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1、策略三高级词汇,高考英语书面表达评分标准鼓励考生使用高级词汇。但使用高级词汇并不等于使用一些偏难、古怪的词汇,而是使用一些表意准确、形象生动、语法正确且符合英美国家人们惯用表达方式的词汇。在使用时,应遵循以下原则:高级但不造作,多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。考生可以尝试如下方法:词性多样化,同义词多样化,遣词贴切细致,造句独辟蹊径,恰当运用修辞等。,典例(2015四川高考)假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。 1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿; 2.说明你能胜任辅导的理
2、由; 3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议; 4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。 注意: 1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。,Hi,Sharon, This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. Li Xia,【参考范文】 Hi,Sharon, This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am qui
3、te interested in it.Ill be honored to help you with your Mandarin learning.I think Im qualified to be your teacher.Im good at speaking standard Mandarin.Ive been a broadcaster in the schools broadcasting station for years.So Im quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin. When it es to how to
4、 speak fluent Mandarin,I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first,which is quite different from English pronunciation rules.Another suggestion is to practice speaking.As one saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”,However,My English is just OK and I have many problems in my study.I
5、really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English.I believe we both can make much progress with each others help. Thank you! Li Xia,【思路点拨】 试题要求根据提示用英语给Sharon写一封邮件。题中要求要点明确,应该根据要点扩句、组句。写作时应注意准确运用人称、时态,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系。按照试题中的要点提示构建文章结构。 1.表达意愿。可参考结构:Ill be honored to,be qualified to,
6、be interested in等。 2.说明理由。可参考结构:be good at.;Im quite confident that.等。 3.给出建议。可参考结构:When it es to.;I suggest that.;As one saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”等。 4.提出需求。可参考句型:I have many problems in.;I really hope that you can give me some advice on.等。,(一)(2016银川一中月考) 假如你是李华,你的笔友Mike从电视上得知前段时间北京多个地方
7、出现雾霾(haze),非常担心,发邮件询问有关情况,请根据以下要点做出回复: 1.实况描述; 2.对生活造成的影响; 3.成因简析与教训; 4.你个人的情况。 要求: 1.词数100左右; 2.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear Mike, Thank you very much for your concern. Regards! Yours, Li Hua,【参考范文】 Dear Mike, Thank you very much for your concern.Last month several places in Beijing were blanketed with th
8、ick yellow fog.Everything around disappeared from our sight.Some highways were closed.Traffic jams were monly seen in the streets.Many people,especially children and seniors,even found it difficult to breathe.As a result,local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and
9、lungs. Part of the cause was the dry weather,but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare.,Personally I didnt get any health problems in the haze because I stayed mostly indoors.But to make a significant change we really have to do more to protect our environment.To live
10、a better life we have to push on with the economy,but it would be meaningless if we have to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air. Regards! Yours, Li Hua,(二)(2016山西晋中四校期中联考) 假如你是李华,你的美国网友Peter打算到中国留学,他写信询问怎样才能受到中国高校的青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信: 1.语言是道硬门槛; 2.适应能力很重要; 3.看重兴趣爱好。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.开头语和结束语已
11、为你写好,不计入总词数。,Dear Peter, In your letter you mentioned how to get the preference of Chinese universities. Best wishes and good luck! Yours, Li Hua,【参考范文】 Dear Peter, In your letter you mentioned how to get the preference of Chinese universities.I believe there would be three main aspects to be taken
12、into account. Initially,having a good mand of Chinese is a basic need to live in China.With this ability,you can municate with native speakers easily and have access to abundant resources.Moreover,it is vital to adapt to the new environment instantly.The sooner you can get used to the new environmen
13、t,the more beneficial it will bee to you.Last but not least,personal interests and hobbies are also highly valued.You should choose a major that you want to devote yourself to.,With all the strengths I mentioned above,I am sure you can overe all the difficulties and make greater progress in China. Best wishes and good luck! Yours, Li Hua,
