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1、,Writing Practice,How do you feel today? Happy or unhappy?,Happy garden,Happy farm,What do you know about the pictures?They are all from a popular game Happy Farm. In the game, we canPlant trees/flowers; pick fruits; go fishing; raise some animals; even run a restaurantHow do you think about Happy F
2、arm?,开心农场（Happy Farm）是一个比较热门的网络游戏，在一个属于你的农场里，你可以种植各种蔬菜和瓜果，还可以养家畜和宠物。偶尔，你可以采摘别人的果子，享受不劳而获的乐趣。请你结合以下观点谈谈自己的看法。,注意：1.只能选择写一种观点，赞同或不赞同； 除提示外还可适当扩展内容； 2.词数：120 左右,The steps of writing,人称,时态,文体,第一人称,一般现在时,议论文,(一)审试题，定基调。,( 二) 列要点、注短语。,Be bad for our health,1.A waste of time and energy,2.unreal pleasure,3.
3、Have a bad/ negative effect on ,1.Relax ourselves; Entertain ourselves,2.Keep in touch with net friends; keep in contact with net friends;,3.Do no harm to be not harmful to,(三)谴词造句,we can relax and entertain ourselves in the game.,2. we can keep in contact with our net friends in this way.,3. it doe
4、s no harm to society; /it is not harmful to society;,touch,(三)谴词造句,2. what we get from the game is unreal pleasure.,3. picking others fruits may have a negative effect on the development of our personalities,1. it is bad for our health if we spend too much time playing the game and it is also a wast
5、e of time and energy.,(四)添加过渡词，句,连词成句，连句成段,we can relax and entertain ourselves in the game. we can keep in contact with our net friends in this way. it does no harm to society.,First,Second,Third,For another thing,For one thing,Whats more，,(四)添加过渡词，句,连词成句，连句成段,it is bad for our health if we spend t
6、oo much time playing the game and it is also a waste of time and energy. what we get from the game is unreal pleasure. picking others fruits may have a negative effect on the development of our personalities.,First,Besides,What is worse,(五)通读全文、检查修改。,1. 要点是否齐全；2. 主谓结构是否在，是否一致；3. 动词时态语态是否正确；始终关注：人称是否
7、运用得当；首字母大小写；标点符号；卷面,A sample writing,ourselves in the game.Second, we can keep in contact with our net friends. Third, it does no harm to society.,With Happy Farm becoming more and more popular among netizens, many teenagers have joined in the game. I like to play the game too.,I think there are thr
8、ee advantages of playing the game.,In my opinion,As far as I am concerned,some fruits if we are tired of studying.,In this way we will watch out for others gardens, farms,We often leave messages or present,After all, it is a virtual world, so everything we do has no actual effects on our real life.,
9、gifts to each other.,We can go fishing or pick,or restaurants.,First, we can relax and entertain,With Happy Farm becoming more and more popular among netizens, many teenagers have joined in the game. I like to play the game too. As far as I am concerned, there are three advantages of playing the gam
10、e. First, we can relax and entertain ourselves in the game. We can go fishing or pick some fruits if we are tired of studying.,Second, we can keep in contact with our net friends. In this way we will watch out for others gardens, farms or restaurants. We often leave messages or present gifts to each
11、 other. Third, it does no harm to society. After all, it is a virtual world, so everything we do has no actual effects on our real life.,A sample writing,it is bad for our health if we spend too much time playing the game and it is also a waste of time and energy. what we get from the game is unreal
12、 pleasure. picking others fruits may have a negative effect on the development of our personalities.,With Happy Farm becoming more and more popular among netizens, many teenagers have joined in the game. However, I am against playing the game. I think there are three disadvantages of playing the gam
13、e.,Personally, it is unwise for us students to join in Happy Farm.,First,Besides,What is worse,With Happy Farm becoming more and more popular among netizens, many teenagers have joined in the game. However, I am against playing the game. I think there are three disadvantages of playing the game. Fir
14、st,it is bad for our health if we spend too much time playing the game and it is also a waste of time and energy.,Besides, what we get from the game is unreal pleasure. What is worse, picking others fruits may have a negative effect on the development of our personalities. Personally, it is unwise for us students to join in Happy Farm.,Homework,Copy this composition in exercise book after finish polishing.,Thank you,
