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1、题目： Directions: Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness. In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake
2、to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention. Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially
3、 the youth. How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion. Come and join us in volunteer
4、work right now! On Volunteer黄昕彤 辽宁省鞍山市鞍山一中 108 班 The definition of the word volunteer in Lougnan（Longman） Dictionary is someone who helps others sponstaneously（spontaneously） and willingly. Thats true! Life is a style of enjoying yourself, not only by entertaing and enriding yourself, but also by th
5、e process of helping others. Undoubtfully, those volunteers reveal their great love and passion for their country. Love is the eternal theme of the world, Without hove(love), its like birds without wings, failing to show its talents of flying, Its like spring without flowers, burying is charming fra
6、grants in the deep soil. Their volunty work unites China, shouing the world how united Chinese people are shocking the world of its cooperation. People around the country are making their efforts to helping others, which leaves the world an impression that China is a veal country, and all the people
7、 here are like brothers and sisters, who cares a lot for others. You can never imagine how touched I was when I watched the TV program called “Moving China”. 13 peasants from tangshang volunteered to help those victims of Sichuang on hearing the tremendous earthquake happened there, leaving all thei
8、r farm work done in the field they sacrifiled anything and helped others at any cost, for they knew the glant pains the earthquake brings to people. They can never forget how much pains they havendertaken in the earthquake and how much help they have received from the world. They compared their own
9、feelings to the victims and passed the splrit on. In this sense, people will pass the spirit from generation to queneration, from China to all over the world. Then, how sweet will the World be! I have a dream that one day, I will be a member of the volunteer team. I have a dream that oneday, Ill mak
10、e contributions to China however slightest it may be. I have a dream that one day Ill be a founder of a world Charity, helping people all over the world. Im firmly convinced that it will not only be a drean for me, but also a drean for people all over China, all over the world, and for the great Glo
11、bal Village.专家建议： 整篇文章条理清晰，结构完整，总体感觉很好。但有个别语法错误，固定搭配有些用得不够准确，建议多用课本学过的固定搭配或是词组造句。 专家点评： 文章语言流畅，运用了修辞手法，展现出一定的语言功底。此外，论据生动有力，让人信服。如果句子之间的多用些关联词就更好了。陈茜 江苏省哈尔滨市第三中学高三 18 班 Dear grandfather: How are you? I am writing to invite you to join us, in the next year, to be a voluntear in the great event, which
12、 is to hold in Shanghai. We, a generation born in the 90s in our city, have made a team to do the volunteer work. And you are welcomed by all our team members awing to your great amount of knowledge about Chinese traditions and culture. Please dont tell me you are too old to do this job. I believe y
13、ou are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explannation of the importance of the volunteer work. Nowadays, volunteer work, which has raised public interest and concern, is becomming more and more popular throughout the world. As is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaning
14、ful but also necessary. One my personal wete, whats more, its interesting and pleasant! It help us develop oursel . Firstly, for individuals, especially those young, to do volunteer work is an awailuabe wany to goin social experience. By doing volunteer work, they can meet vorrious people and they m
15、ay run across all kinds of troubles. They however, can become mature and determined by solving these problems. You know, no pains, no gains. Also, individuals will realize that they do make a difference in someone elses life, even the whole event, the world! Their confidence can be rovised and confi
16、dence is what it takes to do any job well. For families, if youre the side that received the help of the volunteers, of couse your issue will be more easily dealt with. If youre the side who give others your hand, you will realize there exists no better way to educate your children that “a virtwre deserues amother” because youll get the best present - smile deeply from ones heart, in the whole world. It is a great chance for all members getting closer to each oth
