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1、Comment B1: 明确的目标Do you agree or disagree, people who go out from their village will be more successful and happier than people who stay in their village? Although people who live out of their village perhaps must solely confront many challenges and difficulties , and henceforth, his/her destiny is
2、being doomed by various factors include personal character, social skills and even luck, but I agree people will be more successful than those who stay in village only lies in judging from their final achievement rather than judging from the beginning. Because, to the economics side, compared with m
3、etropolitan, village is only a fundamental type of humans social formation, which contains less multifarious factors of production; consequently, the lack of abundant economic opportunities, it is more possible for people to become success and happiness.Firstly, success and happy are both taken, not
4、 given; therefore, they cannot become realization at the beginning of peoples initial arrival of new place. In More detail, constricted by limited factors of production, any merchant who is longing for seek business opportunity in bigger and better place with diversity in business field; also, blue-
5、collar workers can be paid in higher income level than that in village. More luckily, every successful people has his or her own striving stories, which originated from a casual opportunity that given in a metropolitan; thus, the blue-collar who with sharp sense of business could be an entrepreneur
6、someday if they could grasp the spark of success. That is why big cities are more attractive than villages are; it is the potential of chance of being success. Secondly, another one of my points is that new friends can help us reestablish interpersonal relationship out of village and meet all kinds
7、of person who perhaps is expert in various professions. In addition, world outlooks of people who live in different places are always various, even mutually include huge discrepancy, which may thwart ongoing of a business project; clearly, meeting right coworkers is also a prerequisite requirement o
8、f being happy and success. Struggling in Big cities with specific goal is the wise choice. Concerning about reasons mentioned above, if I say interpersonal relationship is vital to trigger peoples successes, and although various responses will be quoted to contradict my standpoints, I think people m
9、ay mull over their preceded opinions of striving in village.Finally, not everyone can blend themselves to new environment soon when live out of village. For example, I really want to say thank you to famers, thanks for their painstaking efforts that enable my family to have hearty meals on the table
10、. But in the village, fertilized arable land plays pivotal in supporting farmers life; breeding, cultivating and harvest can generalize the circle of their life that annually remain similar. Therefore, my third opinion is that genre of occupation determines the possibility of success when people who
11、 left village to struggle in new places. It is clearly that Teachers, businessman, and accountants are all dreaming about owning a stable job and remaining own competitiveness. In conclusion, given those three reasons mentioned above, I agree people will be more promising and have more fun to move t
12、o a bigger cites rather than always live in village. But I reiterate that people should be hardheaded when decide to move out of village after thinking over their type of occupation and specification of personal goals. Change never happens all at once; please be loyal to dreams and stay perseverance
13、. TPO 20 integrated writing:The passage concerning about what factors contribute the decline of yellow cedar which used to widely exist in northwestern North America, gives three different reasons to explain yellow cedars declination; in the lecture, the professor however, sets forth another three r
14、easons to contradict what were mentioned in the reading part.First of all, an evidence cited in the reading suggests that insect parasites could be on major reason that causes declination in yellow cedars populations. Because the beetle larvae have to subsist on eating wood, bark of the tree; that i
15、s really bad for the trees health. Relatively, to refute that view mentioned in reading part, the professor in the lecture argues that the constitution of yellow cedars bark contains a kind of toxic chemical, which could kill insects who bite the bark of yellow cedar; therefore, the parasite cannot
16、be such foolish that to suicide by eating bark.Moreover, bears are regarded as another factors attributed to the declination of trees. Because, narrated in the part, bears aggressive feeding habit, to eat tree barks that are abundant to sugar, could destroy trees. However, the professor explains that yellow cedar widely exists in northwestern North America, includes island and mainland. Trees in the island without threat given by b
