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1、,To polish your writing让你的作文“亮”起来,Teaching aims,words & phrases,sentencepatterns,passage,languagestructurecontent,书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求,第五档（21-25分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务:准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式 所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档（16-20分） 完成了试题规定的任务:比较准确、清楚地表达了
2、短文的内容应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂语言结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。,第三档（11-15分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏， 没有写自己的认识应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。,Lets look at ourselves,读文找错因,the problem we have,1 Can not use set phr
3、ases correctly,On (the) one hand On the other handtreat sb as,2 Ignore the part of word,wrongEnglish is interestIt is no true,trueEnglish is interestingIt is not true,Can not divide the whole passage into paragraphs correctly 4 Can not use some linking words correctly.5 Handwriting is poor,How can w
4、e solve these problems,研读促提升,What makes a good composition?,A good composition is usually made up of an introduction paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a conclusion paragraph.,Introduction paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Body Supporting Paragraph 2Conclusion paragraph Personally, in conclusi
5、on, in brief, From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that .,What makes a good paragraph?,A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences.,There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their nests in
6、trees or holes in the rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all,topic sentence,Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of
7、 different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water.,Topic sentence:_,just like a garden.,Our school is,just like a garden.,Our school is,A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.,I believe English is more important than other fo
8、reign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2
9、008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, ,Use linking words correctly,时间先后：,First, then, later, in the end, eventually,since then, after a while,转折关系：,but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless,因果关系：,because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result
10、of, due to,让步关系：,though, although, even if, even though, in spite of, as,递进关系：,whats more, in addition, furthermoreon the one hand on the other hand,条件关系：,if, unless, as long as, on condition that ,表 列 举：,for example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other words, as follows,表 总 结：,in sho
11、rt, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated,点练重衔接,Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Somestudents live a very expensive life _. _, they hope to look
12、 smart and special. _, they want to win others admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . _, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life . _ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those p
13、oor children in rural areas can return to school._, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank you for listening!,the reasons why they do so are as follows B. firstly C. last but not least D. whats more E. as far as I am concerned F. Secondly,A,B,C,D,E,F,A goo
14、d paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.,丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。,e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !,感叹句,强调句,e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.,e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. The
15、re comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.,e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.,e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.,倒装句,省略句,with短语,e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.,
