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1、四六级作文精讲 第 1 页 共 7 页1四六级作文精讲四六级作文精讲四六级作文阅卷标准分五等：四六级作文阅卷标准分五等： 2 分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5 分基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。 8 分基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严 重错误。 11 分切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14 分切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。高分作文三大要素高分作文三大要素 I 结构清晰 structure-bone II 句式多样 sentences-fle
2、sh III 语言亮点 vocabulary-soulI 结构清晰：结构清晰： 1、文章整体结构完整 2、段与段，句与句衔接要自然:段落层次连接词+过度词（句、段逻辑关系） 3、每个段落必须要保持完整 4、各段祥略要得当1、文章整体结构完整：、文章整体结构完整：请审题并确定下面的文章写几段？ Example 1 Say No to Pirated Products 1）目前盗版现象比较严重 2）造成这种现象的原因 3）我们应该怎么做 Example 2 how to succeed in a job interview 1）面试在求职过程中的作用 2）取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、
3、专业知识、自信、实事求是. Example 3 How I finance my college education 1) 上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多种途径解决 2) 哪种途径适合于我（说明理由） Example 4 On Stress 1）有人害怕压力 2）有人认为压力并不是坏事 3）你的观点 关于文章整体结构总结：关于文章整体结构总结： 最少不能少于两段最少不能少于两段 最多不能多于四段最多不能多于四段四六级作文精讲 第 2 页 共 7 页22、段与段，句与句衔接要自然、段与段，句与句衔接要自然 段与段，句与句衔接： 保证 1)意义连贯 2)形式连贯. 即要
4、有 1)逻辑性 2)连接手段.段落层次连接词：段落层次连接词： 1）first, second, third, last 2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3）the first, the second, the third, the last 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6）to start with, next, in addition, finall
5、y 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand 10）for one thing, for another thing连接过度词（句、段逻辑关系）：连接过度词（句、段逻辑关系）： 1. 总括过渡词： As far as I am concerned ,As for me, Generally speaking, On a larger scale, Practically spea
6、king, To take the idea further 2 . 同类过渡词 Equally important, Namely, Similarly, That is 3. 对比过渡词 Conversely, In contrast, On the contrary, Otherwise, Whereas, While 4. 举例过渡词 A case in point is that, For instance, For example, Such as, As an illustration 4.列举过渡词 First of all, First, second, third, In
7、the first place, Initially, To start with, First and foremost Furthermore, In addition, Moreover, Whats more, Finally, Last but not least 6.原因过渡词 Due to , Considering, As a result of, Given, In that, In the view of, On account of, On the grounds of, Owing to, Seeing that 7.让步过渡词语 Although, In spite
8、of, Even though, Admittedly, Certainly, Indeed, True 8.转折过渡词 Nevertheless, However, On the contrary, On the other hand, Yet, Whereas, although, but, in spite of, yet, otherwise, despite 9. 强调过渡词 Anyway, Chiefly, Even worse, Most important of all, Needless to say, No doubt, Particularly 10.目的过渡词 With
9、 the aim of, For the sake of, With the view to, For the purpose of四六级作文精讲 第 3 页 共 7 页311. 承接过渡词 So to speak, As a matter of fact, As soon as, As it were, Year in and year out 12.条件过渡词 Given , As long as, Provided that 13.结论过渡词 Accordingly, An in all, As a result, Consequently, Hence, In brief, In co
10、nclusion, In general, In short, On the whole, To conclude, To sum up in a word, In summary, finally, therefore, accordingly, in short, thus, in conclusion, so, in brief, in a word 3 每个段落必须要保持完整每个段落必须要保持完整 1st para general topicsupporting idea/details(1)supporting idea/details(2) 2nd para sub-topic s
11、entencesupporting idea/details(1)supporting idea/details(2)supporting idea/details(3) 3rd para conclusion supporting idea/details(1)supporting idea/details(2)II 句式多样句式多样: 1 长短句错落有致 2. 主动变被动 3. 强调句和倒装句的适当运用1 长短句错落有致长短句错落有致 eg.1 His father is a salesman. His father became a millionaire overnight. His
12、father, as a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. Eg.2 Teenagers are pressured by schoolwork. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty. Pressured by schoolwork and encouraged by their peers, teenagers reso
13、rt to smoking, though sometimes they feel a little guilty. eg.3 2)Smoking can lead to heart disease, cancer and other problems. Smoking, which has been adopted by many people, can lead to heart disease, cancer and other problems.Smoking, as a habit adopted by many people, especially man, can lead to
14、 heart disease, cancer and other problems. 2. 主动变被动主动变被动 1)被动语态体现论证的客观性.(they you we 不要随便使用，切忌交错使用) We should pay more attention to the environment, which is being destroyed seriously by human. More attention should be paid to the environment, which is being destroyed seriously by human. So many mea
15、sures have been taken by . 2) 保持陈述对象的一致，以求行文通顺。四六级作文精讲 第 4 页 共 7 页4When the Prime Minister arrived at the airport, hundreds of reporters surrounded him immediately. When the Prime Minister arrived at the airport, he was surrounded immediately by hundreds of reporters. 3. 强调句和倒装句的适当运用强调句和倒装句的适当运用 We
16、can better our environment only through all our efforts. Only through all our efforts can we better our environment. It is through all our efforts that we can better our environment. Only in this way can we Under no circumstances can we give up the confidence(in no way/in no case)III 语言亮点语言亮点 1、副词的使用 2、积累并使用高档词汇与表达 3、积累常用句型 4、适当使用修辞以及名言警句1. 副词的使用副词的使用 The forest is being destroyed. The forest is seriously destroyed. He runs fast. He runs i
