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1、2011年年6月英语四级真题作文范月英语四级真题作文范文文(老外版老外版)Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their markets. Also, its convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house. However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face shopping experience.Internet sh
2、opping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: guessing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrating.For the busy mother and fath
3、er, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing.点评：作者在第一段描述了网购作为一种时尚给大家的生活带来了便利，然后话锋一转，说网购仍然取代不了面对面的购物交流。第二段主要还是从正反两方面分析了网购的优势和不足，以此描述大家对网购的不同反应。第三段作者表明了自己的观点，对网购的便利和不足之处都做了描述。综合来讲，本篇文章观点明确，结构清晰，语言表达地道，有不少闪
4、光词汇，但是，内容深度上来讲还有些欠缺，另外，最后一部分表达个人观点，和第二段稍有重复。考生需要注意观点的清晰，不宜模棱两可。Online Shopping (Essay 1, 折中篇折中篇)作者：钱坤强（范文 1：综合/平衡型写法, 兼论网上购物的优点与缺点并提出建议）With the Internet becoming increasingly powerful, online shopping has emerged as a new way of shopping which poses strong challenges to the conventional way of shop
5、ping. With all the conveniences created by this new pattern of shopping, an increasing number of netizens across all age groups resort to online shopping, which has quickly grown into a vogue. T is just one of such leading online-shopping websites in China intensifying this fashion.The greatest conv
6、enience of online shopping is that it saves time. We can complete a transaction without having to visit any actual shops or stores. Second, online shops offer a rich variety of commodities for potential buyers to choose from. However, like a double-edged sword, online shopping also creates problems.
7、 Although buyers can see the pictures of the commodities they intend to purchase, in quite many cases, the pictures or the verbal descriptions of those goods do not match their actual qualities, thus customers interests cannot be guaranteed. In addition, without a well- developed logistics network,
8、it would sometimes take many days for purchased goods to arrive, thus causing great delay and rendering so-called conveniences into troubles. Finally, even though many sellers claim their commodities to be genuine brands, clients tend to lack professional knowledge and skills to discriminate the gen
9、uine from the fake ones, and they will ultimately incur considerable financial losses.In view of many inherent disadvantages of online shopping, customers should duly exercise their precaution when making their purchase decisions. When they have doubts about any aspects of a commodity, they should c
10、onsult the shop owners fully before making a decision. Finally, they should also make extensive comparisons of the same category of commodities offered by different online shops. In this way, customers can really turn online shopping into something that can positively enrich their modern life. 论网上购物
11、论网上购物译者： 钱坤强随着因特网的功能日趋强劲，网上购物已作为一种全新的购物方式而崛起，对常规的购物方式构成了强势的挑战。由于这一全新购物模式所带来的种种便捷，越来越多的网民，不论年龄群体，都喜欢采用网购这一购物形式，从而使网购在为数不多的几年内就成为一种时尚。淘宝网便是中国诸多网购站点的龙头老大之一，对网购之风起着推波助澜的作用。网上购物的最大便利之处，在于它节省时间。我们完全没有必要去往任何实体商店，就可以完成一笔交易。其次，网上商店提供一系列丰富多样的商品， 可供潜在的顾客任意挑选。但是，如同一把双刃剑，网上购物也会产生问题。虽然购买者可以看到他们所欲购买的商品的图片，但在许多情况下，
12、这些商品的图片或文字描述与商品的实际品质并不相符。因此，消费者的利益无法获得保障。其次，在没有一个完备发达的物流网的情况下，已购商品有时可能需要花上许多天的时间才能到达，从而造成严重的耽搁，致使所谓的便捷转而成为麻烦。最后，尽管许多商家声称，其出售的产品是真宗的品牌，但顾客却缺乏专业的知识与能力去鉴别真伪，这样，顾客最终将会招致相当大的经济损失。考虑到网上购物所固有的诸多缺点，顾客在做出购买决定时，应该发挥其应有的谨慎判断。只要对一件产品的任何方面心存疑虑，他们就应充分咨询商家，然后才做出决定。最后，消费者对不同网上商店所提供的同一类别的产品，也应该进行广泛的比较，做到货比三家。如此一来，消费
13、者就能将网上购物真正转变成一个可以积极正面地丰富其现代生活的事物。Online Shopping (Essay 2, 批判篇批判篇)作者：钱坤强（范文 2：一边倒写法, 对网上购物的优点一掠而过，集中论述其缺点并提出建议）Online shopping is definitely a prevailing vogue of our times, especially among the fashion-conscious young people, among whom many are college students. It is often the case that students
14、expect the arrival of their packages during the breaks of their classes, whose contents vary from books, fashion dresses and cosmetics. Much of their daily conversation at dormitories focuses on online shopping and their daily life has become inextricably connected with this vogue. Admittedly, onlin
15、e shopping offers a wide range of conveniences, as compared with conventional shoppingcheaper prices, greater efficiency, and richer varieties, etc. However, its conveniences can become its traps. For innocent students, the sheer convenience of online shopping can allure them into what is called “im
16、pulse buy”buying things which are not geared to ones genuine needs. This will lead to huge wastes of money for students in their already limited budgets. Moreover, academic studies should be students top priority and, if students allow their online shopping to grow into a habit, their time and energy would be significantly diverted, and their failure to concentrate on their studies would
