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1、【写作辅导】大学英语四六级考试作文闪光点 排行榜 收藏 打印 发给朋友 举报 来源：本站原创 发布者：webmaster 热度 49 票 【共 0 条评论】【我要评论】 时间：2010 年 8 月 18 日 14:17 作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本 的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使 你的作文如虎添翼!高分作文标志:1 ：是否长短句交叉;2 、是否会使用插入语;3 、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使 用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词; 5 、句型使用 是否准确、地道
2、。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用 we / I (比 如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 Attention should be paid to. ) 举 个经典结尾 2004 年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so ，its competitive e
3、dge will be sharpened effectively.2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、 动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动 词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think,people, o
4、pinion 等等) 比如上面例子中，applicable 替换 proper, approaches 替 换 ways, implement 替换 carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge 替换 enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14 分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各 类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文 有了很大的提高。Computer and I ( By Simmy )沪江I never forget the exceedi
5、ngly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole
6、world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 verythrilling 替换 excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.google 替换 searchan army of 替换 a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and techno
7、logy, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期 发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popularCoincident
8、with 非常地道的句型，表达“与 一致”的意思，替换 With Advancement 替换 developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into ) 替换 enter intoCurrent ( currently ) 替换 nowAppeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的 沪江四六级For a start, we can, freely
9、, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin withWe can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作
10、手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动Additionally 替换 In addition / BesidesDeliver 替换 send There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures,
11、AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先 There is no denying that 这个句型，还有 however 作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm toEmerging 替换 appear
12、ing ( fading 替换 disappearing )Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No g
13、arden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sidesComputers do play ，do 强调Positive 替换 important / good 等A slice of 替换 a part ofUnfavorable 替换 badImpacts 替换 effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语Fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage )
14、 Facet 替换 aspect以下是 30 个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下:1.individuals,characters, folks 替换(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy ( 美好的)，promising(有希望的) ，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill ( 有害的) 替换 bad如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive
15、 替换eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 沪江四六级4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitud
16、e of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换 many.注：用 many, if not most 一定要小心，many 后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用 most, if not all ,替换 most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several 替换 some6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that) 替 think(因为是书面语，所以要加 that)7:affair ,business ,matter 替换 thing8: shared 代 common9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many be
