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1、第一讲 Myself写作要点：写作要点：一般可从三个层次入手。第一层指出人物的自然情况。如果是书信的应用文就说明写信的原因，表达收到信时的心情。第二层具体写出自己的各方面的喜好和厌恶，并阐述原因。第三层扣题，再次提出人物的特点。(书信式，要在回信的最后表达某种祝愿：希望尽快见到对方或给对方送去祝福。)技巧点拨：技巧点拨：学生对有关写人的话题的写作并不陌生，而且有很多素材可写。从题材看有介绍人物类，要说明人物的年龄、爱好、外貌、性格特征等（外国朋友要介绍国籍） ，此类可用说明性语言。有应用文体的书信类，书信类书面表达通常有明确的目的性，写作应就涉及的话题进行写信或回信。有与他人探讨某一热门话题、
2、交流彼此观点和想法的类型，通常以议论文体话题就某话题讨论各自的见解或看法。写作练习写作练习 1 ：同学们，你能回答下面的问题吗？试试看，再把它连成一篇小文章。1 Whats your name?2 How old are you? What are you like?3 Where do you study? What class are you in?4 Whats your favorite color, food, teacher, book.? Why do you like them ?5 Whats your hobby ? 6 What kind of child are you
3、 ?Myself_SampleMyselfHello! I am Zhou Xiaolin. Im 11 years old. I study in the No.1 Primary School. I am quiet, kind and smart. I dont like sports, but I like reading books very much. My favorite food is fish because its tasty . My favorite fruits are apples and bananas because they are sweet. In a
4、week, I like Friday most. As you know, the weekend is coming. My favourite teachers Miss Zhu. Her class is so much fun.On Saturday, I often do homework and play computer games. Saturday is fun for me! How about Sunday? I often read books and watch TV. Its sweet for me! Sometimes I do housework on we
5、ekends, such as clean my bedroom, set the table and do the dishes. But I cant cook the meals. This is me! Do you want know me ? Write to me soon!词语积累：国家： Canada, France, Japan, the United States, Australia, Singapore, the United Kingdom, China, Germany城市：Sydney, New York , Paris, Toronto, Tokyo, Lon
6、don, Washington D.C.语言：Chinese, English, French, Japanese , Spanish , German体形外貌：short, curly, long, straight , tall , medium height/ build , thin, fat , heavy , not too tall or too thin, young , old 人体部位：hair, eye, mouth, face , nose, leg , arm, foot , knee, 性格特征： quiet, calm, outgoing , serious, k
7、ind , friendly, careful, careless, serious, 情感态度：funny, happy, sad, angry, worried, excited, relaxed, surprised, nervous, afraid , dull, sleepy, terrible, noisy, sick, beautiful, relaxing, exciting My friend is from/ comes from France.He can speak English and a little French .I am very glad to hear
8、from you He is an eleven-year-old boy with a pair of glasses .Can you write to me soon?I like going to the movies with my friends and playing sports .My favorite subject in school is P.E./ I like P.E. best in school.I often play soccer on weekends .Please tell me about yourself.I live in Beijing.He
9、is good at playing basketball.His mother works as a nurse in the hospital.I have two big brown eyes and long curly blonde hair .He is of medium build / height.I have a round face, big eyes , a small nose and a small mouth.She has long hair.She always wears a red skirt and white shoes.Shes good-looki
10、ng but shes a little bit quiet.Johnny Dean has a new look./ appearance.The girl in yellow is Maria.I can get on well with my classmates.He is kind / friendly to others .Our teacher is very strict with us in our studies.There are three people in my family.Thank you for helping me with my English. Par
11、is is the capital of France .写作练习写作练习 2 : 父母，老师，朋友都是你生活中不课缺少的人，你对他们一定很了解。选择你最熟悉的一个人，向我们介绍一下吧。My _评语：第二讲 A Photo of My Family写作要点：写作要点：一般可从三个层次入手。第一层指出你有个幸福的家庭及家庭的主要成员。第二层具体写出照片中家人的位置位置，他们各自的主要外貌特点，职职业业，彼此相互的联系等。第三层再次点题。用感叹句写出你有一个多么和睦而幸福的家。技巧点拨：技巧点拨：1 这个标题主要练习家人,职业和方位介词的熟练应用。2 在生活中，这些词都是小学生常会遇到的词汇，当写作用到时就会提笔忘词，这就会要求同学们常常以练笔的形式练习，复习。3 这类文章主要用第三人称书写，时态通常用一般现在时，重点在一般现在时第三人称单数的书写上。写作练习写作练习 3 3 ：我们每个人都有一个幸福的家庭.它是我们的避风港，它是我们温暖的家。你的家里成员都有谁呀？晒晒你的全家福吧，画出它，让我们了解一下你的全家吧！A photo of my family_
