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1、读后续写四维度探究,开篇,评分标准要求续写内容与所给短文融洽度高，内容、语法结构和词汇丰富、准确性高，也就是续写内容要与原文尽量做到内容、结构和语言的协同。,读后续写评分标准,评分标准详细版,01,抓住基本要素，理清故事脉络,02,分析人物性格，明晰情节发展,03,赏析文本语言，习得文本表达,04,整体总结分析，确定续写方向与框架,抓住基本要素，理清故事脉络,01,首先，解读阅读文本，关注文本的文体和文体特征，按照原文内容、情节发展续写文章，促进内容和情节的协同。,故事情节图（记叙文）,通过分析主题，明确文章主题，续写不能偏离主题,2013,2012,2011,地点,时间,事情的起因,事情的经
2、过,人物,事情的结果,时间线索,空间线索,厘清记叙文的六要素,A Wise Deer a tiger; a jackal(胡狼),in the tigers cave,Mother deer was trying to lead her fawns out of the tigers cave when she saw the tiger coming back.,What happened,to scare the tiger away by pretending to be a fierce animal waiting to kill it for food.,Mother deer,t
3、he tiger,While escaping, the tiger came across a jackal, who suggested they go back to the cave to find out the truth. The tiger didnt believe in the Jackal,What happened,Jackal suggested knotting their tails together and walking towards the cave together.,the tiger,the jackal,What happened next?,Pa
4、ra.1 Thedeersawthejackalandthetiger comingtogether. Para.2 Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisand hewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim.,分析人物性格，明晰情节发展,02,研读文本，分析文中人物的性格继而推断情节的发展。 对人物性格的掌握有助于续写中对人物准确、生动的描写。 从人物的动作、言语中和他人的评价中来分析人物的性格特点。,根据原文描述，分析人物性格,Mother deer,the tiger,jackal,很聪明和勇敢,胆小怕事,狡猾，同时从老虎的言语中可知老虎不信任胡狼,t
5、he tiger,clever / smart / intelligent, brave, stay calm in danger,cowardly, timid,Mother deer,the jackal,cunning (狡猾的)， not reliable in the eyes of the tiger,How frightened would the deer feel when seeing the tiger and the jackal coming?,Would the tiger have a peaceful talk with the fierce animal si
6、nce he was afraid to be eaten by him?,Was he easily fooled? If he heard he would be eaten, would he believe it and get scared?,赏析文本语言，习得文本表达,03,“内容要创造，语言要模仿，创造与模仿要紧密结合。(王初明) 挖掘文本语言表达风格，模仿原文语言写句子。使续写部分的语言风格与原文的风格相一致，以促进语言协同。,The deer raised her voice and shouted, “My deer youngchildren do not weep. I
7、 shall capture(捕捉 ) a tiger for you toeat. You can have a good dinner.”,模仿并续写： She shouted towards her children standing inside the cave，“My dear children, I requested my friend, the clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us.”,分类整理并积累材料、摘抄好词好句,整体总结分析，确定续写方向与框架,04,续写不是随心所欲、任意的发挥，而是研读文本后根据所提供的两段段首的内容进行
8、创造续写。人物性格和情节创设要与原文相吻合。,段首对续写起到一定的导向和限制作用。第一段续写内容可以根据已知情节和第二段段首句推断第一段可能的情节发展。同时第一段的段尾又要和第二段段首紧密衔接。,根据所给材料和两段段首内容，发散思维提出疑问，最后通过识别和分析每种故事续写的合理性，依据自己的价值倾向最终确定续写的结尾。,故事结尾不仅要使文章结局合理，而且要渲染、升华主题。最后，文末以“Presence of mind and intelligence can save one from dangerous situations.”升华主题。此外，根据生活常识、社会经验和背景知识，合理地丰富故事
9、情节和写作细节。,阅读文学原著，培养语感和文学修养,积累记叙文、故事方面的词汇、句型和语段,重视细节描写，以动作描写、语言描写和心理描写为主,以恰当的外貌描写和环境描写为辅,备考具体做法,There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain. Many kinds of animals lived in the forest. A deer was eating grass and leaves with her two young ones. The young ones wandered happily here and there. Th
10、e deer followed her fawns(幼鹿) into a cave. The deer was frightened because it was a tigers cave. There were bones of dead animals all over the cave. Fortunately, the tiger was not inside the cave at the time. The deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave when she heard a loud roar. She
11、saw the tiger at a distance coming towards the cave. It was dangerous to go out of the cave now. She thought of a plan. The deer raised her voice and shouted, “My deer young children do not weep. I shall capture(捕捉) a tiger for you to eat. You can have a good dinner.”,附录原文,The tiger heard these word
12、s and became frightened. He thought, “Whose is that strange voice from the cave? A dangerous animal is staying inside to capture me. I shall run away to escape death.” The tiger began to run away from there as fast as possible.A jackal(胡狼) saw the running tiger. “Why are you running in great fear?”
13、the jackal asked. The tiger said, “My friend, a powerful and fierce animal is in my cave. The young ones are crying for a tiger to eat. The mother is promising to capture a tiger for them. So, I am running away.”The cunning jackal was now sure the tiger was a coward(懦夫). It said, “Dont be afraid. No
14、 animal is fiercer or stronger than a tiger Let us go together to find out.”But the tiger said, “I do not want to take a chance. You may run away. I will be left alone to die. So, I will not come with you.”The jackal said, “Trust me. Let us knot (打结) our tails together. Then I will not be able to leave you.” The tiger agreed unwillingly to this proposal. So the jackal tied their tails in a knot. Now they walked towards the cave together.,谢谢,
