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1、托福教案托福教案原则：原则：1 尽量用中文思考好，提纲尽量用中文思考好，提纲; 提纲乃精华，需要稀释。提纲乃精华，需要稀释。2 大方向定了之后，大方向定了之后， 应该有应该有 2-3 点小观点来支撑。各小观点间不应有交集；小论点则是中心句；忍住点小观点来支撑。各小观点间不应有交集；小论点则是中心句；忍住 “，+because”的冲动。的冲动。3，Draft 草稿草稿, 300 字以上即可接受字以上即可接受4, 简单清晰；简单清晰； imagination translation;大学生毕业之后有很大的就业压力和很大的无奈大学生毕业之后有很大的就业压力和很大的无奈 After graduatio
2、n, college students have a lot of employment pressure and despair.Every year, thousands and thousands of college students leave school and flood into the marekts. They stand in long lines and fight each other for a small job. Most of them have no luck. For the lucky ones, they only get 800 yuan amon
3、th, which is not enough for a basic life in the cities. 人们饱受污染之痛人们饱受污染之痛 People suffer terribly from pollution. People dirk dirty water, cough in dirty air and eat poisonous food. They are troubled with one disease or another. they cry and struggle under the grey sky.VS People drink dirty water and
4、cough in dirty air. They are troubled with one disease or another. They cry and struggle under the grey sky. 如今人们普遍虐待动物如今人们普遍虐待动物 abuse animals Today， people generally abuse animals. Today, we often see cold-blooded people throw cats out of windows, kick dogs in streets, and run after poor pets with
5、 a huge stick in hand. Nowadays, we often see old, sick, lonely and disabled dogs, cats, pigs and even chickens wander in the streets, hide in dark corners and eat in dirty dustbins. They look at humans from a distance with a scared heart. 扣题扣题 （A 另外另外 in addition, besides, on the one hand, on the o
6、ther hand, for one thing, for another2，定语从句，定语从句那个生产多过消费的群体那个生产多过消费的群体That group where the production is more than the consumption. I still remember the winter day when I had your hand in mine. 词汇词汇 （用平，（用平， 用小，用活用小，用活, 3-4 级左右）级左右）语法：语法：定语从句，表语从句，同位语从句，定语从句，状语从句定语从句，表语从句，同位语从句，定语从句，状语从句状语从句和主句最好做到一
7、对一状语从句和主句最好做到一对一如果去西方国家读书，那么可以接受更好的教育，因为那里的学校，教师和知识都更好如果去西方国家读书，那么可以接受更好的教育，因为那里的学校，教师和知识都更好 （下句不妥）（下句不妥）If one goes to the western countries to study, he is likely to get better education, because there are better universities, professors and more advanced knowledge. 逻辑主谓要一致逻辑主谓要一致如果没有健康，如果没有健康， 那么
8、什么都没有意义那么什么都没有意义 If without health, then nothing is meaningful. 作为学生，学习是最大任务作为学生，学习是最大任务“有有”+百分比的时候要注意百分比的时候要注意有有 80% 的城市家庭养宠物的城市家庭养宠物80% of the city families keep a pet人称用第三人称，不要用第一和第二人称。人称用第三人称，不要用第一和第二人称。标点符号标点符号逗号，逗号，用在两个并列成分间通常为连贯词用在两个并列成分间通常为连贯词 and, 倘若两个成分比较长（每个成分有定语从句）倘若两个成分比较长（每个成分有定语从句） ，或
9、者每个成分中间，或者每个成分中间已经出现了已经出现了 and，则可以在主要的连接词，则可以在主要的连接词 and 前面加入逗号；在介词词组前面加入逗号；在介词词组“from A to B”这样的结构中，这样的结构中，以上方法同效以上方法同效新时期的绝望新时期的绝望 mad /crazy /helpless 主妇们包括主妇们包括 include 那些必须全职工作为支付柴米油盐的以及那些花尽那些必须全职工作为支付柴米油盐的以及那些花尽心思挽留丈夫的心思挽留丈夫的.Today, the helpless housewives include those who have to work seven
10、days a week to pay the living cost of the family ,and those who do everything to keep their husbands.这是形形色色的一群人，从坐飞机的职业经理人到坐高铁的白领到普通大众，他们匆忙回家，不管方式如这是形形色色的一群人，从坐飞机的职业经理人到坐高铁的白领到普通大众，他们匆忙回家，不管方式如何：可以坐火车，汽车，摩托车乃至步行。何：可以坐火车，汽车，摩托车乃至步行。This is a group of people, from the managers who travel by plane, to
11、the office people who travel by high-speed train, and to the common people who hurry back home by all means-by bus, train, mortorbike or even on foot. 这一理论这一理论 theory/conclusion 在两大例子中得到充分的体现在两大例子中得到充分的体现 obvious in，在巴西，在巴西 brazil 高的文盲率高的文盲率 illiteracy rate 和糟糕的报纸销售量和糟糕的报纸销售量 newspaper sale 成正比成正比 m
12、atch；在阿根廷；在阿根廷 argentina，低的文盲率和高的报纸销，低的文盲率和高的报纸销售量成正比售量成正比 This theory is quite clear in two examples of Brazil, where the high illiteracy rate matches the poor newspaper sale, and Argentina, where the low illiteracy rate matches the good newspaper sale. 山秃了，水脏了，山秃了，水脏了， 空气毒了，人民病了空气毒了，人民病了The mounta
13、ins are bald, the water dirty, the air poisonous and the people sick有了法律从旁监督，那么我们的政府是清廉的，我们的官员是诚实的，邪恶势力是虚弱的，人民群众是满有了法律从旁监督，那么我们的政府是清廉的，我们的官员是诚实的，邪恶势力是虚弱的，人民群众是满意的意的With the law standing by, the governments are clean, the officials honest, the evil forces weak and the people satisfied. Some movies de
14、al with the future fantasies, some with the real life, and some with funny and silly situations. 书名号：书名号：化作一句古话化作一句古话中国有句古话说的好：中国有句古话说的好：There is an old Chinese saying which goes that -According to an old Chinese saying, -An old Chinese saying goes that-两情若是长久时，又岂在朝朝暮暮。两情若是长久时，又岂在朝朝暮暮。True love is n
15、ot afraid of time and distance. 海内存知己，天涯若比邻海内存知己，天涯若比邻 Distance separates no true lovers /friends 患难之间见真情患难之间见真情 a friend in need is a friend indeed. 君子之交淡若水君子之交淡若水 noble friends should keep each other at a distance。 三岁看老三岁看老 ones childhood determines his adulthood. 不打不成器不打不成器 spare the rod, spoil t
16、he kid. Traditional wisdom/thinking goes that 传统上我们认为传统上我们认为-当地有个传说说，一条白蛇化作女人，嫁了男人，生了娃当地有个传说说，一条白蛇化作女人，嫁了男人，生了娃A local sotry goes that a white snake transformed into a beauty, married a man and had a baby. People of diferent personalities and interests cant be good friends. 常用因果关系表述法常用因果关系表述法较好的副词：较好的副词：as a result, hence, consequently 因此因此常用介词：常用介词：due to (中性中性)， owing to （中性）（中性） ，thanks to (褒义褒义)，because of （中性）（中性）常用动词：常用动词：(主语是物体，事件，不能是人主语是物体，事件，不能是人)result i
