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1、美联英语提供： SAT有效写作方法案例分析两分钟做个小测试，看看你的英语水平http:/ 作文呢 ?今天，太傻网考试频道就给大家搜集整理了SAT有效写作方法案例分析，供考生们参考!以上内容是OG中Let There Be Dark这篇文章的第一段，作者将以前自己对于夜晚黑暗的感受和现在美国人造光源逐渐替代黑暗的现实加以对比，以这样的方式突出现在的黑暗正在逐渐消失，以引起读者足够的关注。可以看出，这是一段短小清晰的文字，但是对于没有经历过足够考试练习的同学来说，他们的笔下则会出现很冗长的表述，例如： The author mentioned At my familys cabin on a Mi
2、nnesota lake, I knew woods so dark that my hands disappeared before my eyes. I knew night skies in which meteors left smoky trails across sugary spreads of stars. Through this content, the author is stating his childhood memory toward darkness and throws this specific feeling to the readers. However
3、, the author also mentioned But now, when 8 of 10 children born in the United States will never know a sky dark enough for the Milky Way. to tell readers the nowadays situation is totally difference from others. Thus, readers may have the worries about the disappearing darkness in this modern world
4、and give sufficient concern on this issue and solutions.从上面的文章可以看出：这名同学所写的段落字数已经超过了文体本身，但是却仅仅表达了这段文字所需要表达的内容一半不到，更多时间都消耗在文章内容的重复叙述上，而没有更多来自于他自己对于作者思想每一个环节的解析，所以最后只能做到“吃力不讨好”的结局。 我们再来分析一下官方所给出的满分范文中的行文：Bogard starts his article off by recounting a personal story a summer spent on a Minnesota lake whe
5、re there was “woods so dark that his hands disappeared before his eyes.” In telling this brief anecdote, Bogard challenges the audience to remember a time where they could fully amass themselves in natural darkness void of artificial light. By drawing in his readers with a personal encounter about n
6、ight darkness, the author means to establish the potential for beauty, glamour, and awe-inspiring mystery that genuine darkness can possess. He builds his argument for the preservation of natural darkness by reminiscing for his readers a first-hand encounter that proves the “irreplaceable value of d
7、arkness.” This anecdote provides a baseline of sorts for readers to find credence with the authors claims.这是官方所给出的24分满分范文的一段，从这个内容中，我们能够明显感觉到作者减少了对于文章内容的表述，而是更多的建立在对于内容的分析和解读上，并且淋漓尽致的进行了客观性写作的输出，所以在对应写作给分的标准上做到了很好的发挥。这也是这篇文章被给予满分的原因。同时，这篇文章与上述一名同学的文章构成了鲜明的对比，同学们可以通过这个对比来更加清楚的了解行文的高效率重心在何处。综上所述，美国人所出的作文是按照他们自己的评分标准来给分的，同时对方也已经在作文的范文中展现了这种评分标准是如何做到。所以，我们建议同学们通过对官方作文进行再写作，并且将自己的作文和官方所给出的高分范文相对比，按照官方范文的方式来精简非重要的内容，同时加大自己的写作分析比例，从而实现写作效率和质量同时提升的目的。两分钟做个小测试，看看你的英语水平http:/
