Beijing Opera? 分析结构IntroductionMain bodyLocationHousingShoppingEatingAmusementSunshine Town has changed a lot. The government has turned the place into a park. We have a large shopping mall and a theatre. We have open space and pretty gardens too.However, it is difficult
3、 to see some of my old friends. They have moved to Beijing or other places, and I feel a bit lonely from time to time. Sometimes they come back to see me, and that makes me very happy. ChangesProblems分析结构Sunshine Town has changed a lot.However, it is difficult to see some of my old friends.主题句主题句8B1
4、 Changes to Sunshine TownReading SuggestionsMain bodyMain bodyLearning aims: 1. 学会作文审题，模仿教材中相关话题构建文章结构。2. 能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。3. 通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。抄组集连抓审作文集句成段组段成篇审清题意连词成句抓住要点抄写规范如何写作这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(National Civilized City)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的 你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进 的地方。在此，你向谢市长
5、写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一 些建议。变变化1. 环环境干净净整洁洁 2. 市民热热心公益 3. 4. 问题问题（至少三点） 建议议（至少三点）要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2) 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3) 100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）； 4) 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。审清题意弄清写作主题弄清写作体裁弄清写作对象弄清写作人称弄清写作字数 弄清写作结构弄清写作时态弄清写作信息弄清写作补充弄清写作要求这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(National Civilized City)，每个人都积极参与 了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的你注意
6、到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进的地方。 在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。变变化1. 环环境干净净整洁洁 2. 市民热热心公益 3. 4. 问题问题（至少三点）建议议（至少三点）要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2) 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3) 100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）； 4) 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。字数未知信息结构体裁对象人称主题时态以一般现在时、现在完成时和一般将来时为主已知信息1. List some keywords about changes. 2. Phrases: _2. List some
7、 keywords about problems. Phrases: _3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _抓住要点，列关键词environment, clean and tidy, too much traffic, traffic accidents, 8A1 Study skillsMain points and keywords1. Make sentences with the keywords about changes. 2. Sentences: _2. Make sentences with the keywo
8、rds about problems. Sentences: _3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentences: _连词成句，变换句式The environment has become cleaner and tidier than before. 8A1 Study skillsMain points and keywords这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(National Civilized City)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的 你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到
9、了一些需要改进 的地方。在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一 些建议。变变化1. 环环境干净净整洁洁 2. 市民热热心公益 3. 4. 问题问题（至少三点） 建议议（至少三点）要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2) 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3) 100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）； 4) 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。Changes Changes clean and tidy, plant more trees(7B5), actively take actions to protect wildlife(8A5) a new airport, in
10、service, in 2012, more tall buildings, a new library, borrow books for free, protect ancient buildings, give seats to people in need(7B5) help the old / disabled cross the road(7B5) visit the home for the elderly(7B5), be ready / willing to help others(8A1), ProblemsProblems too much traffic, too mu
11、ch noise, drop litter carelessly (8A5), not wait in line at the bus stop, smoke in public places some broken roads, need to be repaired the elderly, feel a bit lonely (8B1), few homes for the elderly few youth centers (7B2), less open space for people to relax (8B1)抓住要点，列关键词这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(Nati
12、onal Civilized City)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的 你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进 的地方。在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一 些建议。变变化1. 环环境干净净整洁洁 2. 市民热热心公益 3. 4. 问题问题（至少三点） 建议议（至少三点）要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2) 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3) 100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）； 4) 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。Im amazed that great changes have taken place in our
13、 city in the past few years. The government is devoting itself to improving peoples lives. More trees have been planted these years. And its said that an airport will be in service in 2012. Next year, getting into or out of the city will become much easier. Many citizens know that its important to k
14、eep our city clean and tidy. Whats more, they are always ready to help people in need. However, there are lots of things that we need to improve. The streets near schools are always crowded when we come to school and some people dont wait in line when they get on the bus. Besides, there will be more and more old people who need caring for. I think we can try to do something to make them better. In my opinion, firstly, we should encourage students to ride to school instead of going to school by car. Secondly, some volunteers are needed to keep order
