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1、1Model Test OneWriting SampleContinuing to Help Those in Need?1 There have been an increasing number of reports about those who offer to help others end up putting themselves into trouble. 2 For instance, a bus driver in Nantong was wrongly charged by the elder woman he tried to rescue from a roadsi
2、de accident. 3 Had it not be the footage of the bus camera, the bus driver would have been found guilty.4 Reports of this kind tend to prevent people from offering their helping hands to those in need, because they want to stay away from the unnecessary conflicts. 5 Bit by bit, it is worried that pe
3、ople in the society will become distant and indifferent to one another.6 As far as I am concerned, we should continue to help those in need, but in the mean time, we should know how to protect ourselves. 7 Protective measures, such as filming what is happening, are effective to ensure that our well-
4、meant intentions would not get punished.Analysis1 开篇之处论题的北京。end up doing sth. “以告终；结果却” ， 为亮点表达。2 用具体的例子来进一步阐述论题的背景。本剧是用了省略 whom 的定语从句，使句子一气呵成。3 本剧是用了虚拟语气，是拿高分的亮点。footage 指“视频脚本，片段” ； be found guilty“被认定有罪” 。4 承上启下，带出该段关于人们的“担忧”的论述。tend to “倾向于” ；to stay away from “远离” ； the unnecessary conflicts “不
5、必要的纷争” 。5 用 it is worried that句型把人们的“担忧”勾勒出来。distant and indifferent “疏远和冷漠” 。6 用 As far as I am concerned 引出个人观点。7 well-meant intentions would not get punished 意为“好意不会遭恶报” 。2Model Test TwoWriting SamplePost-90s Generations Network LifeThe term post-90s generation refers to us who were born in the 1
6、990s. 1 That is just the period of time when the Internet was enjoying a boom. 2 Indeed, we are the generation that has grown up with the Internet.We have various ways to express ourselves on the Internet. We like 3 hanging out on forums, social networks or micro-blogs. It is quite common for us to
7、have more 4 virtual friends than friends in real life. 5 We prefer using the Martian language, which is quite different from the normal characters.6As far as I am concerned, we are a generation with vigor and creativity. 7 We are ready to accept new ideas. 8 So long as we dont indulge in the Interne
8、t, we can benefit a lot from it in that it gives us a free way to express ourselves and keeps us informed of the latest news.Analysis1 enjoy a boom 是亮点表达，指互联网的繁荣。2 指出 90 后是伴随着互联网成长的一代，符合题目第一点要求。注意行文最好使用第一人称，符合目前在校大学生的年龄特征。3 hanging out on。 。 。意为“在闲逛” ， hanging out on forums 指“在各种论坛上闲逛” ，是亮点表达。注意一些新词
9、语的表达， “微博”表达为 micro-blogs。4 virtual friends 表达为“虚拟的朋友” ， friends in real life 指生活中真正的朋友。5 使用定语从句对 Martian language 进行解释，使句子更简练、高级。6 with vigor and creativity “充满活力和创造力”为后置定语，修饰 a generation，为亮点表达。7 be ready to 意为“乐于” ，注意使用这种常见的表达形式。8 最后这句活结构比较复杂。So long as 意思是“只要” ，这种表达是文章更严谨。indulge in 意思是“沉溺于” ； k
10、eeps sb. informed of 是亮点表达，意思是“使某人知道” 。3Model Test 3There is No End to LearningLearning, be definition, is an on-going process, which requires our continuous efforts and commitment. No wise man would claim that has learned enough, because there is simply too much to learn for an individual.A case in
11、 point is the college study. Some students assume that their learning process was over the moment they passed the college Entrance Exam (CEE) and get slackened in their university study. As a matter of fact, passing the CEE is the conclusion of one stage of learning, and signifies the beginning of a
12、nother.In another case, fresh graduates from the universities usually think they bid farewell to learning. The belief of this kind, again, is mistaken. Even if they no long pursue formal learning in classrooms, they are still bound to learn something about their jobs, the industry and the society as
13、 a whole. In whatever case, the truth holds that there is no end to learning.4Model Test 4Due Attention Should Be Given to HandwritingStudent of today are heavily complained by their teachers because of their horrible handwriting. The situation is so bad that a significant amount of time is allocate
14、d to train students handwriting in high-schools.The main reason for this seemingly absurd phenomenon might be the prevalence of computer. Students may, for instance, download study materials from the website instead of writing them down. When they want to communicate with each other, all they need i
15、s to hit the keyboard, leaving the laborious writing out of the mind.For remedy this problem, two approaches should be adopted. First, teachers should ask students to submit their hand-written homework, instead of soft-copy ones. Second, calligraphy contest should be staged as regular extracurricular activities to arouse students interests. With these two measures, I am sure students will be able to write readable characters, while enjoying the convenience brought by the computer.
