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1、1 #2021.3.10高一应用文高一应用文申请信讲评申请信讲评 原题原题：(2020 天津红桥) 假设你是李津，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组 织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教 (tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。请你写一 封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍；2.参加意图；3.希望获准。 注意： 1.词数不少于 80 字；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 范文范文： Dear sir or Madam, Im Li Jin, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the adver
2、tisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language. I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and Id like to get this job. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and Im excellent at it. Besides, Ive been learning
3、 English for 12 years with a good command of spoken and written English. Im willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours. Looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 金王逸同学高分范文： Dear sir/mad
4、am, Knowing that you are in desperate need of Chinese tutors, I think Im the right person for this job. I am Li Jin , a senior high school student from China,who has profound knowledge（知识渊（知识渊 博）博）and good understanding of Chinese. （同位语从句，对自己进行进一步的介绍）Im qualified for （胜任胜任=be equal to） the job for t
5、he following reasons. First， I have rich experience about how to teach Chinese, for (=because) I ever was a Chinese tutor. (理由一：介绍自己有相 关经历） Also, with accomplished spoken skills(熟练的口语技能熟练的口语技能）and humorous talking, Im sure that I can teach students well and we can even be friends. (理由二：介绍自己的语言能力和 2
6、性格）Not only can this job have access to practising my spoken Chinese, but it also enables us to bridge the gap and spread Chinese culture. (参加意图） It would be appreciated a lot if you could consider me as the candidate. Please reply to me at your earliest convenience. Yours, Li Hua 申请信必用表达和句式申请信必用表达和
7、句式 开头：用 so.that.倒装句句型来表达自己对此职位的感兴趣。 E.g. Knowing that you are in need /demand of xxx, so attracted / interested am I that Im writing to apply for it = that Im eager to be one of your members. 正文：介绍自己的时候，需要分层次去讲：一般自己介绍包括：语言能力，性格特点，相关 经历等，具体看申请什么。 语言能力：Ive been studying English for more than 10 years
8、so Im proficient in spoken=oral English=Ihaveagoodcommandofspoken=oralEnglish,whichenablesmeto interact=communicate with sb. Without any difficulty. 如果需要体现自己的中文能力的申请信（如申请做中文助教）就用 Im a Chinese native speaker .= Chinese is my mother tongue 即可，不需要再多废话了。 性格特点： creative, outgoing, enthusiastic =passionat
9、e(热情的） ,friendly=easy to get along with =accessible (好相处的，随和的） 相关经历: 自己编造一个， 一定要用过去式去表述。 E.g I once took part in Asian Games as a volunteer when I was in middle school，so I believe Im quite qualified for this job. 另外正文还需要写申请的目的，千万不要提到赚钱这种意义，价值观不对；如果是申请做志 愿者可以写 gain social experience （积累社会经验） ，lend h
10、ands to those in need （帮助有需 要的人） ；涉及到国外的或者和英语搭边的申请信还可以写 have a further/deeper/better understanding of foreign cultures=have a deeper insight into foreign culture （对外国文化有更好 的了解） ；broaden my horizons =expand my range of vision (开拓视野） 。 最后，正文段一定需要加入过渡词，这是评分标准之一。开头可以用 to begin with,= first and foremost,
11、 其次可以用 besides,= in addition,= moreover,=furthermore,=whats more,=apart from that,最后可以用 in brief,= last but certainly not least 介绍自己或者表明申请意图的时候不用忘记加入 not only.but also.的倒装句。 结尾：Thank you for your time and patience, and I would greatly appreciate it if you could grant me an interview. 给我背诵这句话。 3 拓展拓展
12、 （1） 假定你是李华，你打算申请校英语报编辑职位，请列举 23 条你的申请理由。 Firstly，I fell in love with your English Paper the first time I reads it and have been being a devoted reader of the newspaper since then. Second, I am interested in both writing and English. Therefore, I think the position is a perfect combination of the tw
13、o aspects. Finally, I hope to make friends with those who have more experience in editing a newspaper, from whom I will surely learn a lot. （2） 假定你是李华，你打算申请国际中学生环保夏令营，请列举 23 条你的申请理由。 Firstly，I think it a rare opportunity to link my interest with social experience since I hear the campers will spend
14、two weeks making investigations in urban and rural areas in Southeast Asia. Second, I expect to improve my spoken English through the activity. As you may know, I dont have many occasions to practice speaking English. Last but not the least, I. Second, I am interested in both writing and English. Th
15、erefore, I think the position is a perfect combination of the two aspects. Finally, I hope to make friends with those who have more experience in editing a newspaper, from whom I will surely learn a lot. （3） 假定你是李华，你校将接待一批美国中学参观团，你打算申请校英语引导员，请列举 23 条你的申请理由。 Above all, I am a senior three student, so
16、 I am familiar with the history of our school, so I believe the visitor will be glad to hear my vivid introduction of our school.Second, I am good at English, especially spoken English. As the Champion of the 5thCampus English Debate Competition, I am confident of my ability in communication with American visitors. The most important reason is to do something for my dear home school before my graduation to express my gratitude to all the help and support form my teachers and classmates. （2018 年
